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Posted: 12 years ago

Im sorry guys...itna late hogaya 😭 but exams thi...and I read all your comments...aur sorry to say...I don't think ki maan will meet geet in the hotel...because he just can't find her full identity yet...but in good time guys! Hope you guys enjoy this part... ðŸ˜†


Part 11 

Everyone at Khurana Constructions was very busy because they were working on the new project deal that they signed with Mr Chopra. At 10am there was a conference held for all the staff members to discuss the layout of the new homes which were being built for middle class people.

 

Maan: Kisike paas ideas hain?

Tasha: Haan hain na sir... Maam ke paas idea hain sir...

Maan: Woh khud muh se bhol sakti hain...(Sasha shoots an angry glare at Tasha)

Adi: hahahaha..

Maan: ADI...(he immediately shuts up) Haan...bolo Sasha...

Sasha: MK...maine yeh design study kiye hain...muhje lagta hain ki hame ghar ke samne ek porch rakhna chayiye...which will make he house look beautiful and later on hum usse car parking ke liye bhi ultilize kar sakte hain...

Maan: Acha idea hai Sasha...kisike paas koi aur idea hain?

Geet: (Geet puts her hand up) Agar kisi ko problem na ho tho main apna idea de sakti hun?

Maan: Yes ofcourse...I want to hear suggestions!

Geet: Muhje itna toh nahi pata design ke bharre main..per muhje yeh pata hai ki middle class family ke liye yeh parking aur porch itna maniye nahi rakhega...jitna ek garden...kyunki unke bache khushi khushi khel paye...bacho se bard kar kuch nahi hota. Hum toh yeh sochte hain ki ghar parivaar ke liye hota hain aur logon ko dikane le liye nahi...

Sasha: Who doesn't a nice house that they can show to their friends...unko lagega ki unka ghar neeche level ka hain?

Geet: Khushi...dusro ko neeche dikake ke nahi milti per unke saat baatne se milti hain...

Sasha: Oh please Geet...yaha hum morals study nahi kar rahe hain...

Geet: Pata hain...per ek ghar ek insaan ke barabar hona chayiye...I mean it wouldn't look good if you put a 50 inch tv in a boxed size room...toh isme main hi yehi logic us kiya hai...

Maan: Sasha...I think Geet is right...hume yeh idea...design main include kardena chayiye (Geet looks at Maan and smiles and then sits down) Adi and Sasha...can you complete the blue prints for the presentation in two weeks. Aur Pinky...mujhe wo London wali khurana constructions ka account balance chayiye...

Pinky: Ji Sir

Maan: You can all leave...

 

(Lunch time in Intercontinental Grand)


Geet arrives at the hotel and is escorted to the table where Mohit is sitting.

 

Geet: Hi...

Mohit: Hi sorry yar...bahot urgent kaam tha isiliye!

Geet: Haan bolo...tumare paas ek ghanta hai..

Mohit: pehle tum kuch order karlo.. (He calls the waitor)

Waitor: Maam what would you like to drink?

Geet: Can I have a Gin & Tonic please with two cubes of Ice.

Waitor: Yes Maam...aur kuch?

Geet: Ek vegetable biryani...Mohit tum kuch loge?

Mohit: Haan mere liye chicken biryani kardo.

Waitor: Ok (Waitor leaves)

Geet: Ab bolo...

Mohit: Recently ek case aya hain...VIP case hain?

Geet: Kaun?

Mohit: Tum aditya mittal ko jaanto ho?

Geet: Kaun nahi janta...he is one of my clients and a goodfriend...kyun?

Mohit: Hum log ko ek phone call aya tha...kisi PCO se. It was a death treat...usne kaha ki... "Ek hafte main...teekh us conference main ... Aditya Mittal ko kuch bhi hosakta hai...tum log jo chaho kar sakte ho!" and then the call went dead! It was so quick that we could not even trace the call.

Geet: Par Mohit...ye koi mazak bhi toh hosakta hain...

Mohit: Haan...mujhe bhi yahi laga...per hum chances toh nahi le sakte na?

Geet: Hmm...(meanwhile the waitor comes with Geet's drink) mujhe ek baat samaj main nahi aa rahi hai ki woh caller tumhe ek hafte pehle kyun call karega?? I mean wouldn't that alert you more?

Mohit: Haan mujhe woh bhi laga...toh maine socha ki woh koi pagal bhi hosakta hai...u know mental..

Geet: If he's alerted you...iska yeh matlab hai ki planning thi bahot achi chal rahi hai...aur kuch bada hone wala hai...Ye conference??

Mohit: Haan...actually it is more of an award ceremony...best business man and woman of the year...in the hotel "Le Meridien"...u know near  Rashtrapati Bhawan...

Geet: Haan...ek minute (She looks in her handbag...and finds an invitation) Yeh dekho...yeh wahi hain?

Mohit: Haan...wait that means that your invited?

Geet: Haan aaj hi mila...post main se...aur umm im nominated for the best business women of 2011...

Mohit: Wow congratz...yeh to acha hain meaning kit um wahi hi hogi...jab wo ceremony ho rahi hogi!

Geet: Your forgetting...ki hum log ache dost hain! Mohit...hum log ek cheese miss kar rahe hain!

Mohit: Kya?

Geet: Ki motive kya hai? 

Precap: More on this case

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Part 12

Edited by -maankimishty- - 12 years ago

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Please ignore the mistakes...hope you like this part and can you please like if not comment!! As I have told you I have exams and next week isreally tough so I cannot promise any updates sorry ðŸ˜­

Part 12

(Still at Intercontinental grand)

 

Mohit: Motive? (waitor brings the food)

Geet: Haan motive...why would someone want to harm Aditya Mittal? I mean he is such a nice person and a good businessman...

Mohit: Sahi kehrahi ho...motive ka toh pata nahin per main yeh kehsakta hun ki...the steel plant in Calcutta is suffering...

Geet: Kya?

Mohit: recently 3 workers have been murdered...we do not know the reason but many of the workers are very scared right now and want to stop working and leave which is causing problems for the Mittal Industries...

Geet: Hmmm...we need someone to go there and find out more information about the situation..

Mohit: Already one step ahead of you...one of the agents has gone...to find out more information...

Geet: Cool...

Mohit: Yeh lo...(he picks up a file)

Geet: Yeh kya hai?

Mohit: This is the hotel masterkey of all the rooms...humme laga ki maybe the guy is staying in the hotel...tho this is for the day...aur yeh saare guests ki list hain which are staying in the hotel...and this is the list of everyone who is attending the conference..

Geet: Thanks I'll study all this and get back to you soon...also if you find out any new information about this case...please inform me...heran honeki yeh baat hai..that we don't know what is going to happen on the day...like the method that he is going to use to Kill aditya...such as gun, knife or bomb...if it is a bomb then everyone's life is at stake than just Aditya himself...aur yeh planning tho bahot soch samaj  kar ki hain...tho we will also need a plan...

Mohit: Hmmm...your right!

Geet: When am I not? Does the secret service know that I am working on this case...?

Mohit: Yahh...they are the ones that told me to speak to you...you are the best!

Geet: Thanks...anyway I have to go...warna dhust danav phir mujpe chilaga

Mohit: Dhust Danav?

Geet: Haan...Maan Singh Khurana...

Mohit: geet..tu bhi na...wo itna bhi bhura nahi hai...

Geet: I know I am just kidding...anyway...i will see you later (Both get up and give each other a handshake)

Mohit: Bye..

 

(Khurana Construction)

 

Geet is in her cabin and is working...when she receives a call by Maan...

 

Geet: hello

Maan: Haan...geet mere cabin mein ayo..

Geet: (Ab yeh dhust danav kya chatha hai?) Ji Sir

 

Geet walks out of her cabin and knocks on Maan's cabin.

 

Maan: Come in...(Geet walks in)

Geet: Ji Sir...

Maan: Geet...mr chopra ke project ke liye..jo tumare ideas hai, mujhe wo bahot ache lage air uske liye hume Mumbai jana pardega..

Geet: Kya: Mumbai?

Maan: Haan..actually paper work sort out karna hai aur site bhi dekhni hai...

Geet: lekin Sir...

Maan: Geet...main tumara boss hun...jo kahajai..woh kiya karo..

Geet: Ji sir..

Maan: Aur haan...hum sirf 3 din ke liye ja rahe hain..You have 3 hours to pack and I will come to pick you up from Pinky's house...theek hai?

Geet: Ji Sir...(She leaves)

Maan: (Pagli...!!)

 

Geet is in her cabin and pinky comes with an apple in her hand.

 

Pinky: Arre geet...tu itni pareshan kyun hai?

Geet: Nahi bas...boss ne kaha hai...ki Mumbai jana padega aur wo bhi unke saath!

Pinky: Kya? Tu kitni lucky hai yaar...main tho tujse hi jal rahi hun...

Geet: Tho tu janna...mujhe koi interest nahi hai jane main!!

PInky: Ab tera idea hai...tho tujhe tho jana padega na! Ab tu ghar ja...tujhe packing bhi karne hogi na...

Geet: Haan chal...main jarahi hun... (She picks up her bag and leaves)

 

3 hours later...Geet is ready and Maan comes to pick her up...

 

Maan: Ready? (He looks at her and is suddenly mesmerized...she looks so beautiful in the pink salwar kameez...with her straight brown hai down...it took him more than a minute to come back to reality)

Geet: Do I have a choice?

Maan: No not really...(He picks up her suitcase and puts it into the car. Both sit in the car)

Maan: Tumne isme kya bhara hain...Ek mahine ke liye ja rahi ho kya?

Geet: Shukar karo ki main do suitcases nahi layi hun...

Maan: Geet...hum theen din ke liye jarahe hain...holiday ke liye nahi...

Geet: Muhje pata hai sir...per agar kuch aur dino ke liye plan bangya tho? Aur waise bhi hum chal rahe hain ki main is gadi se utroo...aur waise bhi mujhe koi shauk nahi hain aapke saath aneka...wo tho bus aap..

Maan: Geet mujhe bhi koi shauk nahi hain...per unfortunately...tumhe hi lejana pard raha hai..

Geet: Tho phir aap kisi aur ko lejayiye...main ja rahi hun...(She opens the door and Maan Suddenly pulls her back in and closes the door.)

Maan: tum pagal ho kya? Flight miss karni hai, ab chup chap behti raho warna phir mujhe zabarasti karni padegi! (He starts the car and begins to drive..)

 

The journey was very silent...and maan was concentrating on the road.

 

Precap: Only one room...ab kya karenge?

Part 13

Edited by -maankimishty- - 12 years ago