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MANNEET MOHABATEIN... (Page 4)

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 1:11am | IP Logged
lovely update ...thank you sis


 ff sis...
 for such an wonderful ff...
Blue Rose - blue, Blue Rose, Flower, rose continue soon sis ...

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 2:39am | IP Logged
nice concept!!!...do continue!!Clap
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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 3:52am | IP Logged
congrats !!!!!! 4 ur 1st ff ...


awesome .. superb ... loved it so far ...

interesting concept ...

add me to ur pm list ...

keep updating ...
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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 3:58am | IP Logged
gr8 intro..!!
do update soon..
plz pm me
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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 5:15am | IP Logged
Nice concept ...loved it

do con ...add me in PM

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 5:52am | IP Logged
nice start dear
 
dont' worry geet!  Maan Singh Khurana hena? tumari liyeWink
 
continue soon buddy
 
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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
part:4
mann sing khurana fist time in his life time was seen such a moist eyes to say the eyes which r like MIRROR for him...
he soon leaves there and get out frm his thoughts...
mann ye tum kya karne ja rahi ho
yakin math karo kisi par...
nahi mann nahi mann...

he leaves frm there
and doing his own work with his gun...
she wann to thnax for him...so she comes near him
but with out seeing that stone is in middle she nudges to him again
nw he cant take the sight frm his gaze frm her sight just loving them unknowingly...
he again gets off says 
her ladki yahi chathi hey...aur kitna karib ana chathi ho tum?
ha bolo?
she thinks wht kind of person he is?apne mere jaan bachay hey esliye thanx kehene ke liya ayi hu mey?

tum juo yaha se...levae right nw...
she feels wierd ...but she cant see the tabzeez which is bounded to his neck...
she goes on staring at him...
he scowls on her again...
he is very abrasive with her...
they r in abrest...just some unknown feeking but his abrasive ness is more at her...
he is melting in her eyes
he thought he cant abstain this...
he is loosing with out knwing only...
 he again scowls on her this time
she cant  bare that sight
she abrupt frm there...
he even did not think that happens...he is feeling guilt to shout on her...
but while she is leaving she ses him back with great gratitude to him in her eyes
he notices those eyes again with tears...
he cant bare that those tears r because of him
he is caring abt the tears abt woman
he is MANN SINGH KHURANA...he missed his attitude saying his name nw...
he just saw her when she is leaving...
with some smile in his face...
she is complte unaware of tabeez...
he even not noticed that he is smiling after many years...

precap: no more muskaan
             mann cant bare the tears...

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Edited by abisamratgunjan - 10 June 2011 at 1:57am

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
awesome ... superb ...

nice update .. but was short ... nxt time plzzz ... try to give a long one ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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