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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 2:31am | IP Logged
awsome yaar ...loved it so mcuh !! 

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 2:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahimak

Really nice update.. luved it.. n Maan stop listining 2 ur mind naa.. hope he realize soon that he luves her..:-)

Mahima


soon his mind also say only one name 
geet geet...
but hope geet should think about mann from her mind & heart

love,
abi


Edited by abisamratgunjan - 10 June 2011 at 2:40am
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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 2:54am | IP Logged
hi abi,

read part 16 and 17 in one go. very nice and cute parts with beautiful pictures as always

loved the following dialogue of maan very much
geet jab tak me hu tab tak tumhe kuch nahi hoga...

maan taking extra care not to get angry on geet...so sweet

he admiring geet's coffice, her work, everything...too good

'will she consider me as her own...OMG!!! such a nice thought from maan

thank you so much for this beautiful FF dear

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Tonya

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 2:57am | IP Logged
awesome ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 3:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tonyahk

hi abi,

read part 16 and 17 in one go. very nice and cute parts with beautiful pictures as always

loved the following dialogue of maan very much
geet jab tak me hu tab tak tumhe kuch nahi hoga...

maan taking extra care not to get angry on geet...so sweet

he admiring geet's coffice, her work, everything...too good

'will she consider me as her own...OMG!!! such a nice thought from maan

thank you so much for this beautiful FF dear

143

Tonya



thank u so much dear...
this is from u people who is reading and giving apprecation for me
i ll stand upto all ur excepatations...

love,
abi

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 4:20am | IP Logged
[QUOTE=abisamratgunjan]part:17
since one week geet is working in the KC she is so professional she use to less talk and work more mann want to be with her only he did not known what is happening to him...he unnecssarily calls her and want to talk with her...he recognised that whole the men in staff drools for her ...he dont like it...here geet became good frds with ADI,PINKY...sasha dont like her becasue mann is giving more prefernce to her...he use to see her daily before he gets into his cabin smiles at her
he is totally mesmerised by her pure beauty...her innocence just feels for her...but still he control his emotions of his bygone 
here geet also feeilng good now a days in the office the way mann is moving with her now adi sir & pinky  her nw frds in her new life she is happy with this whenever mann give a smile from the cabin even geet herself give a smile for him
seeing that smile mann use to feel happy ...on that day it is very important deal for KHURANAS mann want win the deal at any cost he dont want to care for anyone...because that is his prestiage matter
whole office is running here and there geet is just watching everything silently...she  want to actually what is going in office but she did not understand 
mann wantedly did not give this work to geet because he feels she only did graduation & may be she may do any wrong so that he may scowl on her & she ll be in tears he cant bare that so he avoided her compltely...but somwhere in that tension also if he sees her face he use to feel realx
everyone seated in the conference room...geet is standing near by...and copying the notes at the same time she is lisetning to the presentation given by the mann & sasha too...those people are not impressed by the presentation given by the sasha and her theme ...they ask "mr.khurana we asked whole the 100 flats should be see the temple not the 50 flats this is the theme actually but you people had shown same what the others did we are not satisfied by ur presentation we are sorry"
here mann cannnot control his anger & raise on everyone he dont 
mind what he is speaking...first time geet had faced the anger of the mann she did not see him like that she knew him...she knows that he is like this but this much angry ...she cant see that by the time she want to say something about the plan mann had left the room
mann is angry on every one and geet enters the cabin he feel relaxed but at the same time he lost so he says geet to leave...fearfully geet ask him permission tolisten once but he is out of his anger...& says geet leave first "tumhe ek baar kahi hui baath kyu samje me nahi athi? leave right now aur agar tumne mera gussa bada diya tho mey kuch bhi bolungi delhlena ...so now leave"
he dont want to say anything to geet so that she wont get hurt ...but geet is not listening at all she leaves & thinks" i ll say what i wnat to say and make u only to get this project this is geet's promise"
after sometime geet enters with coffee in her hands to him...he feels good that she is caring for him...he takes that coffee and drinking
he feels that is best coffee he ever drank geet thinks that is best time to talk to him and she starts ...sir gussa math hone muj par
he feels little awkard listning to that...but sir i promise give me one chance i ll make you to get the project ...pls sir app gussa math kijeye...
he smiles seeing her pure heart once again...he knew that geet can take cany challenge for her own people...own people what i said my self now...is she is thinking me like her frd...like her own...
sir what happened?pls give me one chance sir i ll do that and show you...he dont no what he should say his heart says give her a chance and his mind says no because she dont no anything about architecture...
she started saying what she want to say ...he is calmly listening to her notions...he is just impressed by her...he cant even imagine that how could she thought she like that ...becasue the idea she had given can only think by professional architectures...and she is just graduation student ...he is so  happy for her says arrange  meeting again in the evening ...u give the presentation to them ...go head geet...
she is so happy now that he agreed her notion and also said her to give the presenataion...she is just happy and saying thanz by thanx
he can read her expressions the way she felt happy made him also feel happy...he really impressed by her he is only thinking how this girl had change him compltely...he only thinking he is MBA from delhi university who cant give the idea and sasha herself but geet gave wonderful idea...his feelings for her increasing day by day he cannot control them but still he is listening to the mind...
geet had called again the clients...whole the office is tensed again now and sasha is angry on geet to the core of her heart...adi is happy that now she is doing the job of her studies because adi knew geet is mba...

precap:is mann happy by the success of the project?

sorry for mistakes
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may be i cant update for 4_ 5 days i m going out with family...i ll try to update but not sure hope u like it i m in busy so i gave this sorry again for mistakes...i ll try but not sure

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nice and ausom!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 4:45am | IP Logged
WOW !!! LIKED IT A LOT ...
LUV MAAN 'S CARE TOWARDS GEET...
PLS POST SOON IF POSSIBLE ...

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 5:19am | IP Logged

 omg i missed so much  Cry

i read parts frm 7 to 17 i n a go  Dead
so many things has happend ... all d updates wer awesome... really u improved alot Smile 
 
ahh loved d sherni... wen she tore d land papers ... loved d attitude of MSK ... pour soul struggling with his feelings LOL
so many shades of geet ... loved d way she showed d right path to d boy Clap
felt touched by dese words WATEVER HAPPENS NEVER GO FOR WRONG PATH ...  BELIEVE EVERY1 IN UR LIFE.. SOME MAY TEACH U A LESSON.. SOME GIVES U LOVE.. NEVER LEAVE D LOVE WHICH IS URS Cry
even after knowing d truth about gaurav .. stupid msk is listening to his mind  Angry
ahh finally my sherni won d battle by putting brij in jail  Big smile glad finally she got rid of her family...
hehe adi balbramchari LOL LOL loved d way she accepted geet as his sis
loved d way MSK showed love n concern towards geet... how himself expressed his feelings... glad finally hes aware  of his feelings... let geet feel d sameWinkWinkWinkWink   glad he gave her a chance to prove herself Smile
want to c d reaction wen he comes to know abt her education LOL 
lastly ... ur pics... a big asset fr ur update.. .ClapClap
 
nice updates abi... really u r doing a good job... keep it up.,,,,ClapClapClap

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