Originally posted by: JasNehaFanWOW another amazing chapter It was too good. I really look forward to reading your FF can't wait for the next chapter. Love it.
thank u dear..glad to hear that..π
Originally posted by: JasNehaFanWOW another amazing chapter It was too good. I really look forward to reading your FF can't wait for the next chapter. Love it.
Originally posted by: minu2011Oh Lovely!! What a beautiful chapter! Loved what Viren said and how she responded and the time they spent together...so very sweet! Yeh viren to really pagal hai nivi ke liye! Just love it! Thanks for another great read.
Originally posted by: sana4kinhaJez di..*hugs*..Woww..finally viren confessed his love..i can clearly see the passion,intensity and agressiveness in viren..i always wanted to see this shade of viren..and now it's nivi's turn to express her love..hope this raj thing will play a key role in this..thanx di..u r the best..love ya..mwah..
Originally posted by: rshree1182Loved Viren's confession..π i so sorry dear..i am speechless..
Originally posted by: nirjuuWow, amazing story, just read ur FF that too in one go... Awesome dear, i'm getting hooked to this... Plz continue soon dear...
Hope Raj won't create problems in Nivren's life... Waiting for Nivi's confession scene...
Originally posted by: minu2011omg Jez, what a fantastic chapter!!! Loved it to the core. It is really one of your very best! So emotional and so raw, so in keeping with Viren's character that you have sketched out. I really loved it! Hats off to you dear. I really loved the way you linked the red shawl to the earlier scenes -- from the very first one where Nivi is picking the red dress to take with her knowing it doesn't have a shawl...to Viren's valentine's day visit...now what you wrote earlier about Viren being sure after valentine's day that he loved his friend makes perfect sense...really like the way you weave these details in to make the story so much richer and believable. Awesome! I hope Nivi shows him her love in an equally charged and emotional and powerful way. (i don't mean just words -- even silence can be powerful!)
I had really wanted and hoped for something like ch 35 in ccbm -- viren's passionate love for nivi since childhood...but alas we didn't get it. I so wish we could see your ff filmed...you're really such a talented writer my dear!
pls update real soon. And could you pls PM me when you update...can't wait!!!! Thank you for writing for us all...hope this fascinating story goes on for a long time...
Originally posted by: love_never_diesyes dear... Lots of assignments too... May god help me to get good percentage in next sem also...
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