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Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai

my new ff Rab ne banadi jodi!!!! pt 5 @ 83 (Page 5)

kool_namrata Senior Member

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 11:33am | IP Logged
very nice intro...naksh and a romantic point...sounds great...pls add me to your pm lst...n pls update soon...looking forward to it...Smile

kingini_aardra Goldie

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 12:21am | IP Logged
sorry for the late comment...introduction sounds to be interesting...please update soon
nivedha_123 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 1:41am | IP Logged
nice intro.Wink
.aastha. Goldie

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 1:46am | IP Logged
nyc intro,,,,waitin fr more,,,,,continue soon..Smile
soni4eva IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 8:24pm | IP Logged
hey i jus read da introo 4 ur new ff n it iz awsome
cn u plzz add me 2 ur pm list
i4ishra IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 1:32am | IP Logged
guys its a  vdayHeart Heartspecial
( thnk u stuti 4 the lovely banner)
part 1
4m previous 3 yrs naitik used 2 plan valentine days surprise 4 akshi but this yr akshi decided 2 plan a big surprise 4 naitik. naitik didnt knw about this @ asusual he called akshi 2 meet her @ 2 spend some time with her.she refused bt saying she couldnt come 2 meet becoz she had a practical session at colleg.naitik becom angry @ cut the phone.he was not able 2 concentrate on anything in he directly went 2 lovers point.he parked the car near the gate.he opened th gate @ get shocked 2 see the decorations done there,their lvers point was full with smell of roses,red roses were decorated on the floor like a red carpet.he reached near th glass house wich was filled wih heart shaped ballons,he looked around  the whole place is filled with candles @ roses adding more beauty 2 lvers point @
making it more soon as he stepped in akshi started
singing 4m somwhere.he couldnt find here.
     na kuch pucha na kuch manga
      tune dilse diya jo diya(she continued singing)
      na kuch bola na kuch thola
      muskurake diya jo diya(sudently he saw akshi going 2wards garden)
      tu hi tu tu hi chaya
      tu hi apna paraya(again she disappered)
      aur kuch na jaanu bas itna hi jaanu
     tuj mein rab dikhtha hein
     yaara mein kya karoon(she came 4m back)
    sajthe sar juktha hein
     yaara mein kahoon(placing her hands in his chest)
      rab ne banadi jodi!!!!!(kissing on both cheeks)
he noticed her dress @ ornaments,ths al are given by naitik  2 akshi in different occassions,especially the saree which was the 1rst gift given by naitik,akshi didnt like 2 wear saree ,so she never wore it.its was the 1rst time that he saw her in a saree.he was thunder sruck 2 see her in that specially designed red saree(like that 1 she wear in spa 2011).there was no words 2 explain wat naitik was feeling now.he could see her lov in her beautiful eyes.he thanked her by placing a kiss on her foreheadHeart.akshi tightly hugged him.naitik slowly placed his hands on her back
nt:mein apse...
akSmile:nt,apko mujhse thnks kehene ki zaroorat nahi hein,ye sab mein hum donom keliye hi kiya hein aj mein apni pyaar apse chuppana nahi chahthi hoon
ntBig smile:toh batayiye ap mujhse kitni pyaar karthi hein?
akBlushing:ap nahi jaanti...
ntBig smile:hm...phir bi ap bolengi toh mujhe koi problem nahi hongi
akshi cupped his face
ak:nt,aj toh kya apni poori zindagi mein apse keh nahi paawongi  ki mein apko kitni chahthi hoon,par apko zaroor mahsoos kara sakthi hoon
she placed his hands near her heart @ closed her eyes.they stood like that 4 somtime.akshi didnt tell anything but he could felt her lv,passion in her 2wrds him.both their eyes filled with tears @ within no time they got in 2 a hugg,they shared som silenceHeartHeartHeart
akSmile:nt, meri gift
nt:ak,mere paas toh kuch nahi(aftr little thinking)haan...mein apko issa kuch doonga jo mein sirf apko hi de saktha hoon aur  apko vo gift  sirf mujhse hi milegiHeart
he came near her,he passed her hands 4m his tummy 2 her back @ covered th gap between them.before akshi could react he pressed his lip on herHeart,Heartshe totally becom blank but suddently realised wat he was doing.she pushed him
akBlushing:ap na bahuth gande hoo
ntBig smileWink:jab mein apko kiss kar raha tha tab apne kuch nahi kaha toh ab kya huwa
@ he ran 4m there.she angrily went behind her @started 2 hit him madly
nt:ak,stop it...pls..stop...sorry,ab nahi karoonga...
akBlushing: dhattt
ntBig smile:(hugging her 4m back)hug toh kar hi sakthe hein na..
she bumped her head in to his
akSmile:chaliye hum cake kathe hein
nt:ak,ek minute,meri ek tammana tha aj is khaass mauke par ap isse poori karenge
ak:kaise tammana
ap sharmana mat,ap abi tak mujhe yaham (pointing his lips)kiss nahi kiya,pls aj mere liye ek...Heart
akBlushing:nt,bilkul nahi
nt:pls akshara mein 3 saal se wait kar raha hoonHeart
ak:nt,mein ye apko ek khas mauke par doongi tab tak intezar kigiye
nt:(2 himself)toh aj bi nahi mila pata nahi ye mauka kab aayenge
ak:apne kuch kaha
nt:nahi chaliye
thy cut the cake 2gether @ feed eachother.naitik again becom mischevious @ tried 2 kiss herHeart
ak:nt,jab ap romantic roop mein utharthe hein na,tab mujhe bahuth dar lagtha hein,apko controll karna meri bas ki baat nahi hein
nt:(SMILING Big smileBig smile@ PULLING HER CLOSE) ab kya karein ap itni sharmeeli hein toh apko mood par lane keliye mujhe ye sab karna padega,vaise akshara ab mein romantic mood mein nahi kiss mood mein hoon
akShockedShocked:sach apka na kuch nahi ho saktha,ap isse hi baat karoonga toh mein jaa rahi hoon
nt:nahi ak chaliye hum vaham jakar baithe hein
they sat on the bench without leaving any space btween them,he placed his left hand on her left shoulder @ hold her right hand with his right hand.she placed her head on his left chest @ they shared som romantic moments between he kept asking 4 a kiss,sometimes she gave in @ somtime she remained blushingHeartHeart
this was their vday,actually these lovbirds celebrate everyday with so much of love @passion @ with some new experience sothat  they could remember it 4 ever
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Edited by ashamol - 13 June 2011 at 1:06am

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Wow...aasha it is tooo romantic.i have no words.longer comment baad mein now in naksh dream land.

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