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Maaneet Ki Prem Kahani - Thread 1 (Page 13)

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he dropped her again, sweet

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awsome yaar...waiting for more 
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hmmm... interesting...now wanna see jealous maan singh khurana.

Great update...keep up the gud work my friend..it was awsome..!!
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Hi guys...would just like to inform you that I have exams in the next two weeks Cry so you will be not getting regular updates as usual...so I will keep on PM u guys when I have written the next part...! Hope you are enjoying this FF...Smile

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was the part on page 13 the latest part?? cause I cant find and you know me... im hopeless with this site,,,
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Originally posted by aashini14

was the part on page 13 the latest part?? cause I cant find and you know me... im hopeless with this site,,,

Yes it was...u guys will not get an update till tuesday now! Sorry...but busy with GCSE's!
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plzzz update soon...
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Im sorry guys...itna late hogaya Cry but exams thi...and I read all your comments...aur sorry to say...I don't think ki maan will meet geet in the hotel...because he just can't find her full identity yet...but in good time guys! Hope you guys enjoy this part... LOL


Part 11 

Everyone at Khurana Constructions was very busy because they were working on the new project deal that they signed with Mr Chopra. At 10am there was a conference held for all the staff members to discuss the layout of the new homes which were being built for middle class people.

 

Maan: Kisike paas ideas hain?

Tasha: Haan hain na sir... Maam ke paas idea hain sir...

Maan: Woh khud muh se bhol sakti hain...(Sasha shoots an angry glare at Tasha)

Adi: hahahaha..

Maan: ADI...(he immediately shuts up) Haan...bolo Sasha...

Sasha: MK...maine yeh design study kiye hain...muhje lagta hain ki hame ghar ke samne ek porch rakhna chayiye...which will make he house look beautiful and later on hum usse car parking ke liye bhi ultilize kar sakte hain...

Maan: Acha idea hai Sasha...kisike paas koi aur idea hain?

Geet: (Geet puts her hand up) Agar kisi ko problem na ho tho main apna idea de sakti hun?

Maan: Yes ofcourse...I want to hear suggestions!

Geet: Muhje itna toh nahi pata design ke bharre main..per muhje yeh pata hai ki middle class family ke liye yeh parking aur porch itna maniye nahi rakhega...jitna ek garden...kyunki unke bache khushi khushi khel paye...bacho se bard kar kuch nahi hota. Hum toh yeh sochte hain ki ghar parivaar ke liye hota hain aur logon ko dikane le liye nahi...

Sasha: Who doesn't a nice house that they can show to their friends...unko lagega ki unka ghar neeche level ka hain?

Geet: Khushi...dusro ko neeche dikake ke nahi milti per unke saat baatne se milti hain...

Sasha: Oh please Geet...yaha hum morals study nahi kar rahe hain...

Geet: Pata hain...per ek ghar ek insaan ke barabar hona chayiye...I mean it wouldn't look good if you put a 50 inch tv in a boxed size room...toh isme main hi yehi logic us kiya hai...

Maan: Sasha...I think Geet is right...hume yeh idea...design main include kardena chayiye (Geet looks at Maan and smiles and then sits down) Adi and Sasha...can you complete the blue prints for the presentation in two weeks. Aur Pinky...mujhe wo London wali khurana constructions ka account balance chayiye...

Pinky: Ji Sir

Maan: You can all leave...

 

(Lunch time in Intercontinental Grand)


Geet arrives at the hotel and is escorted to the table where Mohit is sitting.

 

Geet: Hi...

Mohit: Hi sorry yar...bahot urgent kaam tha isiliye!

Geet: Haan bolo...tumare paas ek ghanta hai..

Mohit: pehle tum kuch order karlo.. (He calls the waitor)

Waitor: Maam what would you like to drink?

Geet: Can I have a Gin & Tonic please with two cubes of Ice.

Waitor: Yes Maam...aur kuch?

Geet: Ek vegetable biryani...Mohit tum kuch loge?

Mohit: Haan mere liye chicken biryani kardo.

Waitor: Ok (Waitor leaves)

Geet: Ab bolo...

Mohit: Recently ek case aya hain...VIP case hain?

Geet: Kaun?

Mohit: Tum aditya mittal ko jaanto ho?

Geet: Kaun nahi janta...he is one of my clients and a goodfriend...kyun?

Mohit: Hum log ko ek phone call aya tha...kisi PCO se. It was a death treat...usne kaha ki... "Ek hafte main...teekh us conference main ... Aditya Mittal ko kuch bhi hosakta hai...tum log jo chaho kar sakte ho!" and then the call went dead! It was so quick that we could not even trace the call.

Geet: Par Mohit...ye koi mazak bhi toh hosakta hain...

Mohit: Haan...mujhe bhi yahi laga...per hum chances toh nahi le sakte na?

Geet: Hmm...(meanwhile the waitor comes with Geet's drink) mujhe ek baat samaj main nahi aa rahi hai ki woh caller tumhe ek hafte pehle kyun call karega?? I mean wouldn't that alert you more?

Mohit: Haan mujhe woh bhi laga...toh maine socha ki woh koi pagal bhi hosakta hai...u know mental..

Geet: If he's alerted you...iska yeh matlab hai ki planning thi bahot achi chal rahi hai...aur kuch bada hone wala hai...Ye conference??

Mohit: Haan...actually it is more of an award ceremony...best business man and woman of the year...in the hotel "Le Meridien"...u know near  Rashtrapati Bhawan...

Geet: Haan...ek minute (She looks in her handbag...and finds an invitation) Yeh dekho...yeh wahi hain?

Mohit: Haan...wait that means that your invited?

Geet: Haan aaj hi mila...post main se...aur umm im nominated for the best business women of 2011...

Mohit: Wow congratz...yeh to acha hain meaning kit um wahi hi hogi...jab wo ceremony ho rahi hogi!

Geet: Your forgetting...ki hum log ache dost hain! Mohit...hum log ek cheese miss kar rahe hain!

Mohit: Kya?

Geet: Ki motive kya hai? 

Precap: More on this case

Please comment and like this FF... Wink

Part 12



Edited by -maankimishty- - 22 January 2012 at 5:45am

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