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Maaneet Ki Prem Kahani - Thread 1 (Page 3)

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 1:42pm | IP Logged
wow...awsome update,
cant wait to read more.
thx

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
Awesome concept
Nice start
So Annie sent geet to India to work in KC to see how it is actually lyk working in a company
Cont soon Xx...
And du add me 2 PM list plzz::
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Part 2

(At the Airport)

 

Geet is walking out of the airport when she see Pinky waiting to receive her. Pinky waves to her and Geet waves back.

 

Pinky: Geet yar...tu kaisi hai?

Geet: Bilkul teekh hun yaar...tu bata?

Pinky: Mein bhi teenkh hun...chal ghar chalte hai! Bahot sari baatein karni hai tujse.

 

Pinky and Geet leave for Pinky's house.

 

(At Khurana Constructions)

 

Maan is working when he receives a phone call from Yash. Maan picks up the phone.

 

Maan: hello?

Yash: Aaj ka plan kya hai boss?

Maan: Kuch nahi bas...kaam finish karke ghar jane ki programming hai. Kyun?

Yash: Mujhe laga ki bahot dino se dosto se mila nahi hun tho aaj kuch karte hai.

Maan: What do you want to do?

Yash: Disc chalte hain...bahot mazza ayega!

Maan: Nahi yaar...tujhe toh pata hai ki main ladkiyan se kitni nafraat karta hoon...I prefer to maintain a distance.

Yash: Maine tujhe girlfriend boyfriend khelne ke liye nahi bulayia! Just come...you will have an awesome time. You know just us guys for a change. Kaam tho hota hi rehta hai...ab enjoy bhi karlo!

Maan: Nahi mujhe...

Yash: Teekh hai...ek kam karna hum log ladkian ke saath flirt aur dance karenge...aur tum ek khone mein (in a corner) khade rehna...statue of liberty ke jaise! Ab khush??

Maan: Theek hain...kab milana hai?

Yash: 8 o'clock sharp at our regualar disc. Main Mohit ko bol detha hoon aur tum Adi aur Arjun ko inform kar dena. What about prem?

Maan: He is out of town at the moment regarding a business deal.

Yash: Ok...jab wo vapas ayega...ek aur party kar lenge.

Maan: Yash tum bhi na...

Yash: Main kya...Acha shaam ko milthe hain. Bye

Maan: Bye

 

Meanwhile...Pinky and Geet reach home. Pinky shows Geet her new room as she is going to be living as a paying guest.

 

Geet: Wow...Pinky...kitna sunder hai! (She jumps on the bed) Aur yeh bed kitna comfortable hai...!

Pinky: hehe...teekh hain...ab tum fresh ho jao tab tak main khana lagwathi hun.

 

Geet goes to washroom to get freshen up and suddenly yells...

 

Geet: AHHH...COCKROACH (She runs out of the bathroom and climbs on the bed...meanwhile Pinky runs back into her room)

Pinky: Kya huwa...why are you yelling?

Geet: (She points towards the bathroom door)

Pinky: Kya?

Geet: Cockroach...bathroom...main!

Pinky: Bas itni si baath! LOL(starts walking to towaards the bathroom)

Geet: (Babaji Pinky ko bachalena...uski umer hi kya hai!) Clap

 

Pinky comes out and has successfully removed the cockroach. Geet goes to freshen up and comes to the dining room to eat.

 

Pinky: Khana kaisa hai?

Geet: La jawab hai...tujhe kaise pata ki mujhe Punjabi khana pasand hai?

Pinky: Annie ne bataya! Geet..agar tu thaki nahi hai na toh aaj raat ko hum log bhar chalte hai...maine 2 din ke liye chuti leli hai, tujhe delhi jo dikahana hai.

Geet: Theekh hai..chalte hai! Kahaan jana hai?

Pinky: Disc chalte hai...delhi ki nightlife dikhadoongi...aur sab friends kho invite karte hain.

Geet: Haan...main meera, aur dil ko inform kardoongi. Wo bhi delhi main hi hain...Bas annie ki kami hai! Waise Pinky mujhe tujse ek baat puchni thi?

Pinky: Kya?

Geet: Annie ne mujhe bataya ki tune ek interview ka arrange kiya...can you please tell me all the details?

Pinky: Actually...main ek company main kaam karthi hun...called Khurana Contructions. Waha ek secretary ki zarurat hai tho 2 din ke baad interviews chal rahe hai...tho maine ek tere liye bhi arrange kiya hai. Teekh hai na...

Geet: Haan...waise boss kaisa hai?

Pinky: Bilkul DD

Geet: DD? Confused

Pinky: Haan..DD! Sab une office main Dhak Dhak bulate hai because he is so HOT Embarrassed...per wo koi ladki taraf dekta hi nahi hai!

Geet: Mujhe toh bohot attitude wala lag raha...

Pinky: He is but he is so hot! (Pinky lost in day dreaming about DD and geet has gone in the kitchen to clean the dishes!)

 

Precap: Disc...will they meet?

Part 3



Edited by -maankimishty- - 22 January 2012 at 5:41am

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 1:52am | IP Logged
awesome parts... do con...
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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 2:03am | IP Logged
nice start,
but Annie really wants her to get experience regarding working OR she is setting her up for his bro ;)
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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 2:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by t_areeb

nice start,
but Annie really wants her to get experience regarding working OR she is setting her up for his bro ;)

No actually...Geeet had become depressed which was afftecting her work so Annie thought that if you had a change of atmosphere...it could bring the life back in her! Actually annie herself does not know that Pinky works in Khurana contructions! Smile

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