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MANNEET MOHABATEIN... (Page 16)

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 8:37am | IP Logged
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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 9:57am | IP Logged
Amazing story and storyline. Can you please add me to your PM list. Please and Thank you. Please update soon :)

Can't wait to find out what is gonna happen next in the story :)

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Hey...KK Lovely Update Yaar...can't wait for the next .. Please update soon :)Party

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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 3:54am | IP Logged
part:10
geet says raji that to care everything if anyone asks about me say them that i went to hira house even i said everything to hira she ll manage u be safe & she says that reach the palce where mann is there
she is in hurry to reach him
and he sees her & say r u running from ur house
lietening to those words she feels irratated and says never i wont do that i ll face them
listening to those words he feels why he goes wrong in her matter? whatever ...hey i should give u invitation wht?get in...
while she getting her leg slips and she is going to fall he catches her from the hand
he again sees those moist eyes but these time he sees much agony in those eyes...he feels why i m feeling for her again...wht happens to me & wht is cooking in her mind till yesterday she said she aid she ll give that too with out money hw can that is possible and wht she want from me?
she feel he rself comfortable and says shall we go?
he takes his hand from her and aks is anyone coming with u 
she says no...
he starts the jeep and he thinks only wht she want from me?
why she is not saying that?
why?
after going some distance they stuck in trafic and one boy came near the jeep and begs some money,while mann is going to give geet stops his hand says wait...dont do that...
wht?
she says wait...
hey u come here she call teh boy and take him to near the magzine shop
mann is staring at her wht she is upto?
no one cant read her mind?
wht hse want to do with this samll boy?

she goes near the shop & ask the shopkeeper to give 20 variety magzines
she takes them and come near the boy who is standing near the jeep
and she says take this magzines sell them ...the monet wht u get...in that half u take for ur stomach and other half for buying the books again

so by this u earn the money bu urself...u need not beg others...& onemore thing...whtever happenes never go for wrong path...identify the people seeing those eyes...believe everyone in ur life...some may teach u a lesson...some give u love...never forget those lessons taught by them & never leave the love which is urs...from nw onwards dont beg...

listening to those words said by geet his heart feels like broking again because he learnt a lesson and the love which is not at ll his ...how he can keep that love for him...

he feels why he is wrong in justfifying her...she is too good...in his life after many years he had got a gud impression on a woman today he thought if he had a frd like this in his life may be he never be betryed by someone...again he thinks why i think bat her only...why?

that boy hugs geet and says didi aj taksab log ne mujhe daata,maara magar kisne aisa kuch bhi nahi kaha?ya mere wadha hai didi ek din bahut bada inssan banuga us din khud ko buljavunga magar appko nahi...aapko kabhi nahi
saying those words he leaves from there
mann stares at her like that only still the horn sounds

REGISTER OFFICE'
they reaches there and mann just stares at her
the magistrate asks tem to sign on the papers but still he is staring at her
he cant take his gaze form her at all now afer that incident...
the magistrate shouts on him and says signature sir...
while they going to sign a person came and shouts dont sign?
mann & geet yells kyu??????????????
he says this is maariage papers...
wht???????????
yes...
mann gets angry & caught the shirt of magistrate...
geet says mann please
it is first time that listening ti waman words he stop his action on something
he feels he is changing but he wont accept his brain wont accept it

he says to get the papers again and this time he checks them twice and says to sign before she says sign she turns to mann and says THANX
he is shocked why she is saying thanx to him wht for?
he asks her wht u want nw?
she says nothing...but pls dont use that land for some wrong purpose like bars etc...
pls that ismy soul in hp...still i gave u...pls dont do that in mischevious with that land
that is the favour u can do for me...
u want to ask me this??????????this???????????
i thoght u ll ask me  to marr...
he stops by his own actions...wht he is gng to say...wht the hell...i m talking bat marriage that to with geet...no this cant...see geet why u want u said i ll sure that i ll take care of that land any wrong doesn't go there ok...
let's go...
i wont come with u...pls levae me alone...pls...
he feels he is right she is running with her bf
and he says that u r running with ur bf?
right
he cant feel that she is running with some one...his heart feels again broking...and jealous which is unknown to him
she says no...i want some peace...so i ll come alone...i should learn hw to be alone...pls leave me & go...
he drags her hand to come...he is abrusive with her...he odnt no why he is doing like that but he is feeling gud to do that
she abruptly leaves his hand & says i m not going anywhere if u want come to today night to  my house and see i ll be there
and by the way u r wok is finished so leave me nw...understand...she leaves his hand & goes form there...
he is just staring at he compltely
he is feeling some important thing is missing from his life
but he says he dont care for her...and leaves to temple

when she is trying to call gaurav...raji calls her says gaurav is here i hide him in the house pls come fast didi...
geet says ok...but she thinks while going back she want once to meet babaji...

she reaches there...mann also there at same time...but they dont see each other...
she feels someone of her own is here near her
he does feels the same thing...but he regrets those thoughts...he just feels onething that i want to check whether she ll be or not?
while coming back from the temple...
babaji es ladai jeetne ke liye mujhe himmat dena
mere honsla ko tutana math dena babaji...
es sach ki jang  me...mujhe appka sath chahiya...
mujhe kuch bhi nahi chahiye...bus todhi roshini dho...takhi es pathar dil ko...koi na kolsakhe...pls

endono ko ey nahi patha ki 
geet ke ladai me himmat mann hai
mann ki dil ki kolene wali aur uska roshini geet hai
kyunki enka maoohabat suru huwa hai

precap;mann knws the truth...

sorry for mistakes...pls comment 
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Edited by abisamratgunjan - 10 June 2011 at 2:04am

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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 5:01am | IP Logged
loved the update...
wat geet did with the biy was just perfect...
u know wat i hv tried something like that but all u get in return is swearing from them...
they curse u that u dont give money...
they r so used to this that they dont want to do any work at all even if u want to help them with work...
maan's attitude towards her is changing...
he is getting attracted towards her...
oh no marriage papers was it by mistake...
pl cont soon...
cant wait to c maan getting to know the truth abt her...

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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 5:25am | IP Logged
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post d next part soonClapClapoh maan will come 2 know d truth...


Edited by allibr - 02 June 2011 at 5:25am

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love geet and boy's convo...thnkx 4 pm...

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