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ff: The promise of love(chapters 50,51,52) (Page 104)

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CHAPTER 52

 Viren was quick and he held her by her wrist..and pulled her close to him..nivi tried to pull herself away..but viren was not ready to let go..

"niveditha.." he called hugging her from the back and putting his hands on her waist..

Nivi felt her anger wash away the instant he called her name..

"I was talking about this payal.." nivi looked up to see the payal hanging from his hand..

Nivi couldn't believe her eyes..it was her payal..the one she lost wen she was in delhi..she had completely forgotten about it..nivi was not sure whether she should laugh or cry..but before she knew her eyes had filled itself with tears..

How could she have thought that viren could do such a thing as keeping some one elsez payal..and whatever he said..

Viren made her turn around and nivi found it hard to meet his gaze and she looked down..

Viren touched her chin and slowly made her look at him..he smiled at her..

"viren..i'm sorry..patha nahi mujhe kya hogaya..i never knew that I would react like that..i felt ma heart break into a million pieces when u mentioned ur desire to meet some other girl..the more u mentioned about the payal the more I felt my heart break..and I thought that the pain would never stop..and I might never be able to gather the pieces..how could I be so foolish..viren mein apne aap ko rok nahi saki..mein.."

Niviz tears were continuously flowing down..and viren felt his heart twist in pain..it was now virenz turn to come across the feeling of ones heart breaking into pieces…he couldn't bear to hear her and he stopped nivi from continuing by placing his finger on her lips..

"y should u be sorry..sorry for something that has made my heart beat a thousand times faster..niveditha is possessive wen it comes to viren..and that she wont let him think about anyone else.. wat else does viren need to be happy.."

"bas karo viren please..i shouldn't have reacted like that..and I think we should go now.." said nivi..as she wanted to run away from there..

But viren stopped her saying.. "wat..??kya tumne teek se suna nahi..i have a payal and wen I find the girl to whom it belongs I would love to see the payal on her ankle.."

"viren…I don't think now is the rite time.."

"acha…u think so..but I think now is the perfect time.."

He kneeled down in front of nivi, took niviz hand and placed it on his shoulder and slowly took her foot in his hand and placed it on his knee..As he touched her,nivi felt herself shiver under his touch..she looked into his eyes..Viren slowly fixed the payal on her ankle..viren was in no hurry and he was taking all the time he needed..nivi couldn't stop smiling as she tried to pull her leg back..but it seemed that viren had not finished and he had other plans on his mind..

Viren started to stroke her toe slowly and nivi felt butterflies in her stomach and she closed her eyes unable to look at him.. As he kept playing with her foot, niviz hands automatically moved from his shoulder to his head and she started playing with his hair, gently stroking it..

Nivi was completely lost and it took nivi by surprise when she felt his lips on her ankle..nivi didn't need to open her eyes to understand wat viren was upto..and she didn't dare to..she didn't know her toe was this sensitive as she felt a weird and unknown sensation shoot up her body..viren placed a wet kiss on her ankle and nivi felt the area burn and she held his hair tightly giving herself away..as she knew with that simple act she couldn't hide the feeling that he evoked in her..but she pulled herself together and said.." viren..please.."

Viren was in no mood to stop..but when he heard her voice he decided to put an end to the wild ideas that was crossing his mind..

Viren smiled and he slowly placed her foot back on the ground and stood up..nivi still had her eyes closed..viren came closer to her and she could feel his warm breath on her face..he inched his face closer and rubbed the tip of his nose on to hers. She gasped but the sides of her lips curved..viren was lost looking at her lips when she opened her eyes and pushed him breaking the trance..

"bas viren..time tho dekho..thank god kisine dhekha nahi..varna kya sochthe..where do you get these ideas..??" nivi didn't wait for an answer and ran back inside the house..

"viren sood is always full of ideas..and kaise koi dekh letha hum dhonon..this was a private meeting and I planned it.." viren said looking back at nivi..

Nivi laughed.. if only she had turned bac..she could have seen the passion in virenz eyes..passion that could set everything around him on fire..

If only both of them had turned bac, they could have seen a pair of eyes watching them.. Isabel stood there with hatred in her eyes..hatred that could set everything around them on fire..

 

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Posted: 28 November 2011 at 11:16am | IP Logged
hi neetika sweety...yes after a long time..i'm bac...missed u guys..hop u r well..even i hav so much catching up to do..so much to read..

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Posted: 28 November 2011 at 11:24am | IP Logged
awesome updates like always Jez dear...thanks for the triple dhamaka...the wait we did for your updates is worth of it yaar...somehow in CCBM i always loved and adored Dadi and Nivi's interaction and talking about NivRen we can't describe how adorable they are ...Isable is upto no good yaar...god know what's going on in her mind...evil girl...but who cares till NivRen love each other  

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Posted: 28 November 2011 at 11:26am | IP Logged
and one more thing the last chapter of your update was very romantic dear...it made me feel shyEmbarrassedBlushing...awesome update yaar

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Posted: 28 November 2011 at 11:30am | IP Logged
that was a warm welcom indeed..very glad that u are not angry with me..after all i took a pretty long break..thank u so much dear..luv u..and i will be reading ur updates also..and comment later..oh..i hav so much catching up to do..

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Posted: 28 November 2011 at 11:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by daffodils06

that was a warm welcom indeed..very glad that u are not angry with me..after all i took a pretty long break..thank u so much dear..luv u..and i will be reading ur updates also..and comment later..oh..i hav so much catching up to do..

how can i get angry from you dear? i can understand that you might have got busy...

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Originally posted by daffodils06

that was a warm welcom indeed..very glad that u are not angry with me..after all i took a pretty long break..thank u so much dear..luv u..and i will be reading ur updates also..and comment later..oh..i hav so much catching up to do..

how can i get angry from you dear? i can understand that you might have got busy...
luv u sweety..Smile

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am happy that u r back sweet heart...missed u and ur lovely ff to the core...but v got both sweet back ;) ;) :)and hope u r fine... and i read ur update it was awesome and lovely asusual...keep on writing sweet heart...love u :) with lots of love,
janu :)

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