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Posted: 12 years ago
Jez, nice chapters..loved them. The story is coming out to be pretty good.. Waiting for your next update to see how Viren finds out that it is Nivedita's payal..
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Posted: 12 years ago
luvly update 🤗
cant wait for next chap
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Resh_kinhafan

excellent ff dear...luvt it😃...jus wanna kno y viren is behavin lyk dis!!!!!!...anywayz i think nivi has already fallen 4 him😳!!!!!!
pls continue soon😊

sweety u just hav to wait fr a couple of chaptrs mor..hop u don't mind..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anjubala

Jez, nice chapters..loved them. The story is coming out to be pretty good.. Waiting for your next update to see how Viren finds out that it is Nivedita's payal..

itz a pleasure to knw dat u think d story is coming out to b good...abt d payal..viren wil com to knw abt it...bfor dat he has to settle somthing else..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: daffodils06


itz a pleasure to knw dat u think d story is coming out to b good...abt d payal..viren wil com to knw abt it...bfor dat he has to settle somthing else..


Is that raj matter...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kinha123

luvly update 🤗

cant wait for next chap


Thank u dear...will try ma best nnt to keep u all waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Alphabet26



Is that raj matter...😉


Usha sweety..Don't u think raj ka mattr settle hona chahiya..?but somthings dont go d way v plan it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 10

Finally the day of the engagement came…Sasha and nivi came along with Sashaz parents..Viren and saaketh were standing at the entrance waiting for sasha, nivi and nayana..
all three girls were looking lovely in their lehengas..but viren only had eyes for nivi..and nobody could blame viren for getting lost..
saaketh immediately said "u look pretty nivi..and both of u too.. just lik always.."
nivi was looking so beautiful that viren could hear his mind saying just as beautiful as her voice..or may be more..
nivi saw viren looking at her…as if stunned..
viren was so much lost at the sight in front of him that he didn't notice anything..
Sasha called out to viren.. "hey don't look at girls like that.."
viren suddenly realized wat he was doing and may b others specially nivi might hav understood so to cover up he said… "not girls…just niveditha…"
nivi looked at viren as if she couldn't understand wat he was upto.. "i hav seen u girls many times all dressed up looking nice..this is the first time I'm seeing niveditha in a lehenga.."
nayana pulled his ear saying "oh really…"
nivi didn't understand y nobody found anything odd in virenz behaviour..y was he ignoring her at times..while at times he was so concerned for her..
wat ever viren said or did nobody bothered as they know something about viren that never makes them doubt him or his intentions..wat is it..nivi will soon come to know..
Every body entered..they hugged payal and varun..it was a private get togther with close family members and friends..
 After a while Payal asked nivi to sing a song for them…nivi looked at them and the others..nivi once again looked at payal and varun..
she thought that…two people, entirely different from each other…but they found each other..wat ever be the differences or distance..they were meant for each other..and god made sure that they met..not just meet but love each other for ever..
And then a song came to niviz mind..
Kithne door door ho un dono ke raasthe … mil jaathe hai jo bane ek dhooje ke vaasthe..
she sang looking at payal and varun..went near them and took payal's hand and put it in varun's hand and pressing the two hands as if to seal it forever..
they smiled at her and thanked her..
she then looked at her newly found friends and held out her hand asking them to join her..
Every one was so happy for varun and payal..they couldn't resist joining in..viren was so ahppy for his friends and he wanted everything to go perfectly well..
Nivi: Kitne door door ho un dono ke raaste Mil jaate hain jo bane ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste
Viren: Jaise dil hai dhadkan hai
Everybody gathered there joined in: Ek duje ke vaaste
Sasha: Jaise aankh hai darpan hai
Chorus: Ek duje ke vaaste
Saaketh: Jaise barkha saawan hai
Chorus: Ek duje ke vaaste
Nayana: Ek sajni ek saajan hai
Chorus: Ek duje ke vaaste
Viren: Us rab ne jab dil diye
Nivi: Dil ke do tukde kiye
Viren: Dono pe ek naam likha
Nivi: Ek Radha ek Shyam likha
Viren: Ab yeh dil dhadakte hain
Nivi: Milte aur bichhadte hain
Viren: Ek duje ke vaaste
Nivi: Ek duje ke vaaste
Chorus: Ek duje ke vaaste
Payal: Hum dono ek jaan hai
Varun: Do dil ek armaan hai
Nivi: Lekin ab is mod par
Viren: Dekhe daaman chhodkar
Nivi: Waqt ka hai yeh faisla
Viren: Hum tum ho jaaye judaa
Nivi: Maange khushiyon ki dua
Ek duje ke vaaste
Viren: Maange khushiyon ki dua
Ek duje ke vaaste
Chorus: Ek duje ke vaaste
Nivi: Ek duje ke vaaste
Viren:Ek duje ke vaaste
Nivi was completely lost in virens eyes..eventhough he was singing..there was pain in his eyes..it looked as if with every line he sang, there was intense pain in his heart..a pain that he couldn't reveal..
Viren had heard this song before..dat too many times..but today he felt that there was so much to this song than he noticed earlier..he was thinking as to whether it is true that two people who are meant for each other will meet no matter wat..his eyes were lost in the thought that if two people are never meant for each other..nothing can bring them together..
nivi was right in her assumption that there was intense pain in his eyes..
As they were singing the last lines they completely forgot about the surrounding and were lost in their own thoughts...it was the sound of the claps that brought them back..
nivi thanked every one and went and stood beside sasha..


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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 11

The engagement ceremony started..varun and payal exchanged rings..
nivi had eyes only for viren..there was so much pain in his eyes..nivi didn't understand what was bothering him…b it virenz annoyance or his irritating nature..nivi always thought that there was more to him than that met the eyes..there was something inside him which he seemed to hide under his attitude..
nivi noticed viren moving from the crowd..
nivi followed viren…
viren was looking out from the balcony..nivi called out to viren..
viren looked at nivi asking "wat r u doing here..??"
nivi asked .. "viren tum teek tho ho na???yahan akele kya kar rahe ho??"
viren didn't ans..and nivi decided may b viren wants to be left alone..
she turned to go wen viren got hold of her hand and pulled her.. "do u wanna know my problem.."
nivi nodded in a yes..
"jaan kar kya karoge??"
"dost hoon..i wil help u find a solution.."
viren turned around saying "what if my problem is my solution.."
nivi didn't understand what he was sayin.. nivi kept quiet..
viren turned around taking a step towards her..
nivi moved back..
"agar mera problem hi mere saamne solution ke bath kare tho mein kya karoon.."
nivi asked  "am I ur problem??"
viren moved closer to her..nivi walked back finally she hit the wall and stopped..viren kept coming closer to her..nivi suddenly put her hands in front as if to stop him..
viren didn't stop..nivi pushed viren..viren took niviz hands and held it up on the wall as if nailing her..
viren was surprised to c nivi..at first he thot that he will not respond to her..
then as she turned away,the idea suddenly dawned upon him..better than not responding to her..he should do something that will irritate her,mayb scare her so that she gets afraid of him and stays away..but nivi was not afraid of viren as she was sure he will n ot do anything that is wrong,nor hurt her in any way..viren came close to niviz face..so close that nivi could feel his breath on her face..
viren moved his face to her side and whispered in her ear.. "insaan ke paas har problem ka solution nahi hotha…aur tum mera problem kabhi jaan nahi paaoge..jaan bhi loge tho samach nahi paaoge..samachoge bhi tho kuch kar nahi paoge…isliye math aaya karo..aur math poocha karo..stay away.."and he left from there..
as he walked he wanted to turn around and hav alook at her..did his act scare her or hurt her..but viren decided not to..
niviz eyes filled with tears as she watched viren go away fro there…it was not wat viren did..but wat he said..nivi didn't expect such a rude answer..
nivi quickly wiped her tears and went down..
she didn't look at viren…went straight to sasha and said that she was not feeling well and wants to go home..sasha looked at nivi & understood that something has defntly gone wrong…
they had a quick dinner and left from there..
the next day nivi didn't com to speak to viren or the others..sasha sensed something was wrong but couldn't put a finger on it…nivi didn't leave class at all…there was so much of pain inside her that she sang as if her life depended on it…viren didn't say anything that could affect her this much, nivi was sure about it,but then y was she so sad..she didn't understand..she just wanted to complete the course &leave at the earliest..

Precap: raj looked at viren and said "hey viren I was gonna drop nivi home.."

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey friends..just updated 2 chapters..hop u lik it...i will updating the next chapters on sunday...i think so..as i hav a book release to attend to...thank u all for reading..