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Maaneet Ki Prem Kahani - Thread 1 (Page 47)

MishtyShah Goldie

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Posted: 13 July 2011 at 11:30pm | IP Logged

Please comment and like this update...sorry for the mistakes it was kind of rushed! :(

Part 26


Arman: OMG...Brij! Geet get out of here...your not safe!

Geet: Nahi...main kahi nahi jaongi! Tum log ki zindagi dao pe lagi hain..


~  Flashback ~


Geet, Brij and Annie went to the same college in London. Geet was the a very shy and quiet girl of her time and her beauty had just made every boy in college mad about her. She was asked on so many dates but she just refused. On the other hand, a new guy had just joined college. She was coming out of class when she just bumped into him...


Geet: Oh I so Sorry...

Brij: No it's okay...I should have been more careful.

Geet: I am geet

Brij: Hi I am Brij...I am new here! (He looked at her and immediately got attracted to her)

Geet: Oh...canteen chale...

Brij: Yh sure...i need a coffee (Every guy was jealous and was staring at this newcomer)


They were sitting in the cafe when Annie joined them...


Annie: Hi

Geet: Hi...annie..this is brij...he is new here and Brij this annie, my best friends and more of a sister.

His lustful eyes looked at annie however annie did not notice this.

Brij: Hi...


Everyday, Brij, Geet and Annie would come closer and closer and they were soon best friends that the college loved. It was a beautiful day when Brij had proposed to Geet on the side of a lake and she had accepted. On their engagement day  when Arohi had disappeared. 

She was kidnapped.


Geet: Oh my god...what is happening? something...Brij

Brij: Looks like we will have to wait for the caller.

Geet: But...

Annie: No..Geet we can't do anything right now because the kidnapper wants something.


During this time Geet was only 18 and Arohi was 13 so she was even more worried because she was practically a child.After two hours of waiting the kidnapper called.


Kidnapper: Hamare paas tumari behen hai...Agar tum usse zinda chahti ho tho...I want 1 million in cash by tomorrow evening.

Geet: Par..

Kidnapper: Aur ek aur baath...agar police ko contact karne ki koshish kit ho I will kill her on the spot. Jagah aur pata main apne dusra call main bataunga!


The line went dead. Geet went into her room and shut herself. All night she was thinking of what to do...she had so much money and her family had so much money that one million was nothing for them, but she did not want to trouble her family at the time. This would all have to be pre-planned and no-one must know what I am doing not even Annie or Brij.


By the  morning, Geet had already arranged the 1 million that they asked for and went straight out the door. Her uncle was high up in the police force in London so she went to talk to him and he suggested that the secret service should look at it because they were the ones that could have really helped her. By the time she reached home the kidnapper had called and had given her an address of remote locatation in the surburbs of London where even if you screamed, no-one could hear you but she had back-up.


She went in, it was a shabby little place. It was dark and cold and had an uneasy atmosphere. Then suddenly someone grabbed her from behind and jerked her around, placed the gun at the middle of her chest. While someone else grabbed the suitcase she was holding. She wanted to shout and protest but the words suddenly got stuck in her throat.


Kidnapper 1: It was not a good decision for you to come alone

Geet: leave me...Where is Arohi?

Kidnapper 1: She is fine...but you will not be after we are through with you...

Geet: (She screamed) Ahhh...


Someone who was passing by caught her scream and was suddenly there rescue her...


Man: Leave her...I said Leave her!

Kidnapper 2: Why what will you do ha? Is she your girlfriend?


The man got irrated and punched him straight in the stomach and grabbed the kidnapper 2's gun. He aimed it at Kidnapper 1.


Man: Leave her or you both die...

Kidnapper 1: Not so easily. (This time geet took the initiative and kicked him between his legs so he fell back and grabbed his gun)

Man: Wow...I really did not need to help you...

Geet: Thanks for saving me...I requested back-up but they havn't reached here...yet!

Man: Hmm...well I am Arman!

Geet: Nice meeting you Arman and I am Geet... (She told him everything that had happened so far)


The back-up finally arrived and Arohi was badly hurt. It seemed that she was drugged so she was immediately hospitalised. 2 days later, the MI6 team had come back to her after fully interrogating the two kidnapper and gathering full eveidence, they said that Brij is one who is responsible for everything. She got showed many evidences and with that she sent him to jail.


Brij: Me aunga Geet...aur jab main aunga tab main tumari zindagi barbad kardunga!

Geet: Tumhe jo karna hai karlo...But I will be ready.


Arter that Incident, Geet had joined the civil service and had met Armaan again because he was also doing the same program. They became very good friends. This incident had changed Geet in many ways because she became more bolder and didn't want to trust in love again because she thought that the person will leave you anyway and go but in her heart she knew that one day this will all change. She came clean with her parents and told them that Brij was only doing this for money, they had a shock but then soon got back from it as they did not want to turn them selves weak. Yash was outraged but he was proud of Geet because she handled the situation so well.


~  End of Flashback ~


Geet suddenly stood up.

Brij: Tumhe kya laga Geet ki main tumhe chod dunga! 7 saal jail main sadta raha sirf aur sirf tumari wajah se...par main tumhe nahi chodunga! Tum sab maroge...

Geet: Tumhe jo karna hai karlo...maine kaha that na ki jab tum lautoge thab main ready hongi! (Brij takes out a gun and points it at her)

Brij: This is called...check and mate...tumhe kya laga ki main Aditya ko marna chahta hun...nahi...nishana tho tum ho aur shikaar main!

Armaan and Maan get up. Some of Brij's men enter and start causing havoc. They start shooting at random people. Aditya's guard's are alerted and they keep them busy throughout.

Arman and Maan are busy kicking and punching any men of Brij that they see.

The young lady walks to Geet and punches her but Geet successfully blocks her. She thusts her leg in the air while Geet grabs her leg and then twists it around so she flown back into the air. There are two men approaching Maan and he punches Both of them at the same time.




Dil had followed Mohit as she was worried of what he would do. She saw him and ran to him.


Dil: Mohit...mujhe do...maybe I can deactivate it.

Mohit: Ok I will help...

After studying the bomb for a long time...Dil cuts the right wires to make sure the

bomb had been properly deactivated. In all of the excitement, she had engulfed him in a passionate hug and then after some time they broke apart.

Dil: Don't ever do that to me again...what would I do without you? (She starts crying)

Mohit: Heyy...shh (He wipes her tears) mujhe kuch nahi hua hai...and he brings her in a bear hug.


They return to the lobby to find the caos and Mohit joins Arman while Dil is trying to help Geet. Aditya was safely escorted out the building with his guard. In the midst of things, Maan had lost his gun because she was busy fighting with his strong arms and legs. I mean he was Maan Singh Khurana after all. The whole of the MI6 team came and was fighting with any weapon that they had. Brij was also fighting himself with maan when he suddenly lost it and pointed the gun at Maan.


Brij: Bas Bahot hogaya...tujhe pehli hi marna tha...toh mujhe pehle batana hotana...main kuch aur intezaam karleta...tumare liye...

Maan: Tum jo chaho tum kar sakte ho...


Precap: Precap: Geet: Nahi...(she dogdes everyone and comes infront to protect Maan)

Part 27

Edited by -maankimishty- - 22 January 2012 at 5:59am

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Posted: 13 July 2011 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
Great update! OMG! Brij? What, i did not expect that. Can't wait for the precap! Thanks for the update and PM!

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Sabmeratu. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 July 2011 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
awesome update
urgggh hate that brijAngry
hope maan or geet dont get injured or hurt
cont soon Xx...
thx 4 the PM
nai1311_ysp Goldie

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Posted: 14 July 2011 at 12:05am | IP Logged
great part ...
geet loved brij  was unexpected...
finally bomb deactivated ...
quite interesing...
update soon...

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Tyro IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 July 2011 at 12:14am | IP Logged

so it was all abt geet...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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mitzi11 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 July 2011 at 12:16am | IP Logged
i hope maan & geet save
superb part
love it
cont soon
ty 4 pm

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abinash079 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 14 July 2011 at 1:29am | IP Logged
superb update hope nothing happens to maaneet
dear when would geet come to know about aniee and maan's relationship
and r u updting again tomorow

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piya- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 14 July 2011 at 2:19am | IP Logged

Loved the flashback ... geet was going to marry brij...achha hua uski asliyat jald hi saamane aa gayi

ok so again today's update was action packed...fighting shiiting
precap don't tell me k geet ko goli lagi hai maan ko bachathe bachate
good update
love -Piya

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