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Posted: 25 June 2011 at 9:15pm | IP Logged
hahaha...funny and romantic update

MSK has lost it. seeing geet like that, he has forgotten that he is MSK and he is in office. MSK!!!! please control yourself and concentrate in your office work...warna GHSP ke tarah yahan bhi aap ke company bankrupt hojayga...lol...

geet has started to feel something for him...hmmm...now starts the love story...lol...

continue soon...
143 dear 

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Posted: 25 June 2011 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
loving it i want more :D

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Posted: 25 June 2011 at 10:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tonyahk

hahaha...funny and romantic update

MSK has lost it. seeing geet like that, he has forgotten that he is MSK and he is in office. MSK!!!! please control yourself and concentrate in your office work...warna GHSP ke tarah yahan bhi aap ke company bankrupt hojayga...lol...

geet has started to feel something for him...hmmm...now starts the love story...lol...

continue soon...
143 dear 

Tonya


thanx tonya

love,
abi

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Posted: 25 June 2011 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
supreb update.
love it

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Posted: 25 June 2011 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
mindblowing
love it love itHeart
yu did good good jobClapClapClap
when is the next update
coming me waiting
ty 4pm
bless yu

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Posted: 26 June 2011 at 7:12am | IP Logged

.....dear...Tongue

 
 
 
...4 PM me...Big smile..
 
 
 
 dear...in all updates...ClapClapClap..
 
ur updates r n
 
 
 
......Embarrassed
 
 
 
 
 4 ur ..Thumbs Up..
 
all ur updates...
 
 
... really
 
 
...just
 
 
... n
 
 
...
 
 
... sorry 4 being late n short comment..but dear it's my exam plz forgive me...Ouch...
 
tons of ...HugHugHugHugHug
 
again i said that...
 
 
..Big smile.
update soon dear...
 
lov,Heart
Tama
 
 
P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...i only mae it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself my componets donn't coppied it...Angry

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Posted: 26 June 2011 at 7:24am | IP Logged
PART:27
Whole day mann is watching geet only he is not taking his gaze from her when ever he see like that she is feeling something...some unknown wish is burning through her body she can only remember that morning incident how much close they both were she forgot the whole world...and she did not even mean that he is so close how an that be possible
mann noticed her disturnbance and smile himslef he can read her eyes now what she is thinking he want to talk about it but he knew after speaking about that matter she ll awakard he dont want to embrass her
he now knew that she had some feeling towards hims so she want to pull that feeling more from her
but he want to try once and started to ask geet!
how would u do that?how can u come to so close...
sir!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!wo mey
she turn her face to otherside
he sees that smilrks with smile on his face
no problem geet...i can understand it happens
my charm is like that!!!!!!!any girl can be in my arms
geet is out of control now
what u said any girl?
how dare u to compare with others...yes i came near to u
but i dont no why?
and u think i wantedly fall for u
never that happens...got it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
he put is index finger near her lips say chup!!!!!!!!!!!!!!bilkul chup!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
her body is shivering with that touch...it is burning in her body some desire is creating in her heart 
but she want to be away from all this desires,she cant be in any otehr relation because she is fear that whether she may lost those relations also
she knew that she is feeling something for him but she dont want to show for him...
she want to hide her emotions...she cant let one more rich person in her life...
it doesnt mean she hate them but she dont want to risk
she is numb with his touch and thinking all this
he saw her facial expressions change to worry so he just put his hands on her shoulder and say GEET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
she is scared now whether he had red her mind ???????????????
but even though she want to control herself
she thought if i feel this relation is necessary then i ll go with this 
but i m not even knowing what kind of feeling i have on him
is it infatuation because of his charm!!!!!!!!!!
or really i love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
no i should wait till i knew what it is!!!!!!!!!!
but now i should be far from him
he again call GEET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
she came of the trance and push him and show her index finger to him and say never come to near me!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i wont spare that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i know what u people think first make them to fall in r charm then make them fools behind to u...leave them and go right!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i know even u are thinking same about me 
but listen mr.khurana i m not form those u think...i said on that day only...behave ur self!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
now mann is out of control he never heard someone say all those things...but still he controlled and cam near geet
he can see some  feeling in geet at same time some kind if fear she is feeling...
he came near to geet and said geet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
never try to fear when i am near you geet...
if u have any kind problem u may say me anytime
i m right here to save u ...because u are my li!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
ok now u may go geet...when she turned back she saw meera in the office
when she saw her she just run towards her and cried a lot...
no one in the office did not knew why she is sobbing like this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
mann too worried stopped...bro!!!!!!!!!!1dont go
meera is geet's child hood frd she share very much with geet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!if she feels anytime lonley she ll share with us bro!!!!!!!!!!
i hope today she is thinking about something...so only sh eis sobbing
meera hugs her and ask what happened...she says i ll say later
but u here!!!!!!!!
yes i came here u to take u home dear...
no meera  i m happy in orphanage
yes i knew that but even though dear...u should come with me dad said that...so lets start
meera says hi to mann
they great each other and say bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!
but mann is thinking about only geet...what kind of fear is bothering her...
why cant she share with me...
what is her problem ...she said that all rich people use girls!!!!!!!!!!!!
what is she meant by that?
is anyone in her life!!!!!!!!!!!!!like me even she is betrayed by nay rich man in her life
no i cant think some one in her life...but some thing bothering her so i should find that...i ll do that


sorry for musatkes 
i knew i said romance in air but frds i a having asthama so i ll get offen fever and my fever
so at that time i thought i want a twist in the story 
form now onwards many new characters enter in story some are temporary but some are...crucial...dear so i hope u love how the story mould
if u like pls press like button
pls do comment


precap:new comer
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Edited by abisamratgunjan - 27 June 2011 at 10:23pm

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Posted: 26 June 2011 at 7:29am | IP Logged
super duper update...
loved it..
take care of ur health dear...
hope u get well soon
reva

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