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Maaneet Ki Prem Kahani - Thread 1 (Page 15)

tptwi IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 09 June 2011 at 9:51am | IP Logged
very interesting Clap

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 6:38am | IP Logged
plz continue soon
m really liking this story..
Good work..keep it up
ridhz21 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 5:27am | IP Logged
Awesome updates
loved them
thx for pm
MishtyShah Goldie

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 7:36am | IP Logged

Please ignore the mistakes...hope you like this part and can you please like if not comment!! As I have told you I have exams and next week isreally tough so I cannot promise any updates sorry Cry

Part 12

(Still at Intercontinental grand)


Mohit: Motive? (waitor brings the food)

Geet: Haan motive...why would someone want to harm Aditya Mittal? I mean he is such a nice person and a good businessman...

Mohit: Sahi kehrahi ho...motive ka toh pata nahin per main yeh kehsakta hun ki...the steel plant in Calcutta is suffering...

Geet: Kya?

Mohit: recently 3 workers have been murdered...we do not know the reason but many of the workers are very scared right now and want to stop working and leave which is causing problems for the Mittal Industries...

Geet: Hmmm...we need someone to go there and find out more information about the situation..

Mohit: Already one step ahead of of the agents has find out more information...

Geet: Cool...

Mohit: Yeh lo...(he picks up a file)

Geet: Yeh kya hai?

Mohit: This is the hotel masterkey of all the rooms...humme laga ki maybe the guy is staying in the hotel...tho this is for the day...aur yeh saare guests ki list hain which are staying in the hotel...and this is the list of everyone who is attending the conference..

Geet: Thanks I'll study all this and get back to you soon...also if you find out any new information about this case...please inform me...heran honeki yeh baat hai..that we don't know what is going to happen on the the method that he is going to use to Kill aditya...such as gun, knife or bomb...if it is a bomb then everyone's life is at stake than just Aditya himself...aur yeh planning tho bahot soch samaj  kar ki hain...tho we will also need a plan...

Mohit: Hmmm...your right!

Geet: When am I not? Does the secret service know that I am working on this case...?

Mohit: Yahh...they are the ones that told me to speak to are the best!

Geet: Thanks...anyway I have to go...warna dhust danav phir mujpe chilaga

Mohit: Dhust Danav?

Geet: Haan...Maan Singh Khurana...

Mohit: geet..tu bhi na...wo itna bhi bhura nahi hai...

Geet: I know I am just kidding...anyway...i will see you later (Both get up and give each other a handshake)

Mohit: Bye..


(Khurana Construction)


Geet is in her cabin and is working...when she receives a call by Maan...


Geet: hello

Maan: Haan...geet mere cabin mein ayo..

Geet: (Ab yeh dhust danav kya chatha hai?) Ji Sir


Geet walks out of her cabin and knocks on Maan's cabin.


Maan: Come in...(Geet walks in)

Geet: Ji Sir...

Maan: chopra ke project ke tumare ideas hai, mujhe wo bahot ache lage air uske liye hume Mumbai jana pardega..

Geet: Kya: Mumbai?

Maan: Haan..actually paper work sort out karna hai aur site bhi dekhni hai...

Geet: lekin Sir...

Maan: Geet...main tumara boss kahajai..woh kiya karo..

Geet: Ji sir..

Maan: Aur haan...hum sirf 3 din ke liye ja rahe hain..You have 3 hours to pack and I will come to pick you up from Pinky's house...theek hai?

Geet: Ji Sir...(She leaves)

Maan: (Pagli...!!)


Geet is in her cabin and pinky comes with an apple in her hand.


Pinky: Arre geet...tu itni pareshan kyun hai?

Geet: Nahi bas...boss ne kaha Mumbai jana padega aur wo bhi unke saath!

Pinky: Kya? Tu kitni lucky hai yaar...main tho tujse hi jal rahi hun...

Geet: Tho tu janna...mujhe koi interest nahi hai jane main!!

PInky: Ab tera idea hai...tho tujhe tho jana padega na! Ab tu ghar ja...tujhe packing bhi karne hogi na...

Geet: Haan chal...main jarahi hun... (She picks up her bag and leaves)


3 hours later...Geet is ready and Maan comes to pick her up...


Maan: Ready? (He looks at her and is suddenly mesmerized...she looks so beautiful in the pink salwar kameez...with her straight brown hai took him more than a minute to come back to reality)

Geet: Do I have a choice?

Maan: No not really...(He picks up her suitcase and puts it into the car. Both sit in the car)

Maan: Tumne isme kya bhara hain...Ek mahine ke liye ja rahi ho kya?

Geet: Shukar karo ki main do suitcases nahi layi hun...

Maan: Geet...hum theen din ke liye jarahe ke liye nahi...

Geet: Muhje pata hai sir...per agar kuch aur dino ke liye plan bangya tho? Aur waise bhi hum chal rahe hain ki main is gadi se utroo...aur waise bhi mujhe koi shauk nahi hain aapke saath aneka...wo tho bus aap..

Maan: Geet mujhe bhi koi shauk nahi hain...per unfortunately...tumhe hi lejana pard raha hai..

Geet: Tho phir aap kisi aur ko lejayiye...main ja rahi hun...(She opens the door and Maan Suddenly pulls her back in and closes the door.)

Maan: tum pagal ho kya? Flight miss karni hai, ab chup chap behti raho warna phir mujhe zabarasti karni padegi! (He starts the car and begins to drive..)


The journey was very silent...and maan was concentrating on the road.


Precap: Only one room...ab kya karenge?

Part 13

Edited by -maankimishty- - 22 January 2012 at 5:46am

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ridhz21 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 7:59am | IP Logged

Nice update

interesing precap
cont soon
Best of luck for exams

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Sabmeratu. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 8:22am | IP Logged
on your exams
Lovely update...
Luvin the precap
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 12 June 2011 at 8:27am

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 9:08am | IP Logged
Nice...ohhh 1rooom...give us some maaneet moments...

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mitzi11 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 10:36am | IP Logged
 awesome part
love it
thanks 4 pm

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