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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome...!!!!!!!!!
cntnue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow apoorva what an update
 
ok so maan geet ka peecha karte hue waha tak pucha
 
ofho geet ke pyar ne toh maan ko andha hi kar diya hai wo ye bhi bhool gaya k they were in a shopping mall
 
wow geet k liye maan saree select karta hai 😳😳😳
 
geet maan ke wounds par dawa lagathi hai😳😳😳
 
wow both maan n geet were thinking k wo ek dusare se dur nahi ja sakte
 
precap k baare mein itna tho  pata hai k maneet ko kuch nahi hoga
 
loved ur update
 
Love -Piya
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part.
loved it.
 precap is interesting.
 continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
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Posted: 12 years ago
maaneet moment ...awesome...
fabulous part...waiting for the next part...

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part...

so maan has joined their mission...

loved the way she opened up to him...

continue soon...

thnx for Pm...

PS -- i hope ur hand is well now...take care...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks guys...My arm is better and all you should sit back in your seats now because for the three days..you will have shock par shock!! ðŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loveee the part!
Continue soonnn.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Here is the next part...sorry that there is a very little of Maaneet but the last part was to compensate it and I will warn you that the next part will not be uploaded 2morrow but on Sunday because it is going to be a long part for me to write and I will need a little timw to do my research also...so please bare with me! Sorry for the mistakes...and please keep commenting..I love to read your comments and it encourages me more to write and don't forget to LIKE ðŸ˜‰

Part 24

03:15 pm 

Maan and Geet had left to check all the rooms. They checked the two rooms that had irked Geet the most. The first room that they checked was empty. No suitcase or no clothes in the wardrobe. There was also nothing in the bathroom.

 

Maan: Yeh kaise ho sakta hai...iss room toh naya ka naya hi lag raha hai...

Geet: Hmm...mujhe yahi shak tha...yeh room tho bilkul khali ka khali hi hai...iss room main tho kuch nahi mila hai...chalo dusra room main dekhte hai

Maan: Haan..chalo!

 

The second room looked like it had been slept in but their still was no sign of a suitcase or clothes. Geet then checked under the bed while Maan checked under the sofas. He found a square cardboard box and it had 'Ozonics' written on it. Maan pulls it out and asks Geet about it.

 

Maan: Geet...yeh dekho (she turns around to have a look at the box) Ispe ozonics likha hua hai...yeh kya hai?

Geet: Yeh tho mujhe bhi nahi pata...let's have a look...(She opens the box and finds it empty) Isme toh kuch nahi hai..

Let's have a look around this whole room...you never know kab kuch miljayi..

 

They start searching it thoroughly...they lift the sofa covers and find the whole the plan of the hotel laminated..and other a white bottle which says oxygen on it...

 

(Meanwhile at the Hotel Lobby)

 

Mohit: Chalo...chalte hain!

Dil: Haan mujhe jakhe...director ke saath rehearse karna hai...meri lines...u know dress rehearsal!

Arman: Hmm...but how did you get into this in the first place...I mean tum tho holiday pe thi na...toh phir tum iss case ka pata kaise chala?

Mohit: Haan...Dil! I mean I didn't tell you!

Dil: After you met Geet at Intercontinental Grand...well she called me up and told me that I also need to be there because she realised at that point that another girl needed to be present in your plan...in the backstage and she could not do it herself because she was a guest and was nominated herself! So she needed me...aur phir she told me whatever you told her..

Arman: That's geet...the mastermind...

Mohit: Ofcourse she is a mastermind...that's why half the people on this planet are terrifyed of her! She can do anything!

Dil: Hmm...

Mohit: Ab tum log jao...mujhe ek kaam hai...main ata hun!

Arman: Alright!

 

Dil and Armaan walk away to the place where the award ceremony was held! Mohit made his way to the lobby and watched a guy in the wheel chair make his way to the lift while a young girl in her early 20's was escorting him...Mohit then assumed that he might be her father.

 

He walked to the hotel lobby and spoke to the manager.

 

Mohit: Hello...

Manager: Hi...very nice to have you in our hotel! We hope that everything will be fine!

Mohit: So do we! Filaal aap yeh batayiye ki jo abhi wheelchair pe ayatha...wo kaun tha?

Manager: Woh tha...Mr. Jimmy Shergil...an american business man who is checking in today...he will also be present in the award ceremerony.

Mohit: Thanks...ab aap mere saath ayie! Kuch important baat karni hai...

Manager: Yep..aap mere office main aye! Wahan beht kar baath kar sakte hain! Chaliye!

 

Mohit and Manager walk into his office and they both sit down...


03.30 pm 


Mohit: Mr. Mittal has arrived with his security and is protected...mujhe sab CCTV cameras on chahiye so aaj jo bhi ho...sab kuch record hojaye aur that would mean that we will have proof against everything..

Manager: Ok it will be done Mr. Mohit

Mohit: Ek aur baath..humare team main panch log hain! Main, Dil, Geet, Arman aur Maan!

Manager: Maan...u don't mean Maan Singh Khurana?

Mohit: Yes..aur kuch galti nahi honi chahiye! Warna aap ki hotel kal hi band karwasakte hain...

Manager: Yes...um...sir...koi galti nahi hogi..(Yeh maan singh khurana ko aneki kya zarroor thi? Ab agar kuch bhi galti hogi...tho mohit ka tho pata nahi par MSK meri hotel zaroor band karwa denge)

 

With this Mohit leaves...

 

Geet and Maan leave the hotel room and there is call on Geet's mobile. They stop while geet recieves her phone call.


04.00pm

 

Geet: Hello..

Inspector: Hi Inspector Deshmukh bol raha hun...meet me downstairs...ek bahot important baat discuss karni hai...

Geet: Ji...hum athe hi hain...(She puts the phone down)

 

Maan: Kya hua?

Geet: Inspector Deshmukh ne neeche bulaya hain...

 

They both go downstairs to be greeted by the Inspector Deshmukh...

 

Inspector: Hello...Geet! This is my deputy inspector Damodaar...and you must be Mr.Maan Khurana

Maan: Yes..hello!

Inspector: Ek bhuri kabhat hai...a couple got murdered today...u know RK jewellers?

Maan: Yes...hamrari sab khandani jewellery waha se hi aati hain!

Inspector: Well the owners are no more...the wife was kidnapped and then we found her body yesterday...un log ne unke gala kat diya tha...aur aaj unke husband ki body milli thi unke hi ghar main and the way he was murdered was the same as his wife's...

Damodar: And that's not the only thing...nothing was taken from the house or the jewellry shop so they can't be theives aur sab kehrahe hai ki woh bahot ache log the so why were they murdered if they didn't have any enemys...

Inspector: Aur ek aur baath...aaj hame subhe ek call aya tha...and it was almost trying to warn us that something is going to happen aur wo bohoth darah hua bhi tha! We traced the call to find that it was made from a PCO which is just outside the Rk jeweller...a two minute walk and it is also situated between his house and the shop so we think...

Geet: that the case is related to Aditya's par we again do not know the motive again aur we are assuming but thanks for the information..

 

Mohit is walking back to the Dil and Arman when he notices the girl who was accompanying the person in the wheelchair. She was strolling a red cabin luggage and she was heading towards the car park. He decides to follow her because he has some suspicions. He keeps a distance so she can't see him. She places the cabin luggage on the side where it is clearly seen and she walks away.

Precap:

Precap 1: Mohit: Dil...jaldi aoo...I need you!

She comes...

Dil: oh my God...what is this?

Precap 2: 'Aaj hi ki raat...hona hai kya...pana hai kya..khona hai kya?'

Part 25

Edited by -maankimishty- - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
wow nice
do continue
n thanks for the pm
will be waiting for next part