Chaand Chupa Badal Mein


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Chaand Chupa Badal Mein

ff: The promise of love(chapters 50,51,52) (Page 103)

vishdeepraju Newbie

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 6:45am | IP Logged
 Where r u ? Pls continue ur ff. very eager to read ur ff.

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minu2011 Senior Member

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Posted: 25 October 2011 at 9:19pm | IP Logged
Hi Jez.  Its been a long time.  Hoping you will update soon.

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-SilverDragon- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 October 2011 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
Yh please continue soon it's been a long time since you updated please continue. Smile

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-SilverDragon- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 November 2011 at 4:14pm | IP Logged

Please continue soon.Smile

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-SilverDragon- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 November 2011 at 3:23pm | IP Logged
Please continue soon I am missing your FF so much.Smile

Edited by Nivren123 - 24 November 2011 at 3:40pm

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daffodils06 Goldie

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Posted: 28 November 2011 at 11:11am | IP Logged

A very big hi…and an even bigger sorry…sorry for not updating the ff all these days..something big and important came up my way and I couldn't let it go.. i was so busy all these days..sorry once again..if I kept u waiting..thank u so much for not giving up on the ff..luv u all..Smile




It was the day of the haldi.. Nivi was standing near the window looking out.. Eventhough the morning breeze brought with it a calming effect..nivi was restless.. As the wedding was so near, just like every other girl, nivi was also tensed.. a tension she had never felt was not the same tension that she felt before any exam, competition or result..

As she was gathering her disturbed thoughts, niviz dadi came in.. Nivi was so lost that she hardly noticed her dadiz eyes fixed upon her and those eyes were getting wet..

It was wen her dadi caressed her forhead that she was brought back to reality..

"Are you afraid..??" asked dadi..

"Mmm.." nivi looked into her dadiz eyes..


"Patha nahi dadi..mere saath sab kuch acha ho raha hai…ki mujhe darr lag rahi hai ki kahi.." nivi couldn't complete her sentence..

"kahi kya…??" dadi urged her to continue..

Nivi looked into her dadiz questioning eyes…she had so much to say to her dadi..but she couldn't find the right words..for the first time she doubted whether her dadi would understand her..

Nivi closed her eyes as if to shut her thoughts..she knew her dadi was waiting for an answer..before she could decide on her answer she heard her dadi saying.. "shaadi ke din aa gayi tho har ladki ko darr lagthi hai.. sasuraal kithna bhi paas ho ya phir kithna bhi jaana pehchana ho..maayke se door jaane ka chintha tho har ladki ko sathaathi hai.."

"daadi…sab kuch teek hoga na..??" Nivi was so glad that her daadi understood her just like always..she felt silly for doubting  whether she will understand..

" kyun nahi..mere beti tho ithni achi hai ki uske saath sab kuch acha hi hoga.." dadi held her laadliz hand..

"par dadi..ek dost se jeevan saathi thak ka safar kya mein ache se theh kar paaoongi..kya ek beti se bahu ban jaana aasaan hogi..viren aur uske ghar waalon ko bachpan se jaanthi hoon..lekin ek pal mein aisa lag raha hai ki sab kuch naya aur anjaana hai.."

Dadi understood her worry..she smiled at her saying.. "mujhe apni beti aur parvarish dhonon pe bharosa hai.."

Nivi hugged her dadi..she felt better after pouring out her heart..after all it was her dadi who knew her inside out..

Dadi asked Nivi to get ready on time.. dadi and the elders were going to the Sood mansion.. the haldi ceremony was taking place at the Soods as per Dadasahibz wish..

Nivi changed in to a simple yellow lehenga..She hardly wore any jewelery.. the glow on Niviz face told that she didn't need any..

Both Nivi and Divya were ready and they were sitting with Sasha and the others in the living room of the sharmas..

Sasha pulled nivi to one side and said.. " mere saath aana.."

Before nivi could say anything Sasha pulled nivi to the back courtyard..

"sasha..wat happened..?? y did u bring me here..??" asked nivi..

"Just wait here nivi..I will be back.. just don't go anywhere.."

Nivi wondered as to what was Sasha upto..

Just as she left, nivi felt someone behind her..before she could turn around she found herself in a tight embrace..

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daffodils06 Goldie

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Posted: 28 November 2011 at 11:12am | IP Logged


 Before she could turn around she found herself in a tight embrace..She didn't have to think twice to know it was viren.. No one other than him had the right to hold her like he did..His embrace gave her the feeling that she belonged only to him.. The realization that viren was so near her..while every one else was busy getting ready for the function..Eventhough it was in her nature to get tensed she couldn't stop herself from bringing a sweet smile on her face..

Viren made Nivi turn around in his arms to face him.. He took her face in his hands and stared in to her eyes. He stroked her cheek with his thumb..

She couldn't stop herself from blushing when he looked at her like that. The look that told her he had the right. Like only he had the right to look at her and get lost in the sight in front of him..

As soon as Viren set his eyes on nivi..he was lost..lost in her eyes..just lik always..for viren.. just like all the other times, he felt that nivi looked extra special this time..

Both of them were lost in each other..nivi was the first to come back and touched virenz cheek and asked.. "kya soch rahe ho..??"

Viren was looking at nivi..she hardly wore any jewelery..but she was looking as stunning as ever..and viren remembered the lines of the song..


Hai Roop Mein Itna Saadapan, Tho Kitna Sundar Hoga Mann

Bin Gahnein Aur Singaar Bina Vho Tho Lagti Hai Dulhan

Kaajal Bindiya Kangan Jhumke

O Kaajal Bindiya Kangan Jhumke

Ye Tho Guzare Zamane Hain

Taaza Taaza Kali Khili Hai Hum Uske Deewne Hain


 Thatz wen he heard niviz voice asking .. "kya soch rahe ho..??"

"kya..??Mmm..kuch nahi..bas kuch yaad aa gaya.." said viren with mischief in his eyes which nivi failed to notice..

"kya yaad aa gaya..??"

"kuch nahi..i used to think that jewelery enhances the beauty of the person who wears it..but may be I am wrong..Some may not need any jewelry at all.."

" where did u get the idea in the first place..??"

"woh bas aise hi.." said viren

Nivi was not ready to let go.. "bathao na.."

"well..if u insist..wen I was in Delhi..mujhe ek payal mila..woh payal ithne khubsoorat thi ki I was left wondering about the person whom it belonged to..She must be very beautiful..i always kept wondering hw her legs would look with the payal.."

Viren saw niviz eyes getting narrower..she had a confused look at first..she asked.. "kiske payal..??"

"I told u na I just came across it.."

"acha..tumhe kisiki payal mil gayi aur tumne uta u always take and keep things like this.." nivi was getting irritated and viren could sense it but he continued.. "not always..but this was irresistible..the payal was beautiful but more than that I just wanted to see the person..for once I even had the wild idea of making her wear the payal with ma own hands..wierd..rite..??"..

viren was finding it hard to stop himself from laughing..viren felt that nivi could burst with anger any minute now..

"tum raasthe mein pade cheezon ko lethe hi kyun..??"

"kisne kaha raasthe mein was in ma car.."

"what..??"nivi completely lost it.."

"in your car..and u don't know whose.."

"viren tumhe nahi lagtha ki kuch zyada bol rahe ho tum..??"

"kya nivi..u should see the payal..even u will be surprised..let me show u now.."

"wat??u have it now..that means u carry it along with u..just lik that.."

"ofcourse..u never know wen one will get the"

Nivi was loosing control of herself even before she realized it.. "if u got the payal in Delhi..dont u think u should search for the owner in Mr. Viren Sood don't u think u r in the wrong place..wasting your Shimla.."nivi was fuming and viren started laughing..

Nivi didn't understand anything but she was not at all in the mood to ask..She turned to walk away..


Edited by daffodils06 - 28 November 2011 at 11:13am

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edwardcullen19 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 November 2011 at 11:13am | IP Logged
res Jez dear i am so happy that you are back with your updates...will read it in 15 minutes...and please dear don't keep us hanging for such a long time

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