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Posted: 26 June 2011 at 10:02pm | IP Logged
hey nice update buddy...
plzz continue it soon...
thanks 4 d pm...

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Posted: 26 June 2011 at 11:34pm | IP Logged

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Posted: 26 June 2011 at 11:39pm | IP Logged

lovely...

lovely...

lovely...

love d post...

plz continue...

nd take care of urself...

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Posted: 27 June 2011 at 12:49am | IP Logged
nice...looking forward for twists n turns. First u take care of ur health dear. Get well soon :)

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Posted: 27 June 2011 at 1:42am | IP Logged
awesome superb mind blowing ...take care of yourself dear 

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Posted: 27 June 2011 at 3:33am | IP Logged
part:28
meera is watching geet  continoulsy...she knew why she is like that because she is thinking about the incident hwich happned in the morining in office she knew geet from the childhood she knew what are the obstacles she faced...seh dont like rich people it means she should not even frdship with dev...but she is far from some people only i her life she welcome everyone in to her life but most of the peole had taught lessons to her to say all of them whom she belived they are her life they all taught lessons...no one had given love to her...so only she is in search of her love 
listening to the car horn meera came out of her trance and watch geet...she is peeping outside the window and enjoying the cool breeze...she had a smile on her face at that moment meera only asked  a wish that give geet wha u did not give these many days...meera house is reached...they both get in
seeing geet mr.chouhan is so happy he is the famous cardiologist in delhi...family doctor of khuranas...he like geet very much he calls her as princess!!!!!!!!!!!!
when she entered he says her PRINCESS!!!!!!!!!!!
how mant times i said that dont call me like that but u?
see dear u may say anything but i ll like to say that...but i m angry on u that u are in delhi and even not sat for us
geet says sorry!
i want to stand on my legs uncle !
even though u should say us ...i said sorry this wont repeat anytime
i promise...go and fresh up
they leaves from there
geet is only thinking about the morning incident she want to clear up with meera
so she goes ot kicthen
meera guessed that she came to ask her about the morning incident 
even though she remains silent,
meera u knew what happend in morning by this time...
i really dont no know what happened to me i just lost in his eyes
u know meera in college many boys see me and said they love me but i can only see lust in them but in mann i dont no i saw some kind of weird feeling that dragged towards him
i saw a desire in his eyes which i m searching from many years
meera listnes silently and say u only think which is good because free advice can be given by anyone but this is ur life listen to ur heart and go in the path which it shows...
ok then tommorow we should go to KM get ready dev called for the lunch
they said good night to each other and left
KHURANA MANSION:
here mann is not knowing what going in the mansion
all the staff are working like robots...he asked dadimaa then she said some important guest is coming to there house today for lunch
mann asks who is that?
but she smiles and say wait!!!!!!!!!!!
he is totally puzelled the way dining table is set
{here u can see NT also so pls ignore her}
he never saw the dining is with roses...dadimaa thought he may shout but he did not...he is waitng to see that guest who it is?
at that second meera & geet enter the KM...mann can smell geet aroma there but he thinks why she would be there...
but suddenly dadimaa calls geet name and run towards her...mann even cant imagine that dadimaa knows geet and she did these prepartions for geet...and she love geet he is in shock now
she runs and hug geet in a way that she dont want to be get rid of her...with love in her eyes like a mother and with a wide smile on her face
geet too hug  dadimaa and say dadimaa u not even change...u are so sweet my dear old frd...
they both laugh at each other and settled there...
mann is happy that somehow dadimaa know geet and she like her a lot no she loves her lot
she is so happy to see geet here...mann is only seeing geet ...
geet can see that but she dont want to meet his glance at al
mann can notice that and he smiles...dadimaa too noticed that and she is happy that mann is love with her
mann asks dadimaa that when she knew geet
then dev says that dadimaa saw the geet in act play with me bro
i m romeo and she is juliet...u know she is so beautiful in bridal dress...
let me show u it is still inmy mobile wait a moment bro
seeing in that bridal dress he is just staring at her
he is distured by the nakul
he is so angry on that...but he controls 
HANDA HAVELI:
hello rajii geet is there?
no ...darji & veerji want to kil her so she put brij veerji behind the bars and left to delhi & we dont no now where she is staying in delhi
rajii if geet calls say me
ok pls help her and take care
ok rajii bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

precap:who is stalker?


sorry for mistkes
i knew that i should continue the luch but it has a twist so i ll give tommorow
pls press like button
pls do comment




Edited by abisamratgunjan - 28 June 2011 at 6:00am

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bubblygal Senior Member
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Posted: 27 June 2011 at 3:48am | IP Logged
hmm...nice update buddy...
whoz d stalker?????????
anyways...update is so cute...
thanks 4 d pm...

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Posted: 27 June 2011 at 3:51am | IP Logged
Nice update!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



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