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waiting eagerly please update honeymoon also


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u noe wat Apoorva ... wenever Updating or Update today ... or any such things r written on the top of the page rite my Heart Skips a beat ... lol 
Heart dhak-dhak ...

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When are u updating...when will this soon come.

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Okay...after reading all your comments...I decided that I will not end this ff and let it carry on! This ff is really dear to my heart because that is when I actually started to get some recognition on this ff and make such good friends with you all! okay part 41...I did try and make this relatively longer than my ladt 2 updates!! Wink So ENJOY!! LOL

Part 41

 

It had been four days after the engagement. The wedding was scheduled after two days, otherwise they would have to wait for another 2 years to get married. Preparations for the wedding were going in full flow...(He girls were helping meera find her dress for the wedding, they just couldn't finalise between 2 dresses that they had selected. Both were good but they still needed to pick one so they were discussing which would look good. On the other hand, the boys had some mischevious plans. They new that the girls were busy in sorting out their own issues that they wouldn't bother them. It was Maan, Yash, Arjun, Arman & Adi on a conference call.

 

Arman: Yash...be a man...tere paas sirf thode din bache hain...tu enjoy as a bachelor and your wasting it!

Yash: Kya yaar...agar meera ko pata chalgaya...toh woh mujhe jaan se mardalegi!

Arjun: Chill..yaar aisa kuch bahi hoga!

Adi: Haan yash...its your last days to enjoy!

Yash; tum log mujhe sab marvoge...Maan tumhe kya hogaya hai?? Tum kuch bol hi nahi re ho???

Maan: Koi tho sunne wala hona chahiye na...aur main kya bhollu...you know that I don't like such parties so you shouldn't be asking me!

Yash: see...maan bhi na bol raha hai!

Arjun: Par...

Arman: Oh leave it arjun...can't you see that yash dar raha hai bichara ki agar usne zyada peeli..tho kya hoga!

Adi: Hmm...tabhi toh manna kar raha hai...

Yash: Dekho guys...aisa kuch nahi hai...(He said with anger)

Arjun: Kyun ab kyun darr raha...shayad biwi se darr raha hoga?

Arman: haan...zor ka jhatka haye zorro se laga...shaadi ban gayi umr kaid ki saza...

Yash: Chup...bilkul chup...bachelor party kal hogi...(Then he leaves the phone abruptly)

Arjun: yahh...wo mangaya!! Chalo...main sab kuch organise kar lunga...bas tum log aa jana...

Maan: Hmm...I have a meeting, so I need to go...

 

Then they all hung up and got to their respective work. The whole day, maan was really busy and geet was on leave because she had all these preparations to do, and he was missing her but didn't want to disturb her! So he just did his work and retired to KM, meeting her for dinner.

 

He reached home and it was dimly lit. He spotted one of the servants, nakul. He called him and enquired about everyone.

 

Maan: Nakul...daadi aur sab kaha hai...

Nakul: Woh daadi, annie and arohi went to Meera's maams house for dinner and only geet maam is here. She was waiting for you sir so both of you can eat. Shall I call geet maam for you sir?

Maan: No its okay...you can go!

 

Maan crept upstairs without making a noise and stood outside geet's bedroom. He saw geet standing by the window, as the door was open. He slowly moved inside the room and stood directly behind her. Geet could sense him but didn't wish to turn around so she stood their gazing at the stars. He placed his arms around her waist from behind.

 

Maan: Mishty...how did you know it was me?

Geet: Maan...agar aap koi mask pehnke ayengena...tho bhi main aapko pechan jaongi...kyunki aap hi mera sab kuch ho...mera pyaar, vishvas aur sab se badi baath...mere dil main sirf aap baste ho...tho maine aapko kaise nahi pechanongi...

Maan: Acha...lagta hai meri mishty bahot romantic mood main hain...waise geet..mere dil main bhi sirf tum ho...aur koi nahi...

 

He then turned her around...and said

 

Maan: Geet...woh chand dekhrahi ho...yeh har raat nikalta hai...aur chahiye kitne bhi koshis na karle...raat ke chaaya se chup nahi sakta...raat ke saath rehna uski taqdeer hai...aur shayad tumare aur mere taqdeer main bhi...sirf ek dusre ka saath likha hai...

 

With that he pulls her closer and tucks the peice of strand that coming in front of her face. Geet was mesmerised with the depth of his love, that he had for her.

 

Geet: Maan...I love you...(and she huged him passionately)

 

No-one knew how long they had been there...until there was knock at the door. They both broked apart with the sudden noise.

 

Nakul: Geet maam...main khana lagadu?

Geet: Haan..nakul tum terrace pe khana lagado..hum bas aa rahe hain!

Nakul: Theek hain Maam...main sir ko inform kardeata hoon

Geet: Don't worry Nakul...main kehdungi unhe!

Nakul: Okay Maam...main chalta hoon! (nakul leaves)

Geet: Chaliye Maan...hum khana khate hain!

Maan: hmm...tho tumhe bahot bhook lagi hain! (She gives him an angry glare) Aur geet terrace pe? (he said mischeviously)

Geet: Haan..ab chalo!

 

They move to the terrace and there Maan sees a table with candles surrounding it, with rose petals everywhere, beautifying the terrace even more. The pleasant breeze brought them out reverie. Geet walked closed to him and whispered "Surprise".

 

Maan: geet...yeh sab tumne mere liye kiya...(he said mischeviously)

Geet: Nahi nakul ne kiya...(she said sarcastically)

Maan: Kya?...I mean r u sure! Matlab ki tumare paas ab competition hai...I mean I thought Nakul was straight par mujhe pata nahi tha ki woh gay hai...(Geet's mouth fell open) Ab mujhe dadima se baath karni padegi!

Geet: Maan (she hit him on his chest)

Maan: Ouch geet...

Geet: Dard hua? (she said innocently)

Maan: Hmm...(he said faking his pain)

Geet: Tho theek hain...aur lo! (she hit him again and walked off)

Maan: (Oh god...yeh naraz hogayi...main tho mazak kar raha tha!)

 

Then maan ran after her. She had her back facing to him.

 

Maan: Geet main mazak kar raha tha...

Geet: Chodiye mujhe...koi baath nahi sunni aapki! Jayiye...

 

He then put his arms around her waist and pulled her to him, so her back hit his chest. He then came close to her ear and whispered "I love your surprise Geet", her anger instantly melted but she still pretended to be angry and not talk to him. Maan slowly bent down and picked her up in his arms. Geet jumped due to the shock, evern if he had picked her up before.

 

Geet: MAAN...yeh aap kya kar rahe ho?

 

He didn't reply but sat on a chair while she was sitting on his lap. She felt really embarrassed at that and turned a dark shade of pink. She tried to get up but Maan's reflexes were quicker. He pulled her back immediately and put his arms around her waist so she couldn't move.

 

Maan: Geet...aaj main tumhe khilaunga...aur woh bhi mere godh main beht ke...

Geet: Par Maan...

Maan: Shh...warna hum saari raat yahi behte rehenge...

 

With this he fed her the first morsel of food.

 

Maan: Yeh lo...(she happily opened her mouth)

 

Then she fed him and slowly they both finished their food and went to sleep.

 

Precap: Bachelor Party

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Originally posted by tamanna1391

WOW ME FIRST AWSEM UPDATE THANX FOR ADDING ME TO YOUR BUDDY LIST

Its okay...actually u know what! I only send PM's once a week now because I am fed up of sending them!! LOL

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