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keenu_kk IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 June 2011 at 10:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tonyahk

Hi dear,

Thanks for the lovely and cute updates along with beautiful pictures.

Part 23

Please see my comments on page 83. I afraid that you didn't read it.


Part 24

Loved the cute friendship between geet and dev. And there is no misunderstanding by maan about their friendship. I am relieved.


Part 25

Very lovely and funny update.

Maan himself opened his mouth wide...

OMG!!! I killed myself laughing at this line. I could imagine the wide opened mouth of MSK. It is really too funny

I wish you could have posted a picture of mouth wide opened MSK. Par...yesa picture kahan milega? It is rarest of the rare

Oho...after marriage MSK is going to listen to geet also he is doing that only.

Geet in mini skirt...hey babaji! Kya hoga bechara maan ko?


I am excited to see the miniskirtwali


Felt bad to know that You have fever..Take care dear


@ Gunjar...wish you a happy birthday buddy

143 girls


thanx tonya verymuch
i m happy that u commneted even u are busy
i got the pic where mann opens his mouth
but it i msixed with many pics too
so i cant take it


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keenu_kk IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 June 2011 at 10:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sharmake11

beautiful part
love it
ty 4 pm

thnax sharmake

keenu_kk IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 June 2011 at 10:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aamirkhanfan

great part...eagerly waiting for the next one to see the reactions of the staff and maan's reaction to it...plz update soon

onthing i can sau
sabke hosh ud jayege

keenu_kk IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 June 2011 at 10:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by manesha76

      Great yaar , nice work . Smile

thanx manesha
i hope u do commnet regualrly

keenu_kk IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 June 2011 at 10:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by gunjar


1stly ...4 PM me hunn...
u really done  n ...Clap.
4 that  to u..Thumbs Up.
... ......n really  .Big smileWink...
 4 ur update tons of  n ..Hug.
again  4 ur update..Big smile..

so lovely dear

keenu_kk IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 June 2011 at 4:00am | IP Logged
Mann is only thinking about the geet...he knew that she looks so beautiful when she in salwar but now she ll be in skirts...he should help her from so many eyes he thought form his eyes first...he evn scoloding dev why he had challeged this stupid one...and geet too agreed for this she not even think about me...
mann u are really mad nowdays how can she think about did u said that u love her that she ll think about u
but i m goin insane to see her i should make her to be in my cabin till the office compltes if not i cant even think about it
he want to leave for office very fast so that he can keep on eye on evryone
here geet is going to be ready for office
she looks herself in the mirror twice ...she want to be good this time
when ever she ware modern dress she never felt special to ware but this time she want to be special
she came out from her room...all the olp men in the orphange said from today geet is our girlfrd...
they all felt happy to see geet in new way & she also feel happy seeing them ...
mann is being restless he dont no what to do
he again thinks that she ll come in cab
it means the people who are on the road see it cant be possible
she is only mine...
dev this time i sparing u but next time i ll kill u he says to himslef
he feels to send the car
he call the driver
yes sir!
go and get geet form orphange
and listen dont see her face...mann what are u saying...she  ll ware skirts how can u say that to see him down 
no no !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dont see down if us  down i ll kill u so her face and talk ok go now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sir what happens if i see down...what is there sir?????????
my head...
go now and do what i say
in the offcie everyone are eagerly waiting to see her...everyone is takling about her...she looks great in salwar but today she is wearing a skirt 
omg!!!!!!!!!!!!she looks so hot onesay
no no !!!!!!!!! she look damn sexy another person said
mann is listening to all this silently he want to kill all of them but he controlled himslef and gave a angry glare t all
geet had seen mann car run towards that she even do not know why she run like that
she disappointed when she saw driver
mam!!!!!!!!!mann sir said to get u
geet felt happy that mann send car for her or else she is feeling embrassing walking in this dress on roads...
the driver don not want to sed own so he opens the door and make her to sit but he see her face and thinks what a beauty she is!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
he gets back the words of the mann and drove to the kc
dev is laughing inside so much seeing mann restless ness...he never felt that mann ll react so much for geet 
he says to himlsef that bro if i know that u love geet this much i use to show her before only
he is jsut enjoying the way mann is feeling rest less
suddenly mann felt some aroma ...
he can guess that it is geet only
she stood there...all are shocked to see her...she is like angelic beauty...her white milky skin is totally apperead...
all are checking from top to bottom...
her legs...
her thigs...
her west...
her br***...which are exposing her bare curves...
her neck
her lips which are like rose petals
her eyes...
omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!she is outstanding...
all are fainting seeing her 
mann himslef is staring her ...
he lost the presence of his by seeing her prsence there
his eyes is full of passion...lust...he want ti kiss her madly...he is walking near her
she is in white colour like white angel her dress is only to thighs
mann don not no how to take his gaze his from her...she is so beautiful
he is walking towards her...she is just staring at him...she obsereved some kind of passion in his yes...she thought she also falling for him...but she dont no what is happening to her now
he is moving towards her with passion full eys
he came so close to there is no way to go back he is satnding infront of her
whole the staff is watching this
they dont what to say
MSK and going near a girl...sasha & tasha left form there
they cant like mann watching geet in that way
now dev also thought that some where even geet like bro so only she not saying anyting when bro is coming near to her
otherwise she use to be sherni of hoshiyarpur...
he smile
mann moves more her her hair is blowing because of the air
he like that and moved more further...he not even remebered that he is in office and that too before the staff
just then dev thinks that it is the time to stop so he shouts GEET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
they both came of there trances here her heart beating raising as much as it can
mann observe that and saw the sweat on her face
he is feeling happy that even geet feels something for him...but he want to test once again so that he can make his love forward so he lean to onseside of the geet...come near her ear and say U LOOK HOT GEET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
she beacme numb because she even do not no how to react for that after hearing that she is just staring at him
he can read her eyes he felt happy that she is also feeling somthing for him 
so from now he can start the LOVE MISSION GEET!!!!!!!!!!!
he smile seeing at her again and leave and while leaving he put his finger to her and say REMEMBER MY WORDS GEET
she again come to her senses and say i do sir
then again she thinks whats she said
no sir 
i mean ye sir!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
mann smiles seeing her and leave form there
dev comes and say geet u look hot...
what how dare u to say??????????
geet when bro said u did not say anything then why me?
even though i m ur frd i sad u may times what new now
yes dev i do no today what happened
ok lets back to work 
if i stand here other few seconds then i ll be mental hospital
they both laugh and get back to work

precap;geet in meera house
             little romance in air

sorry for the mistakes
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Edited by abisamratgunjan - 26 June 2011 at 7:46am

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ambeern IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 June 2011 at 4:15am | IP Logged
me first yepee

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Posted: 25 June 2011 at 4:21am | IP Logged
Like it and wait for next part...

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