hey nivi nd neefa both of u have done a awesome job i really like the idea and story line but a small request sorry kah first tym comment kar rahi hu aur us pah bhi cricticize kar rahi hu so firstly i am reallly sory for that bt try to write the dialogues in lil detailing as some dialogues i dint understand as something is missing frm the sentence i dont know u are understanding what i am saying or not but i.e in sajan meet in sams room and when light turn off that scene was not completely describe and do add me to ur pm list and cont soon its really cool story great work both of u
