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Posted: 18 October 2011 at 5:20am | IP Logged
wow wat a fabulous update 

loved maan for arranging a beautiful party

precap is interesting 

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Posted: 26 October 2011 at 8:48am | IP Logged
HAPPY DIWALI...everyone!! 

Apko asshirwad milai Ganesh se.

Vidya mile Saraswati se.

Daulat mile Laxmi se.

Khushiya mile Rab se.

Pyaar mile Sab se.

Yahi duwa hai is dil se.

"HAPPY DIWALI"



Part 36

 

The party had ended successfully. All the guests had left and the only people left was the gang. They were all sitting in the KM lounge, chatting away with each other.

 

Dadi: Kya Bete...aap tho humhe bhool hi gaye...waha jake..

Geet: Aap kaisi baatein kar rahi ho dadi maa? Main aapko kaise bhool sakti hoon?

Dadi: Hmm...ab aap india ayi hain...tho aap hamare saat yaha hi rahengi...aur Arohi tum bhi!

Geet: Dadi maa..yeh

Annie: Nahi...geet dadi maa theek keh rahi hai...tum yahi rahogi..mere saat aur tum bhi Arohi...after all we are sisters na...

Dadi: Hmm...sahi kaha...

Arohi: Maan  jao na Di...

Annie: Hmm..geet tum yahi hi rahogi...kyun bhai?

Maan: Haan ab Dadi maa keh rahi hain..tho tum yahi hi rahogi...

Geet: Theek hain...

Arohi: YEH...ab tho bahot hi maza ayega...Par Dadi...aaj raat main bhai ke ghar rukjao...kyunki kal Mum and Dad aa rahe hain aur mujhe unse milna hai!

Dadi: Sure beta...

Arohi: Waise Di...did you like our gift...

Geet: Hmm...mujhe bahot pasand aya...par mere kafi doubts hai...

 

Arohi and Annie look at each other...guiltily...

 

Arohi: Kya?

Geet: As in...how did you guys pay for it?

Annie: Tumare debit card se...

Geet: WHAT?

 

Everyone roars with laughter...

 

Arohi: Oh come on Di...its not like you needed the money...

Arman: yea...because its like you Di owns a bank...

Geet: No...I feel that I need to rob a bank kyunki yeh dono toh mujhe bankrupt hi kardelenge!

Yash: Waise..when did you have the doubts?

Geet: Since I got a phone call 2 hours ago...from the bank...they said that they think there has been fraud where someone else has been purchasing things from my card...they just wanted to confirm it and they said that they had a pretty good idea of who it was as they were caught on CCTV camera.

 

Annie and Arohi just looked shocked, while everyone else just burst out laughing.

 

Annie: (She gets angry) Tum log has rahe ho!

Arohi: Haan...tum log ko koi parwa hai kya...I mean kuch hogaya tho...

Yash: Princess...geet ke hote hua...tumhe kuch hosakta hai kya? I mean no-one can even touch you while she's there!

Arohi: Haan baat tho sahi hai...par Di...aapne unse kya kaha phir?

Geet: I said yes...ki it was my card but you were my sister and I told you to purchase it and the car is right now in possession!

Annie: You can't lie can you...

Geet: Nope...

Dadi: Wah...bete maan gaye aapko...

Meera: hmm...Geet...meri dost itni successful hai...mujhe nahi pata tha...

Annie: Meera...tune isse kabhi board room main nahi dekha na...agar dekhe gi...toh hairan hojayegi...

Geet: KYA?

Annie: Aur nahi tho kya...I mean when she is in the board room, everyone is silent. People start stammering infront of her when giving the presentation. Sometimes...I have to tell her...ki agar tu nahi ayegi na...toh hi hame yeh deal milegi...but shes a nice boss...but when it comes to work...tho duniya..idhar ki udhar hojaye...kaam pehle hi aata hai...workaholic...kyun?

Geet: Kyun meri band baja rahi ho...sabke samne...tumhe pata hai ki main kaam kyun karti hun...I mean tum log ab aise karche karte rahoge...tho kisi kho tho kaam karna padega na...warna main jail main chali jaongi...

Arman: oh ho geet...woh police wale tumare samne haat jodke kardhe rahenge...aur kahenge...please maam...aap humpe aisan kijeye...aur jayiye yahase...aur agar tum kisi ka khoon bhi kardoligee na...tho bhi tumhe koi pakadne ke liye nahi ayega...actually they will be happy ke woh insaan ab zinda nahi raha...I mean someone troubling the great Geet handa...impossible!

Geet: Arman...itna mazak mat udao...aur waise bhi yeh sab maine kab ka chod diya hai...

Mohit: Kaun mazak kar raha hai Geet...woh sach tho bol raha hai!! Aur waise bhi sab tumse bahot hi darthe hain...and from your power..par tum itni achi ho...ki tum hardly gussa hoti ho...

Meera: Aur jab gussa hoti hai toh...nuclear bombs hi phatjate hai na...

 

With this everyone just started to laugh...

 

Geet: Bas karo...guys...aur haan...thanks for the party...I think this has been the best birthday ever...so thankyou so much...

Dadi: Bete...aapko toh pata hai ki diwali aa rahi hai...aur humhe kuch karna chahiye...

Pinky: Haan dadi...kyun nahi...

Yash: Hmm...time for celebration aur ab tho reunion hogaya hai na...

Arjun: Hmm...Annie aur arohi bhi aagayi hai...

Annie: Par sab free hai?

Maan: Ek hi toh din kit oh baat hai...

Geet: Nahi...ek din...nahi...pure 4 din!

Maan: Kya? Tumhe KC pet ala lagana hai kya?

Geet: Nahi...aur 4 din main kuch nahi hota...aur waise bhi maine toh meri company ek mahine se nahi dekhi...aur woh achi chal rahi hai...

Maan: Geet...hum 4 char din ki chutti lekhe kya karenge?

Geet: Maan mujhe pata hai ki aapka pehle pyar kaam hai...par usse char din ke liye toh chod hi sakte hai na...

Maan: Absolutely not...

Dadi: MAAN...hum keh rahe hain...ki aap 4 din humare saat diwali manaenge...aur bas yeh humara final decision hain...aur haan...tum log bhi...

 

ALL: Okay dadi...

Dil: Par hum karenge kya?

Geet: Woh tum mujpe chod dho...bas aap log...4 din le liye...kapde pack kar lo...ek suitcase main...some casual, formal and Indian...theek hain...aur haan luggage ki chinta mat karo...jitna lejana hai utna lejasakte ho...

Maan: Matlab hum city se bahar jarahe hain? Par dadimaa...

Geet: Dadi maa ki responsibility mere upar hain...aur don't worry dadi maa...traveling will not be very hectic...aisa hi samaj lo ki hum sote sote ja rahe hain...aur sote sote wapas aa rahe hain...

Annie: Wow...Geet...matlab kuch hatke hoga!

Geet: hmm...chalo...I think we should all go to sleep...subha ke nau...baje...Khurana Mansion main milte hain...

All: Okay...

 

Everyone left except Geet. Arohi went with Yash as she was staying at Handa Mansion.

-

 

Geet: Dadi...main abhi pinky ke ghar ja rahi hoon...kyunki mera saman sab waha hain...

Dadi: Humne sab shift karwa diya hai...Maan Geet ko upar kamra dikhao...

Maan: Ji...daadi...


Maan leads geet upstairs, and shows her the room.



Geet: Wow...yeh kamra tho bahot hi acha hain...

Maan: Hmm...maine decorate karwaya hai...

Geet: Thanks bahot hi acha hai...aur Maan...mujhe pata hai ki yeh party, woh Spa treat aur sab aapka hi idea tha...thankyou...aaj tak kisine mere liye itna nahi kiya...aur rahi baat woh trip ki jo hum kal nikal rahe hain...uske liye sorry...mujhe pata hai ki aapko kaam chodna pasand nahi hain...

Maan: Geet...tum kaisi baat kar rahi ho...tum meri sabse achi dost ho...aur main ek achi dost ke liye itna bhi na karpao...aisa kabhi ho sakta hai kya? Aur rahi baat kal ki trip ki...haan mujhe kaam ki tension pehle ho rahi thi...par kaam se zyada important hai...family aur friends...aur you are practically part of this family. I mean look at Dadi..she seems to love you and you have a great bonding with Annie. You are friends with Arjun and me and you...well

Geet: Hmm...me and you! Best Friends...

Maan: Hmm...tho no sorry or thankyou in friendship!!

Geet: Theek hain...good night Maan...

Maan: Good night Geet...(he gave her a quick hug and left the room)

 

Geet stayed up for another couple of hours making all the necessary arrangements. Maan retired to his room and dozed off thinking about tomorrows trip.

 

-

 

In the morning, there was hustle and bustle in Khurana Mansion. Everyone seemed to be getting ready and at sharp 8.00 Dadi, Maan, Annie, Arjun and Geet were on the dining table. Nakul layed out all the breakfast.

 

Geet: Wah...dadi...nashte main maza agaya...I mean ab kaun aloo ke parathe kathe hain...ab tho sab continental food kathe hain...aur woh itna bland khana...

Maan: Geet...continental khana healthy hota hai aur usme itna sab oil nahi hota...

Geet: Tho kya kua...desi-khana...zyada tasty hota hai!

Maan: Nahi...

Geet: haan

Maan: Nahi

Geet: haan

Dadi: Uffo...aap log bhi na...sab log yaha aate hi honge!

Annie: Geet...plan kya hai?

Geet: Surprise hain...

Arjun: Geet...bata na...

Geet: Nope...tum log bas patiently wait karo! Its more of a holiday and its to relax you.

Annie: Wow...I am loving it already!

 

By 8.45, everyone was there, with their luggage.

 

Geet: Chalo guys...lets go.

Annie: kaha?

Geet: tum chalo toh sahi...

 

Everyone stepped outside, and were standing on the steps of khurana mansion. Suddenly 4 jeeps and 2 cars pulled in through the gates, lined in front of them . All the drivers came out of their vehicles and stood before Geet. The head driver came to Geet...

 

Head Driver: Good Morning Maam...

Geet: good morning...you know the plan. Meet us at the destination. All of you go in one car  and we will meet you there. Then I need all of you to bring back the vehicles.

Head Driver: Yes maam...

 

All the drivers stepped into 1 car. Geet turned to everyone else.

 

Geet: Tum log apni apni sawari choose karo and these are the keys. I will be driving the first jeep as I know where to go aur phir tum sab just follow karna...theek hain.

Arjun: Cool..

Yash: Yep...fine!

 

1st Jeep: Geet and Maan

2nd Jeep: Annie, Arohi & Arjun.

3rd Jeep: Arman, Riddhima & Dil.

4th Jeep: Pinky, Adi & Mohit.

1st Car: Yash, Meera and Dadi.

2nd Car: All the Drivers.


Maan: Wow...tumne toh bahot hi ache tareeke se sab kuch arrange kiya...I mean you got the car for Dadi maa...nice thinking.

Geet: Thanks...ab toh bahot saare surprises baaki hain...

Maan: Acha...

Geet: Hmm...aapne ab tak Geet ka jaadu dekha kaha hain?

Maan: Hmm...dekna padega!

 

-

 

After half an hour of the journey, they arrived at the docs, where a beautiful cruise was waiting for them.

 

Arohi: Wow...Di...hum isme ja rahe hain...

Geet: Yea...

Arjun: Cool...

Pinky: Yeh tho kitna bada hain...

 

The cruise was a holiday cruise, which was owned by Geet herself, and the staff was hers, however no-one knew this because she had just recently bought this and had kept it to herself.

 









All the drivers were given back the keys of the jeeps.

 

Geet: Thanks...now take the jeeps back and I want you all here at my given time and place. Also shift the luggages into the cruise while you are here...

Head Driver: Yes Maam...

 

The whole gang went in the cruise and started to explore it. The cruise staff greeted them, and the captain said that they would be sailing in 15 minutes. There were 30 cabins int the cruise ship, which was enough for the whole gang but it also accomodated the staff, which was working on the cruise. Maan saw how Geet handled, everything. She was really calm with the staff and really patient, she was a good boss to have. On the cruise, there was a small swimming pool, a bar, 2 restaurants, a lounge and on the deck nice seating arrangements.

 

Geet: Tho Maan...surprise kaisa laga?

Maan: Bahot hi acha hai geet...aur mujhe lagta hai ki in log ko bahot pasand bhi ayega!

Geet: Hmm...actually London main rehkar maine itni diwali celebrate toh naho ki hain...toh aaj India main hoon toh man lag gaya!

Maan: Don't worry...iss saal hum dhoom dham se diwali celebrate karenge!

 

Just then the captain announced that they would reach the destination within 9 hours, so 6pm they would be where they wanted to. The whole gang had fun on the cruise ship. The men were drinking and enjoying while the women were talking. Some of them went for a little swim. Geet was sitting on the deck talking with dadi while Maan was casually stealing glances at her. The cruise staff were really entertaining, some of them sung songs and some of them were juggling with bottles. Who would have thought that travelling could be this enjoyable. After some time, most of the women went to sleep while the men went for a little swim (Arjun, Yash, Maan, Mohit & Armaan. Geet was just sitting on a deck chair reading a newspaper when Armaan and Arjun approached her, she missed the mischevious glint in their eyes.

 

Arjun: Geet kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: Arjun newspaper pard rahi hu na...just checking the economic status of country.

Armaan: Acha...but geet it's such a nice weather...I mean you should go for a little swim...

Geet: no thanks...tum log enjoy karo! Mujhe rehne do!

Arjun: Arre...hum aisa kaise kar sakte hain...I mean...leave you all alone.

 

Just then, Arman snatched the newspaper and Arjun & Armaan picked her up and threw her into the pool.

 

Geet: AHHH... (All the boys just burst out laughing)

 

Geet stood in the pool and was soaked from head to toe.

 

Geet: ARMAN...yeh tumara idea hi ho sakta hai...I will get you back for all of this! (She said angrily)

Arman: Ab Geet...ab toh tum bheeg chukhi ho...ab toh humare saat khelo! Phir baad main newspaper pad na...

Geet: KYA? Yaha main itni tension main hoon...aur tumhe mazak sujh raha hai? Waha shares gir raha hai...aur main

Maan: Geet...chill! Teri company ko kuch nahi hone wala! Aur agar tum 4 din ke liye...tum kaam nahi karogi toh tala nahi lagne wala!

Geet: okay fine...kya khelna hai?

Arjun: Volley Ball...There will be 2 teams, me, you & Arman against Maan, yash & Mohit! See thats why we needed you because to make it an even team.

Geet: Couldn't you just call Adi Sir?

Yash: Yea..but he's busy romancing and you weren't doing anything important so...

Geet: Kis se?

Yash: Don't worry about that...

Arman: Aur waise bhi you are good...toh we need a good player on our team!

Geet: Haha...zyada makhan lagane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai! Chalo...lets start the game...I am already soaked!

 

The game began...

 

Maan threw the ball over the net which Geet defended really well, which was caught by Yash and then to Arman but Mohit couldn't receive it. So 1 point to Geet's Team. Both of the teams played really well but in the end Maan's Team won, that too by cheating. Since Geet's team won the last point, it was Maan's Team to start and soon as they released the ball, Maan winked at Geet and she lost the concentration so Geet couldn't hit the ball, and they lost! Everyone left the swimming pool except Maan and Geet. Maan walked to Geet, in the swimming pool.

 

Geet: Maan yeh cheating hai...

Maan: All's fair in love and war...mishty...(he pecked her on the cheek and left the swimming pool)

 

Geet stood their shocked. It took her some time to recover from the sweet shock. She then went to her cabin to shower, and made herself look presentable, by this time everyone had woken up. She came out an saw that it was 1 hour for them to reach so she called the staff so they can lay out the dinner foe them. It was a nice enjoyable evening for them all.

 

Annie: Geet this was really enjoyable...

Arohi: Haan Di...maza agaya...I mean I never knew that I would love nature this much!

Dadi: Haan...kya planning ki hai...bete!! I mean normally I would expect something like this from Maan because he is like that...par aap bhi...

Pinky: Haan geet...yeh toh ek holiday ship lag raha tha...I mean itna bada ship! Bahot hi maza aya...aur cabin toh...bus wow amazing!

Adi: HAHAHA...Geet..such main...it was amazing!

Arman: Haan..par you guyz missed all the fun...I mean dupar ko...

Riddhima: Kya hua dupar ko...

 

At this Geet shoots an angry glare to Arman and he just shuts up!

Geet: Kuch nahi...doc...woh mazak kar raha tha!

Riddhima: Hmm...par I agree with everyone else..that this was a really good trip!

Geet: Thanks doc...

Meera: Ab tho...I am looking forward to your next surprise...and If I know you well toh I know that ki woh surprise isse bhi aura cha hoga!

Geet: Thats for you to decide...

Meera: I knew it!

 

With this they finish their dinner. The ship landed, at the harbour, and they all looked outside, and were amazed.

 

Precap: Where has the ship landed?? Diwali ki celebrations dhoom dham se chal rahi hai...

This was really long update...so I want long comments...hope you like my little diwali treat!! Wink Have a good day...and remain safe & keep supporting Geet! 

Part 37



Edited by -maankimishty- - 22 January 2012 at 6:08am

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lovely part dear...Clap
happy diwali dear...Smile

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Happy Diwali...
will read and comment...

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thanx for the pm..
luvd it a lot...
maneet's romance started!eagerly waiting to noe where dey landed..

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lovely update Smile
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