ff: The promise of love(chapters 50,51,52) - Page 18

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

great update!

thank u...

Originally posted by: anjubala

wonderful ...hmmm, so stopped at the climax - Viren meeting his love of life - Nivi and shocked that it is same Nivi... please continue soon,

thank you dear..yes dear nivren are gonna meet...thatz wat i was waiting for...to make them meet..

Thanks for your pm sweet heart:):)..and the story is moving in wonderful way ...very excited to know how viren will win nivi :) eagerly waiting for the next parts

Lol it was so cute chapter, it was nice to imagine nivi getting annoyed and viren shocked and happy, waiting for next chapter, pls pls make it soon yaar.

Originally posted by: Alphabet26

Very nice chapter, loved it. Atlast they got to know each other... so viren will be busy in manofy nivi, may be he got her payal with him... let see what he will do now to win her heart... 😍

thank you sweety..viren is so full of ideas..just wait and watch...he had so many years to think..all he need is to put his thots into words and action..

Originally posted by: dyhardfan

Awww finally they meet... Will love to see how Viren and Nivi love story process:) thank so much dear.

they defntly had to meet..hope u lik the way this story progresses

Originally posted by: jananishan

Thanks for your pm sweet heart:):)..and the story is moving in wonderful way ...very excited to know how viren will win nivi :) eagerly waiting for the next parts

how will viren win niviz heart..just wait and watch..very happy to know that u r excited about it..

Originally posted by: Butifuleyes

Lol it was so cute chapter, it was nice to imagine nivi getting annoyed and viren shocked and happy, waiting for next chapter, pls pls make it soon yaar.

thank u sweety..very glad that u liked it..may i know ur name..??

CHAPTER 17
viren was running..he stopped only wen he reached his room...
he started searching his bags and very much anxious..
finally he stopped and smiled..he picked somthing from an inside pocket of his bag...
it was the payal..viren kept looking at it and his shone with excitment..it was niviz payal...
he closed his eyes remembering the time he saw it on niviz legs..it was the day raj hit nivi with the ball...
no wonder it was familiar to him..
he opened his eyes and looked at the payal..slowly brought his face close to it..and kissed it...

Nivi went to her room after meeting viren..but she couldn't concentrate on her studies..nivi couldnt stop thinking..It was her friend viren that she saw in delhi..there were only vague memories of their childhood..but watever she remembered she was sure of one thing..viren always made her feel special..viren was such a good friend and he never annoyed her..
Wat happened wen viren grew up??could he change so much that he getz angry and annoyed for no reason at all..
Nivi then remembered about wat sasha told..viren was in love..maybe thatz wat changed him..par pyar insaan ko acha banatha hai..naaki  akdu..there were so many questions for which she wud llove to find answers..
but she had to study as the examz were very important..
she finally finished her studies and was about to sleep wen her phone beeped indicating a text message..nivi looked at the message it read "niveditha..i'm sorry.."
Nivi didn't have to think twice..it was no one but viren..
Nivi got irritated thinking.. Viren shimla aya nahi ki usne mera fone no. patha kar liya..
Nivi dialed his no.
After seeing nivi viren was thinking of different ways for apologizing..he saw his fone lying on the table and smiled in himself thinking...
"y didn't i think of this earlier.."
he took his fone and typed a message...he was waiting for an answer..wen he heard his mob ringing..with nivedithaz name on it...
viren was so happy..it was tooo much to expect but all he expected was a reply...but nivi called him...
his heart started beating fast as he didnt expect to hear niviz sound..not that he didnt wish for it...

Lovely swti... Thanks:) your FF is really very interesting. Keep up the good work.