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SS: Forbidden Thoughts ~MG~ Part 4 Page 21 ~ 6/4 (Page 4)

maankigeet4ever IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Interesting...let's see where this goes...

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khwaishfan IF-Addictz
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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
Hi Isha...Congrats on the new SS! Loving it n the title...please update soon n include me in ur pm list for this FF! Thanks 4 da pm! Whoa...Geet engaged to someone else...?? hmmm... Manan will defn get his Geet!Tongue

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mansijani21 Goldie
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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
love the start..!!
continue soon...
do add me to ur pm list

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amzu32 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
congrats 4 new ss.
Lovely part: )

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JayaR IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
good start...nice story plot...

so Geet is engaged to someone else...but still cant keep her hands and thoughts off Maan...

hey as u asked for it...here is the segment where u need to change...it has got 'WE'...

"Let's go," they both said in unison and we parted into another frantic run to reach the hotel before this erroneous weather desired to show its true self.

            All of them kept close watch of each other to make sure no one parted from the group. The hotel lights where amplifying as we got closer and they were going to be safe in the warm and toasty haven, our room."...


go through it...I hope I was helpful...

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 12:35pm | IP Logged



                                                              

  for 'Forbidden Thoughts'
Loved it Glitter Heart Pink Glitter Heart Pink Glitter Heart Pink
The last line was superb Clap
Eagerly awaiting more parts 
                              
                                      
                                                       

     

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mitzi11 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 1:52pm | IP Logged

amazing tittle
aweome start
love it
waiting 4 next part
thanks 4 pm

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jasraj123 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 2:33pm | IP Logged
congratulations for this. i loved it. it is sooo good. pls continue and update soon.

thanks for pm

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