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Maaneet Ki Prem Kahani - Thread 1 - Page 34

Posted: 12 years ago
ah hate brij ahhh veu nice Part Loved so much :D

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Posted: 12 years ago
Plzz update soon, before I start eating up my nails!!! action sequence ke beech main break bulkul acha nahi lagta...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

sorry 4 d late comment ...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 27

 

Brij: Bas Bahot hogaya...tujhe pehli hi marna tha...toh mujhe pehle batana hotana...main kuch aur intezaam karleta...tumare liye...

Maan: Tum jo chaho tum kar sakte ho...

 

Geet saw the gun from the corner and she didn't know what came over her in that one second. She ran towards maan to protect him from the shot...Brij released the trigger and there was the first shot...

 

Maan: GEEET...(The shot hit Geet's shoulder as she was shielding Maan from him)

Geet: Maan (She let out a faint cry and fainted. Maan immediately supported her)

Maan: Nahi Geet...tumhe jeena hoga...mere liye...sirf mere liye...

 

In the space of two seconds, there was another bullet shot. It was fired by Armaan at Brij. The game was over. Armaan, Mohit and Dil quickly came over.

 

Arman: Oh my God...isse abhi hospital leke jana padega.

Mohit: Im callingan ambulance.

Dil: Thers no time...even if we are a second late then kuch bhi hosakta hai...

Arman: I'll get my car out...and me and maan will take her to the hospital. Mohit and Dil, clean up here, as some inspectors will come to ask our statements and inform geets family and close friends of the happening...theek hain! Aur phir hospital main milo!

Mohit: Okay...good luck ab jao!

 

Maan: Tum gadi nikalo..main usko leke aata hun.

Arman: Ok (Arman leaves)

Maan picks her up in his arms.

 

Maan: Kyun kiya yeh geet? Meri jaan bachane ki kya zaroorat thi? Main tumhe khatre main kabhi nahi dehksakta! Phir kyun? Mujhe nahi pata ki tumhe is halat main dekhe kar main aisa kyun react kar raha hun..par aisa lag raha hai ki meri kisine jaan cheenli hai, mere dil ko chot paunchi hai..nahi geet tum theek hogi, tabhi main chen se jee paunga!

 

With this he carries her to the car. He gently slides in the back.

 

Maan: Armaan...jaldi chalo...khoon bahot hi behraha hai!

Arman: Haan (He speeds the car)

 

Within 15 minutes they reach the hospital, but it seemed the longest time for everyone because Geet's life was in danger. Maan carried her in.

 

Maan: Ek patient hai...

Receptionist: Pehle...wo information sheet fill karo..phir hi hum patient ko dekhenge!

Maan: (Maan just lost it) Main Maan Singh Khurana hun...main do minute main yeh hospital kharid sakta hun aur uska head in-charge ban sakta hun...are you sure that you still don't want to treat the patient?

Receptionist: (Oh my God...delhi ke Maan Singh Khurana...agar inki baat nahi mani tho bahot bhari phad sakta hai) Doctor Riddhima...yeh patient...

Riddhima: Oh my God...iska tho bahot hi khoon behraha hai...tujhe itni bhi akal nahi hai ki patient ki halat itni bigad gayi hai tho...

Receptionist: Par procedures..

Riddhima: Screw the procedures! Nurse! Iss patient ko ICU main shift karo jaldi...bahot khoon behraha hai...

Nurse: Yes...doctor

 

They take Geet in the ICU. Maan and Arman are waiting outside. It has been two hours and there is no news of the operation that they are doing. They are then joined by Dil and Mohit and then Geet's family, Meera, Pinky, Adi, Arjun. There is still no news and everyone is very silent.

 

Yash: Yeh sab kaise hua?

Mohit tells them everything of how she was trying to save maan.

Mumiji: Meri bachi...babaji ne aisa kyun kiya? Uski hi khushiyan kyun cheenli?

Yash: Mom...samaliye apne aap ko.

Meera: Haan...auntiji...agar aap hi tut jayengi tho Yash ka kya hoga?

Papaji: Samalhe apne aap ko...main apni bachi ko janta hun...wo kabhi haar nahi manegi! Usse ladna ata hai...

Maan: Yeh sab meri wajah se hua hai...agar maine...

Yash: Chup...bilkul chup hojao...yeh tum bhi hosakte the...aur iski wajah sirf wo brij hai...jo...

Mohit: Calm down Yash...

Arman: hmm...ab wo iss duniya main nahi raha!

Yash: Matlab...?

Mohit:he is dead!

Arman: Hmm...maine usse goli mari...and lots of people were looking for him anyway and so I kind of did them a favour by finishing him...

Yash: Isse tumhe tho kuch problem nahi hogi na?

Arman: Don't worry...I have a license to kill, I got orders from people above from us!

Mohit: Seriously?

Arman: Yep...

 

Meanwhile the doctor comes out.

 

Yash: Doctor...Doctor...meri behen theek tho hai?

Riddhima: Aap?

Yash: Uska bhai..

Riddhima: Ok...wo ab khatre se toh bahar hai..kyunki operation successful tha. Goli humne nikal di hai par unko observation main rakna hoga. I can't say anything as of now because agar unko kal subha tak hosh nahi aya...tho wo coma main bhi ja sakti hai...so we have to wait till tomorrow morning.

Yash: Thanks doctor...

 

Dr. Riddhima leaves.

 

Meera: Aunty ji...aap ghar chaliye...aapko aram ki zaroorat hai.

Mumiji: Hmm...mujhe pratna bhi karni hai...babaji...meri beti ki raksha karna!

 

They leave...

 

Precap: Maan: Geet...utto...tumhe meri liye iss duniya main anaa padega...main tumara gunegar hun...meri wajah se tum..iss halat main ho..

Part 28

Edited by -maankimishty- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update plz update the next part quickly
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d update ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
awww i loved maan..the way he show his love towards geet i love it..
too good...👏
but u dint send me the pm...😒
Edited by rupzloveu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: rupzloveu

awesome update...

awww i loved maan..the way he show his love towards geet i love it..
too good...👏
but u dint send me the pm...😒


Sorry...I havn't sent anyone pms's yet because I was in a rush to go out! 
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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: ApoorvaShah


Sorry...I havn't sent anyone pms's yet because I was in a rush to go out! 


ohh its ok..thanks for the rply..
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for the update plzz update soon!