Now I'm sure both of them were in love with each other and are still there... but some MU has cropped up...
Now I cant wait for the next part...pls update soon...
Originally posted by: aditiwalia56Its confusing. . . . They love each other then y they engaged wid other persons????
Originally posted by: zahra15i dont understand one thig...they seem to be loving each other...but them how come they r already engaged to other persons...i cnt click the like button...there is some problem...but do count me in your like list...continue soon n thnx for the pm...
Originally posted by: jasraj123it is awesome but bit confuse. they love each other and engaged to others😕 but i wil wait till u releive the truth.
otherwise it is really interesting and intense😆😉
thnks for pm and pls update soon
Originally posted by: Fallen AngelLovely update...it was amazing...😃
Just luv how you've written the past and present together...👍🏼
From this part, u can clearly tell that they love each other from a young age but perhaps family pressures have caused them to get engaged to other people... 😕 just my thoughts...
plz cont soon and thnx for the pm!!
Originally posted by: spvdcongrats on new ff...
part 1
wow nice start...
Maan and Geet are lost in some place and Geet is engaged to someone else?
thanks for the pm...
Originally posted by: spvdpart 2
wow lovely...
their flashbacks are so cute and lovely...
they are engaged to others...
wonder who...
cont soon...
Originally posted by: -afsha-Nice update
Loved itMaaneet old moments were fabTheir frndshp strted differently heheheheN their sepration was also sweetMaan can never control his actions wit Geet around😉
Originally posted by: esha143Wow...so much of their past...how they met and then became friends...their first separation and their first kiss...and they are discussing about all this now...why??Didn't they get time for this before now?How do they land with fiancees if they possibly have feelings for each other??what happened to them after they got separated??Amazing update...do update soon...
Originally posted by: undisclosedisha...i am so sorry your work got deleted...but this update turned out beautifuly...loved the flashbacks...they were so young when they met...that was too cute...and i love the way geet is so frank about her feelings...can't wait to read more...👏
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