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Maaneet Ki Prem Kahani - Thread 1 (Page 12)

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 1:09am | IP Logged
Hey Apoorva..
I just finished reading all the parts..let me tell u its awesome...really very interesting concept and a great story line..its quite different from other usual FFs..keep up the good work...will love to read more and more..hope you update soon Tongue

Love,
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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 3:46pm | IP Logged

Latest part...hope you guys enjoy! Sorry for any mistakes! Cry

Part 10

Geet is lost into her files and is studying them very carefully...for her working late is not a problem because she is used to it. Maan looks at her from his cabin and smiles while nodding his head. Maan looked at the clock.

 

Maan: (Oh no...ab 11 baj rahe hain...islo bhi ghar jaana hoga...maan tu kyun itni chinta kar raha hain...I mean woh teri secretary hain aur koi bhi secretary yehi karegi na...par abhi ghar jana chayiye usse) He walks into her cabin.

Geet immediately stands up.

Geet: Ji sir...kuch kaam tha kya?

Maan: Nahi bas woh...bahot raat ho chuki hain...ab tun ghar jao!

Geet: Nahi sir main...yahi teekh hun..muhje kaam karna acha laktha hain...main yahi

Maan: GEET main tumara boss hun...toh meri baat sunno aur ghar jao!

Geet: Per aap?

Maan: Meri chinta mat karo...jab mera kaam khatam hojayga...main ghar challa jaonga.

Geet: Per Sirr...

Maan: Koi sir wir nahi Geet...tumne sunna nahi maine kya kaha...ab ghar jao...

Geet picks up her stuff and is slowly walking towards the door...

Geet: (Murmers: Jab baba maan singh khurana ne bola haon...toh ghar jaana hi hoga na...dhust dhanav...sach main...upneaap ko shehenshah samaj the hain..hmph) Maan hears that...

Maan: tumne kuch kaha kya? (Geet turns around)

Geet: Nahi sir'(looks down)

Maan: ek minute tum ghar kaise jarahi ho?

Geet:aap tho aise pooch rahe ho jaise mera rajkumar arahain muhje lene...

Maan: GEET

Geet: obviously...taxi lerahi hoon aur ghar jarahi hoon!

Maan: main tumhe chod detha hoon

Geet: Uski koi zaroorat nahi hain...main khudh jasakti hoon...

Maan: Tumhe address maloom hain?

Geet: Nahi per main pinky ko phone karke pooch loongi...

Maan: Pinky...ko disturb kyun kar rahi ho?

Geet: Agar aap ko pata hai address tho mujhe bata dijena...

Maan: Umm...wo...wo bahot raat ho chuki hain...main tumhe ghar drop kar detha hoon.

Geet: (Ajeeb admi hain...address tho batana nahi per ghar drop karna hai...chalo geet free main lift mil rahi hai aur woh bhi boss se...tho lelo) theek hain...

Maan: Chalo...

 

Maan and Geet walk to the car...they both sit in! Maan drives...there is an awkward silence and to break the silence...

 

Geet: Aap arjun ke bhai ho?

Maan: Haan...kyun?

Geet: Nahi bas awehi...aur kaun kaun hai aapki family main?

Maan: umm...meri behen aur meri daadi...

Geet: Aapki daadi se toh main mil chuki hoon...bahot hi sweet hain

Maan: Haan...ab tumari enquiry commission khatam hogayi ho toh main tumhe bata doon ki tumara ghar aygaya hain...

Geet: oh thanks...aur uss wale din ke liye bhi thanks for dropping me...maine kuch ulta sidha toh nahi kiya tha na?

Maan: (clears his throat) Its okay...tumara ghar agagaya hain...

Geet: Hmm...bye

Maan: Bye (He waits until she is inside and drives off)

 

Maan arrives at Khurana Mansion...He enters daadi's room

 

Daadi: Maan...aap aygaye?

Maan: Haan...daadi..

Daadi: Din kaisa tha?

Maan: Acha tha...(then smiles thinking about all the moments between him and Geet and comes back to MSK mode)

Daadi notices the smile..

Daadi: Kya baat hai...aaj bahot khush lagrahe ho?

Maan: Nahi aisa kuch nahi hai...

Daadi: (Hum aap ko bahot achi tarah se jaante hain bete...abhi nahi toh todhi dher baad batoge ke uss ladki ka naam kyat ha...chalo meri ek bahu toh ayegi is lifetime main...)

Maan: Main bahot thak gaya hoon...main jaraha hoon...

Daadi: Teekh hain...

 

Maan leaves and goes to his outhouse...falls asleep.

 

(Next Morning)

 

Geet receives a call from Mohit.

 

Geet: Bolo

Mohit: Bahot zaroori kaam hai...hum aaj lunch ke liye mil skate hain kya?

Geet: Haan kya baat hai?

Mohit: Ek case agaya hain...which I need your help on...

Geet: Per tumhe toh pata hain na ki main ab yeh sab nahi karti...

Mohit: I know...per bahot hi difficult hain...aur dil bhi holiday pe hain isiliye...

Geet: Theek hain...1 pm...Intercontinental Grand.

Mohit: Okay...no problem...see you there

Geet: See you...(ab kya problem hosakti hain...oh geet tu toh bhul hi gayi thin a ki tun problems whole sale ke proce main layi hain...Uff)

 

Geet leaves for office...

 

Precap: Lunch with Mohit at Intercontinental

Please comment and like the post...Any predictions???? Big smile

Part 11



Edited by -maankimishty- - 22 January 2012 at 5:45am

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 4:12pm | IP Logged
Lovely update::
Haha love how geet was cursing him under her breath
Awww maan smiled after remembering his tyms wiv geet
Oooh so geet knows maan has a sister but she doesn't know it's Annie
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 11:10pm | IP Logged
awesome!!!
R u planning for 'J' track???

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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 12:19am | IP Logged
read in one go
pinki doesnt know her
real identity
if she is muiltimillionaire
how come no photo hers
in the media ?
wonder how maan react
when find out her truth identity
if geet work for secret service
she knows how to self  defense
all parts simply fascinating
love it
ur doing damn good job
dear
waiting next part
pls do pm me


Edited by sharmake11 - 04 June 2011 at 1:44am

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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 1:37am | IP Logged
I know many people are confused as not everything is being revealed...but this was the whole point...everything will be slowly revealed as the FF goes on...as you probably have guessed by now some people know more than others...Hope you enjoy it and keep reading! Big smile

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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 4:33am | IP Logged
awesome update. continue soon plzz.
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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 5:54am | IP Logged
hmm loved it...

will maan feel jealous when he sees geet and mohit Wink hmm

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