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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice one do continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
[QUOTE=abisamratgunjan]part:1
dev:geet kaha hai meera?
meera:mujhe kya patha?
uski exam tumara hall me hena
yes but where she is nw?
let us search
hey there she is...

geet geet rukho yaar geet geet...
GEET;kyu chill ha rahi hu
aisa kya huwa
metho yahi ho
DEV;tumara packing
etna jaldi
GEET;woh actually eerji ni kaha
MEERA; tu bina jabi dekho veerji
uncle ji kehethi ho
ya chodao yar
mujhe ghar jana hai
veerji ni emergency kaha
wo atha hi hoga
kya tumara bro????????????

kyu kyahuwa
tum etna hairan????
tumara bro tho ek wof ki taraha hai
geet scowls on him
but she laugh...😊

tikhe toh phir kab/
patha nahi
patha nahimatlab
etna padayi karkr kya faida
tum topper ho unversuty ka
patha haena tujhe?
dev dekho ye sab mera paajine kiya hai
warna me tho bus 12th k padthi
maagr pls dev mujhe force math karo
hey geet rukhno mera dadi athi hogi

nahid ev path nahi dadi se pfir mil povunge yanahi
kyunki usne mujhe maa pyaar diya hai
es 6 yrs kaise ho gayi hum theeno ko
pehele BBM aur MBA
ha par sirf topper ho

hum nahi chodana yaar
mujhe jana hai
meera se milthi hu
par tumara path nahi
i miss u geet
me ttoo dev ab tum log jaou
varna veer ji tume datega
pls jauo

tikhe madam ji
but imiss u hope we ll meet soon
me too😭

in tears...

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Posted: 12 years ago
PART;2
chota saab ek bar sochiye
wok ek ladki hai
toh?
par?
munsh ji ys ap jantu ho MSK wahi katha hai jo woh chahe...
acha ye bataye woh ladki ki namm kya hai?
GEET HANDA...tikhe mey dekhtha use.

in delhi
veer ji app aye hai
toh nahi avunga kya?
ye sab kya pehantha hai?
ek kapade bui tokhnahi
hame unlog se kya pharak
pharak hai
aur tum apne padayitokhe ji ya koi bf ke chaker me tho nahi?
kya veer ji abi na
mey us type ki ladki nahi
tikhe chalo mujse koi bhi pyaar sebaathnahi kartha
path nahi kaun hoga woh...

aajse tumari zindigi badgayi GEET HANDA...aur sach toh ye hai ye handa naam bi tumari nahi ...kya kismaat hai meri?
shayid koi haimere liye?
tu bina geet...sochana bandh kar tumare liye koi nahi hey...ye logbhi parayi hai tumreliye...bus dekhn hai kikabtak mey aisa rahungi...

precap:mann meets geet but not wht he wann 
            rescue for geet...




Edited by abisamratgunjan - 12 years ago
Shruthe thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
good start... keep updating
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice introduction dear lovd it
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Posted: 12 years ago
i like the concept and story but shortened words make it very difficult to understand. Can you please use full spellings so that it is easier to read.
 
Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you for 2nd part maan going to meet geet and geet's life going to change wwowo thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice concepts.
love it.
do continue plz.
thx
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome n thanks 4 PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
part :3
hey muskan kiase hey tu?
i m fine. wht abt u?
delhi se ayi ho?koi bf hai kya?
chup pagli...u knw abt may family...i  cant take risk 
u knw abt dev...jab dev ne mujse bath ki verji ne dekha aur bahut data
dev acha issan esliye kuch nahiu huwa...varna patha nahi ...
ach ye batuo tum aur GAURAV ki rishtha kaha tak pahuch gayi hai
ghar me patha hai?
nahi geet...
veer ji se kehene ke liye daar hai??????????
dekhthi hu waqt ane par batugi...hey geet woh dekho mela
bachpan me gayi chalo na chlthe hai
tikhe...

in mela:
hey muskan woh dekho fortne teller?chale
ek minute wht is hopuld ask him?
ask at ur maariage with GAURAV
chup kar?
ask abt ur life partner...kk
shallw e go?

hello girls wht i can do for u??????????????????????
we wann to ask abt her life partner...
sure...
say ur name?
GEET sirf GEET...{kunki woh handa namm mera nahi hey}
when she says that  a person just stop his jeep infront of the mela
his jeep is not working at all
he did not no wht is the prob
he has muscular body
sharp eyes
he did no wht happened
he dont want nay one to help 
so he is just pushint the jeep to start
he just walks to the mela for water...to pump in jeep...

ur life partner is comnt today only into ur life...
when he comes just give this tabeez to him
and say him him to put over him
ever losse this tabeez
this one makes u both to be united all over the life...

she takes the tabeez and just some one nudges her
it goes ad fall on mann's neck

he turns back but did not notice anyone there
she searches for tabeez but she cant find it
she sees muskan faints at thta time
geet calls ambulance and send muska with them

DR;SHE IS PREGNANT
geet is shocked
thanx doc
tumne mujhe pehel kyu nhi batayi
sorry geet...woh woh woh...😭
hamara ghar mey kiseko patha chala tho...
pls geet ko math batuo mey sab solve karungi
tikhe sirk ek hapthe...kk
i ll leave nw
k geet...

when she is coming back some gundas sees her
mesmerise her beauty and follow her
she sees and runs
she just runs and go and nudges with MANN
she asks for the help but he just refuses it
he walk from there
but she runs as fast as hse can
she knws that she shouidf ace
but dont no hw??????????????????
she runs and fall in to the water

there she shouts help...help help...
help...
he sees it and goes for help...
he first time sees in to her eyes
which make him him to see himself in that
for time he cant understand wht he is upto 
but he turns his face 
and gets her from there 
adn leaves
he is fighting himslef wht happend to him when he touched her...
some kind of feeling...dont no the name...

precap: mann notices her eyes...

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Edited by abisamratgunjan - 12 years ago