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MANNEET MOHABATEIN... (Page 6)

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
awsome update.
wht happen to muskaan?

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
nice creation yar keep it up...

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 12:34am | IP Logged
Lovely introduction and start wait for the next part.
gunjar Goldie
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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 12:47am | IP Logged
nice update sis. thanks for that
 
so MSK is smiling after years...great
continue soon ...

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 1:30am | IP Logged
nice one... update soon

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 2:49am | IP Logged
part:5
after a week:
aunty ji ,muskna kaha hai?
kya beti tumhe path nahi muskan do dein pehele margayi...CryCryCry
kya ye kaise kisne mujhe kaha kyu nahi?
geet is petrified with tears...
she did not no wht to do her only one frd in hp is no where nw
heavy rain falling...
her tears r mixed with rainy water
any one did not absorve that she is n tears...
she just sat in the admist of the road...
she just crying til her heart sinks...
only one person observe that she is is in tears...he dont no for which reason she has  to cry... BECUASE SHE IS GEET HANDA ...but his heart started rapid beat seeing those tears...
he went near to her...
when he came there unknwingly she touched his legs
he startled her...
he put his hands on her shoulders...
he cant bare the tears any more...
she just looks up deep in to those black eyes...
she dont no wht to talk with him
he did  no hw to cocoon her
he wanted to touch those tears...but he thought who is he
to that but his heart said do ...he is MSK he listend to brain and did not touch her tears...but he said to her...
ZIS ISSAN KE LIYE TUM RO RAHI HO 
AGAR WOH ISSAN ACHA HAI THO EN ASU KO ESTHMAL KARO
VARNA BILKUL NAHI
KYUNKI ES DUNIYA ASSU KA KOI MATLAB NAHI HAI...

her heart some where knw this truth said
by him
because even she also experienced
but she left numb there...thinking 
who killed her?
who killed musskan?

why they should kill her?
wht the y get if they kill her
hw come she did not no abt this



he came back to home hit the wall
he dont no wht is happening to him
why again he is believing in the emotons why ?
he cant


.


he did not knw why it matters to him that much
who is she ?why i cant se her tears...
there is something in that girl hich makes me to loose myself...
i cant commit gain mistake in mylife...
after 3 days...
musnshiji:chota saab chhe tho hum jakar geet handa se bath kare
nahi maunshiji main hoona me samlunga sab kuch
geet is in temple at that morning
she is unawre that hw can she do thiss
she is thinking abt mann
hw can she touched his legs
his eyes 
which look loke deep ocean?
why?
wht  happened me at that time...
she again noticed him infront of her eyes
but it is not dream...
she finds he is here before her eyes...
she dont knw her heart feel relax for some time seeing him...

they both r unaware of this that there mohabaatein is stared nw...

precap: first fight

hope u ll kie this one
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Edited by abisamratgunjan - 10 June 2011 at 1:59am

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shalinisaran89 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 3:15am | IP Logged
awesome updates...
lov it...
do continue...

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gunjar Goldie
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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 3:55am | IP Logged
Awesome update...
continue soon...
 

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