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SS: Forbidden Thoughts ~MG~ Part 4 Page 21 ~ 6/4 (Page 6)

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 4:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shreeyazz

nice ss plz pm me..! :D


Added!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 4:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by maansi007

luvd d start geet engaged n well title thoughts which r not allowed wll simply luv to read further and as u hav already compltd it plxxx try to update it bit faster dnt let ur evil mind come here n gv us lot of updates

THANK you so much for your LOVELY comment


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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 4:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by undisclosed

ooohh...i'm gonna bookmark this..to read when i get homeEmbarrassed



Hope you will enjoy it!Tongue
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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 4:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by khwaishfan

Hi Isha...Congrats on the new SS! Loving it n the title...please update soon n include me in ur pm list for this FF! Thanks 4 da pm! Whoa...Geet engaged to someone else...?? hmmm... Manan will defn get his Geet!Tongue


THANK YOU!

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 4:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by JayaR

good start...nice story plot...

so Geet is engaged to someone else...but still cant keep her hands and thoughts off Maan...

hey as u asked for it...here is the segment where u need to change...it has got 'WE'...

"Let's go," they both said in unison and we parted into another frantic run to reach the hotel before this erroneous weather desired to show its true self.

            All of them kept close watch of each other to make sure no one parted from the group. The hotel lights where amplifying as we got closer and they were going to be safe in the warm and toasty haven, our room."...


go through it...I hope I was helpful...



THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!
I really did miss i lot of them!!!

Thanks...

True.she cant keep her hands off of them! 

I might i have to re-check the whole thing. 
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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 4:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by drashsree100




                                                              

  for 'Forbidden Thoughts'
Loved it Glitter Heart Pink Glitter Heart Pink Glitter Heart Pink
The last line was superb Clap
Eagerly awaiting more parts 
                              
                                      
                                                       

     


Thank you so much!!!

Simply loved reading your comment...

Ur so sweet! 

Glad that you liked the last line! 

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 5:26pm | IP Logged
Fab start..luved it :))

What's wrong with Geet, first she hugs him and then shouts at him Confused...bechari, gets soo confused when it comes to Maan LOL

Plz pm me when u update!!

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 6:51pm | IP Logged
Its a nice start...since u have it written, don't torture us too much by making wait too long LOL

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