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Maaneet Ki Prem Kahani - Thread 1 (Page 5)

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 11:07am | IP Logged

Here is part 4 guys...keep commenting and letting me know your views! Here is another part to cheer you guys up on this boring saturday! 

Part 4


(A the same time...Geet is on the phone with Annie)

 

Annie: Flight kaisi hai?

Geet: Flight achi thi! Ab Miss Anvesha Khurana ne choose ki hai tho achi hi hogi na...

Annie: Haan wo tho hai...waise tu kaha per hai? Aur itna shor kyun hai?

Geet: Hum sab friends disc main aye hai...sab log tume bahot miss kar rahe hai.

Annie: Wow...Miss Geet...India ane main ek din bhi nahi huan...aur tumare toh rang hi badal gaye...I mean Geet Handa aur Disc! Waise main tume achi tarah se jaanti hun! Tum disc ayi ho per salwar kameez main...hai na?

Geet: Haan...per kya karu! U know na..I like to be down to earth!

Annie I know! Waise...Tumare bhai ko phone ko inform kiya kya ke tu delhi main hai?

Geet: Unhe inform karne ka kya fayda...woh toh new York main hain na!

Annie: OMG...main toh bhool hi gayi tujhe batane ke liye...

Annie: Ki Yash shifted from New York to Delhi just two days ago...unka phone ayatha per tum bahot busy thi tho maine baat karli!

Geet: Oh no...teehk hai...Thanks for giving me the news!

Annie: Sorry yar, galti hogayi! Ab mujhe jana hoga...ab sidhe interview ke baad phone karna! Theekh hain!

Geet: Ok..take care! Bye

Annie: Bye

 

Geet is slowly walking back to the table. (Meera spots Geet, Pinky and Dil are involved in a convo)

Meera: Yeh lo agayi...jaansi ki raani! (The boys cannot see who she is because a waitor is blocking their view).

At the same time the waitor is taking the order for their second round of drinks. Geet is still busy on her phone so she does not notice the boys. Geet is standing near the table...when the waitor spots her and asks her what she would like to order.

Waitor: Maam aap kuch lengi?

Geet: Can I have a dry martini please? (The waitor moves out the way and the boys see her...Yash, Mohit and Arjun are too shocked to talk.)

Waitor: Ok Madaam...(waitor is about to leave)

Geet: Rukho...bhayia..pura order tho lelo...

Waitor: Ji Madam!

Geet: A dry martini...with 3 measures of Gordons, 1 measure of Vodka, half a measure of Kina Lillet...shaken until ice cold and served with a large thin slice of lemon peel! Got it?

Waitor: Ji Madam...(Everyone is looking at her...this time geet looks up and is shocked to see everyone there) The waitor goes!

Yash stands up...

Yash: Geet...tum yaha?

Geet: haan...bhayiya!

Maan: (Ohh...toh yeh Yash ki choti behn hai...that he is too fond of)

Geet hugs Yash...

Yash: Tum delhi main kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: Holiday pe ayi hun aur thoda kaam karne...u know a change of environment.

Geet and Yash sit down.

Geet: Hi Mohit...hi arjun! Kaise ho tum log?

Mohit: Geet hamare saat itna formal maat bano...theek hai!

Arjun: Haan yaar...waise arohi kaisi hain?

Geet: Achi hain..2 months and then she done!! Waise tum use call kar sakte ho!

Arjun: Hmmm...(Geet smirks)

Geet: Waise tum log mujhe introduce karoge (referring to Adi and Maan) ya mujhe khud introduction dena padega?

Yash: Tum bilkul nahi badli...yeh maan hain...mera best friend aur arjun ka bada bhai.

Geet: hi...(Maan and Geet shake hands)

Maan: Tumare bhare main bahot sunna hai!

Geet: burra ya acha?

Maan: nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai...

Geet: Main mazak karahi thi!

Arjun: Aur yeh adi...hamara dost!

Geet: Hi nice'meeting you.

 

Meanwhile waitor comes with Geet's Drink.

 

Waitor: Yeh lijye maam...apka special drink!

Geet: Thankyou...

Meera: Geet yeh kya hai?

Geet: Drink hai...

Mohit: Haan...yeh toh hame bhi pata hai ki yeh drink hai...jab tu order kar rahi thin a..tho tune us bichare waitr ko shock dediatha..(Geet making a baby face)

Yash: Geet...tum tho aisa order kar rahi thi ki tum James Bond ki biwi ho...

Mohit: Kuch aisa hi samaj lo...(Geet giving Mohit an angry glare)

Yash staring at Mohit...

Geet: Mohit...kuch bhi bolta rehta hai!

 

Precap: Shaadi...kiski shaadi?

Part 5



Edited by -maankimishty- - 22 January 2012 at 5:42am

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 11:17am | IP Logged
loved Geet's orderWink
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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 11:18am | IP Logged
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wow finally geet n maan meet...
it was brilliant... 
loved the way she orders the drinks lol :P
Not shy at all ordering drinks...
x
thanks for the PM
Update soon
xx


Edited by Nazmaa - 28 May 2011 at 11:24am

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 11:29am | IP Logged
Interesting...pls add me to ur pm list

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 11:31am | IP Logged
Awesome update::
Finally maaneet met
Wow geets drink is really special,,the waiter would hav fallen asleep soon if she hadn't finished
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 11:47am | IP Logged
hey apoorvashah plz add me to ur pm list n pm me wenevr u update this ff... i relly lykd it...Smile
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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 12:56pm | IP Logged

Oooh interesting precap

I love the way Geet made the order...calling the waiter back

Please add me to your PM list

Cant wait for more!

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Nice updates yaar please can u add me to ur pm list and do continue soon i m waiting dear

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