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Posted: 28 June 2011 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
sunaina Malhotra i'm sure
it's geet other name for the
secret agency
love maaneet romance
beautiful part
love it
ty 4pm

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Posted: 28 June 2011 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
nice...

so geet has started feeling for him...

ye sunaina kaun hai?? is that her real name or espionage name?? 

hope she tells the truth soon...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 1:10am | IP Logged
Just read through the FF. Great job! Please PM me! 

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superb...woww...
keep up the gud work

thnx for pm Tongue

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Sorry for any mistakes...and I hope this parts actually clears a little confusion! I know an entry of a new character but don't worry as far as I know he is good! Please keep commenting as I love to read your comments and like the post! Smile Hey my longest part yet! if you keep motivating me I will write longer parts for you guys! 

Part 18

 

Geet and Maan walk down to the hotel lobby and where they are escorted to their table to have breakfast. Maan picks up the newspaper. They have just sat down to eat.

 

Geet: Aap ko continental khana pasand hai?

Maan: Hmm...its really healthy...sab ko khana chayiye! #

Geet: Iss khane main toh koi swaad hi nahi...aur ho bhi kaise sakta hai...is main toh sirf ek hi cheese hai aur woh bhi namak...

Maan: Haan woh kya hai na Geet...sab log tumare jaise motti nahi hona chathe...yeh aloo parathe kahthe kahthe...

Geet: KYA? Aap ne mujhe phir se motti kaha?

Maan: Ab sach toh kardwa hai hota hai na Geet...

Geet: Theek hain...mujhe nahi khana  (She moves the plate away from her in his direction)

Maan: Geet...main toh sirf mazak kar raha tha...woh tho tumhe pata hai na!

Geet: Nahi mujhe bhook nahi hai...

Maan: (Yeh kya kardiya maan...bhook tho usse lagi hain par uski zidd ab nahi chodnewali) Geet tum kha rahi ho ki warna..

Geet: Warna kya haan? Yeh sab dhamkiyan mujhe pe nahi chalne wali...Mr. Maan Singh Khurana (She gets up to leave but maan holds her hand)

Maan: Geet...beech main table chod kar nahi jaate...yeh achi manners nahi hai...aur main mazak kar raha tha...

Geet: Hmmm (Itne kadus..dhust danav kahike! Ek sorry bhi nahi bola jaraha!)

 

She comes and sits back and starts easting really fast. Maan is just staring at her in bewilderment. She looks up and Maan pretends to read the newspaper which he had in his hand. A headline catches his attention.

 

"Sunaina Malholtra is back in Action"

 

Sunaina Malholtra the expert detective which has solved many cases in the past is now back and is serving her country again. She will be seen solving new cases. She is has the most brightest minds and can catch a criminal within a day and we hope to see more of her! Welcome back Sunaina as our country is now in our hand!

 

Maan: Geet...tumme subah ki headline padi?

Geet: Nahi kyun?

Maan: Yeh dehko...Sunaina Malholtra back in action

Geet: Haan toh?

Maan: Kya toh? Geet she is one of the best women on earth and probably the only women I admire because she has the charisma to do something that others don't.

Geet: It's no big deal!

Maan: Geet tumme pata bhi hai tum yeh lya ker rahi ho? She is one of the best!

Geet: Hmm...looks like you really like her?

Maan: Nahi aisa kuch nahi but mujhe lagta hai ki shes definetly worth something. Too bad there is no picture of her anywhere...

Geet: She probably wants privacy...

Maan: Hmm..your right! Just like me!

Geet: Matlab?

Maan: Matlab ki main jaha bhi jata hun...waha ladkiyan mere peeche paonch jati hai...they don't understand that I am not interested in them!

Geet: Woh unki galti nahi hai ki woh tume pasand karti hai...they probably think that you are hot and handsome..thats why they are attracted to you!

Maan: So you think I am hot and handsome?

Geet: Nahi main bus example de rahi thi

Maan: So you don't think I am hot and handsome?

Geet: Maine aisa toh nahi kaha..

Maan: par tumara matlab toh yehi tha na...

Geet: Maan! ab aap mere bahot hi ache dost bange ho aur mujhe lagta hai ki ab aapko sach jane ki zaroorar hai!

Maan: Sach?

Geet: Hmm...sach! Maan main hi Sunaina Malhotra hun! (He looks at her intently for two minutes and bursts out laughing)

Maan: Hmm...joke of the day! Lagta hai wo plane wali drink abi tak tume utri nahi hai...main ja raha hun room main...tum ajna! (With this he leaves)

Geet: (Maan main sach keh rahi hun...ar tum mujhe kab believe karo ge...tum kya mujhe toh koi believe nahi karega!)

 

She makes a quick phone call.

 

Guy: Hello..tum?

Geet: Hello...yeh sab kya hai?

Guy: Sab kya?

Geet: Tumne aaj ki headlines nahi pardi kya?

Guy: Oh my God...

Geet: Yes they have probably alerted all the criminals in India armaan...

Armaan: Sorry Geet..mujhe pata nahi tha...

Geet: Hmm...I want this sorted out a.s.a.p

Arman: par..

Geet: No par arman...I want this sorted out immediately! The whole of the media should be in our control! Thank god the picture of Sunaina Malholtra is Stricly confidential warna woh bhi publish ho jata...

Armaan: Ok geet...I will let you know when I have sorted out everything..

Geet: Good...bye

Arman: Bye

 

Geet: (Thank god...ab sab theek tho hojayega!)

 

She makes her way to the hotel room and sees Maan is on the terrace. He finishes his phone call and comes inside. Then he starts to work and Geet does not want to disturb him so she decides to help him out instead. After 3 hours...it is time for their meeting with Mr.Mittal where they will just finalise everything.

 

(Conference Room)

 

Aditya: Yes Mr.Khurana...I have read through the whole contract and I am happy to confirm everything.

Maan: Thankyou Mr. Mittal

Aditya: Please call me Aditya...So do you have any plans for tonite?

Geet: As of now...no

Aditya: Toh why don't you both join us for dinner...waise bhi tumari bhabhi ji is missing you and she has eaten up my head for the past two days ki Geet se milna hai...Geet se milna na hai...women what can you do?

Geet: Don't you dare se anything about my bhabhi ji

Geet looks at maan and he looks back assuringly...

Geet: Hmm...theek hain! Jeejaji aap chaliye...hum dono sham ko ayenge...fresh ho kar!

Aditya: Theek hain...main clata hun aur haan sham ko milte hai..

Maan: Yep... (Aditya leaves)

 

Maan: Tumne sham ko kyun kaha...hum tho abhi bhi ja sakte the na?

Geet: Hmm...per mujhe thodi der apne is friend ke saath behtna tha!

Maan: Ohh...kaunsa friend?

Geet: MAAN..

Maan: Theek hain...kya karna hai?

Geet: Woh toh aap batayenge na!

Maan: Sab kuch mujhe ji sochna padega!

Geet: Woh toh hain'

Maan: Chalo hum lunch pe jaate hain

Geet: kaha?

Maan: Ab main tumme achi tarah janta hun ki tumme waada pao aur paani puri yeh sab acha lagta hai tho hum shiv sagar chalte hain. Achi  jagah hain...tumme toh achi hi lagegi!

Geet: theek hain..par mujhe road side waali aur bhi achi lagthi hain!

Maan: Hmm...ab chalo!

 

They go to Shiv Sagar which was opposite Juhu Beach so where they were yesterday and order what they want to eat. For geet is usual paani puri aur waada pao aur for Maan he is having pao baaji!

 

Geet: Yeh tho Juhu beach hain na...jaha hum kal the!

Maan: Haan...

Geet: Tho aap mujhe kal le jasakte the par nahi...

Maan: kal tum puri bheegi thi aur isliye koi bhi tumhe andar nahi anedega...ab tho tum enjoy kar lo

Geet: Not bad...Mr. Khurana! I thought that you would like classy places.

Maan: I do...par yaha main aur arjun aya karte the aur isiliye mujhe yeh jagah ab achi lagnelagi hai! Aur yaha ka khana will not damage your health.

Geet: Hmmm...

Maan: Tho Miss Geet...apne barre main kuch bato

Geet: (Mere barre main...oh no babaji kaha muhje passa diya!) Umm hya janna chathe ho?

Maan: Bas tumari likes dislikes?

Geet: Aap puchye main aapko batungi...

Maan: Theek hain...tum kaha se ayi ho?

Geet: Umm..Hoshiyarpur...main wahi hi badi hui thi...yash bhai ke saath aur meri choti behen arohi.

Maan: Favourite hobby?

Geet: Umm...music...I mean guitar play karna aur khana banana...

Maan: I thought that you would have said ki khana kana not banana...(She shot him an angry glare) Ok so favourite food?

Geet: Punjabi

Maan: Favourite Colour

Geet: Red..aapka?

Maan: White

Geet: (isiliye aap itne pure ho..)

Maan: Aur kuch jana chathi ho?

Geet: Hmm...sab sawel ke jawab jo mujhe aapne ne puche the!

Maan: Tho theek hain...I am from delhi! My favourite hobby is spending time with my friends and family. Favourite food tho tum jan hi gayi hogi which is continental!

Geet: Hmm...nice!

 

They both finish their lunch and head back to the hotel and get ready to visit the Mittal household. Maan and geet arrive and our greeted by Aditya.

 

Aditya: Hello...Geet and Maan

Maan: Hi..

Geet: Hi jeeja ji (Being her chirpy self)

Aditya: Tum bahot khush lag rahi ho..

Maan: Kyun nahi hogi...apni friend jisse itne saal baad mil rahi hai...

Aditya: Hmm..woh toh iske chehre se pata chal jata hai...

 

Simran which is aditya's wife comes into the hall...

 

Simran: Hello...you must be maan

Maan: Hi...nice to meet you

Geet: Hi..

Simran: Haan main aa rahi hun...(She completely ignores geet and walks away to the kitchen).

Geet: Jeeja ji...yeh mujse itni naraz kyun hai?

Aditya: Tum tho apni so called bhabhi ji ko janti ho na...kitni ziddhi hai! Woh tumse isliye naraz hai ki tumne usse ek bar bhi phone nahi kiya kit um Bombay aa rahi ho...

Geet: oh so isliye madam upset hai!

Aditya: Hmm...

Geet: Not a problem...woh meri jaisi hi hai! Aur mujhe usse manana aata hai!

Aditya: Hmm ab jao warna..woh kuch bhi tod degi..(Geet just laughs and goes towards the kitchen)

Aditya: Don't mind my wife...she just gets a little emotional as they are really attached!

Maan:No not at all!

 

Precap: Maaneet back in delhi and back to work

               Mr Chopras meeting 


Part 19



Edited by -maankimishty- - 22 January 2012 at 5:50am

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 11:19am | IP Logged
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Edited---------
 
Yipee... me first
 
ok so maan admires sunaina malhotra n sunaina malhotra is none other than our very own geet
 
oo la la story kafi intersting ho raha hai
 
loved maneet convo
 
 HATS OFF
 
LOVE - Piya


Edited by piya- - 30 June 2011 at 2:26am
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