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Dil Dosti Dance-FF-Part 21 - page 36! :) (Page 33)

-Awantika- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 August 2011 at 9:17am | IP Logged
I read it all in one go Shocked
I just came across this form for the first time and read it all and trust me, its AMAZING !
I got so engrossed in it that idk what do i say.
Honestly, it was supercool.
I loved every part so so much !!

And i am like WOW !!

Specially, Kriyansh Big smile
And i just love it how she kissed him LOL

Please update soon.
And pm me kay ?

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100littledevils IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 August 2011 at 9:29am | IP Logged
OMG OMG SHE KISSED HIM!!!!!!!!! ahhhBlushing

Anamika IAM SORRY FOR not commenting on the last part!!!! damn awesome yaar!!!!! loved the way you described their emotions!!!! and yeah i have not forgotten about your vm request...iam sorry yaar ...actually nowadays iam quite busy with studies...but will surely make one on ur song!! plzz can u post that song again so that i can download it :))))

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without-fathom IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 6:14am | IP Logged
Chapter 7: Aww these two! He saves her from the shower only to get irriatated at being the only one drenched and pull her back under in vengeance?! LOL Kria's right Rey - you are a Dazzler, can't take another upper hand LOL It was so cute to watch the little but consequential (?) bonding between Mommy and Rey - good idea to get on the good side already... ofc, it helps she has no idea about cut pipes and plumber wannabe acts LOL

Chapter 8 - Line of the chapter:  he was kind of cute in a gross, disgusting, burger-eating pig-kind of way ROFL Viha were uber cute! Vikki just a tad more than Neha, cause I always side with the guys Blushing Glad it wasn't RDX or Vikki writing the notes, cause RDX would be a shock and Vikki too cliche! You made the best call there! I wonder what he's going to tell the Dazzler gang though... specially Sharon? Maybe Rey will rescue his pig-mate?! Ermm

Edited by JZephyr - 08 August 2011 at 6:14am
without-fathom IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 09 August 2011 at 6:00pm | IP Logged
Pre note: So I'm trying to go slow, but each time I sit down, its hard to not just finish up with the 19 some chapters! But I'm trying to time it so I'm just rightly coordinated with the end of your exams... you better be having immediate update plans at that point Approve

Chapter 9: Wow! Can I just say you dealt with ViHa a whole ton better than the show itself? I usually have a hard time relating to the build up for that couple on the show, they are the only ones who kinda seem misfit - no offense ViHa fans, I just think they should be handled better... like you've done it here! Not just the food fight in the canteen - but other scenes they get, are usually left hanging middle of no where, quite noncommittally. Anyway, you did much much better. I actually wasn't waiting for their part to get done - as I do on the show - and that it took and entire chapter went well with me! not to forget, Vikki is my secret favorite LOL He's not the dude, and he's not the humble nice guy - he's in between and his half minds and imperfection make him so real! Embarrassed

Chapter 10: Now this was bumper part - we get Kriyaansh and we get ViHa! I know I should feel for Neha, but I feel more for Vikki. Because. Blushing Anyway - Kria and Rey continue with their hot and cold routine... they way Rey thought about how close he'd been to getting that date but wouldn't cause of Vikki, made me think of today's episode when they push him into election and he's thinking of how for the first time she's smiled and said thanks and there goes everything down the drain LOL Poor guy - I think life is more unfair to him than Swayam... at least Swayam's friends are more tolerant of his obsessive 'lowe' for Sharon LOL Poor Rey has not an ear in the place to call his own, not to mention an impossible nut like Kria to crack ... oh I feel for him alright! Ermm

and that's me for today, more reading and reviews tomorrow! 
.Anamika. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 August 2011 at 8:45pm | IP Logged
OhEmGee, JZee. Wow...I can't believe you've reviewed each part individually! I will reply back after my finals! But for now, you can safely read at least 3 parts a day, even more actually because I'll probably update this weekend. Happy Reading!
Anamika (:

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without-fathom IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 August 2011 at 10:42pm | IP Logged
Chapter 11 - Hostility and indifference were the only ways she could deal with a Dazzler, sure! Operative words were - could she manage indifference?! Hostility, maybe, just for a little while! Kriyaansh continue being hot and cold - I think nothing can really change that for them, even long after they get together... I wonder if there will be a day when Rey throws a tantrum and Kria has to appease?! 
ViHa were cute. Vikki's trying so hard, but he's also been an A level jerk, more than once at that! He can't have his cake and eat it too. Am I the only one who finds a Landon Carter semblance here?! 

Chapter 12ROFL ROFL ROFL I officially love Vikki more than ever! the guy just implies insanity and fun, there's no other way about it! Walks into a puddle and thinks of how hard love is (seriously princess, grow up!) then thinks about his sneakers, then remembers again that he was supposed to think about this verbal diarrhea girl, rebukes his 'pyaar' but looks for her anyway, gets attacked by a hooker and the girl plays his knight-ess with the armor ROFL Life can be so unfair! LOL

Chapter 13ROFL ViHa continues, as does the laughter riot. Can this guy get anymore cute?! Yes Neha, he is the diva, and Sharon can never beat him at that LOL The whole pati patni role play bwas so cute - reminded me of Chabilal and Romaira from the show between Kriyaansh (I wonder if you refer to that?!) And Vikki - its enough that you're one hell of a princess, stop trying get all SRK too LOL

Chapter 14 - Oh what's with these girls accusing the Dazzler men of being girls! I think a guy who can tell emerald and aqua and green and algae apart - just has a sharp sharp eye. Maybe he wont groan at shopping trips too - how awesome is that?! Psst Kria! Also, I like the silent symbiosis between Rey and Neha - they are each dealing with a nuthead and pighead respectively... might as well help each other LOL And Swaron playing unintentional cupid to give Kriyaansh a UST moment - wow, if only she knew! LOL

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.Anamika. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 August 2011 at 10:02pm | IP Logged
Part 20 -

Neha literally dragged Kria by her arm into Ecology class.

"Krrriaaa! Walk! - Right now! Or -  we're not -  friends!" Neha said, panting in between.

"What?! No! I can't! I have to go do homework for English class." Kria said, pulling herself away from her crazy friend. People in the hallway were turning around to stare at them.

"You didn't GO to class this morning. And Kria already done last week's homework. Neha copied that so don't lie." Neha stopped. "He's not there. Rey."

" SHHH! We need a code name for him. RS?" She looked at Neha.

"Very original, Kria." Neha rolled her eyes, leading Kria in the classroom.

"Sit." Neha told her. Kria glared at her, walking to the last corner seat of the room. "Uh, Kria, not there! We can't even see the slides from there!"

"Too bad." Kria pouted. She opened her books and sat down, trying her best to hide herself. She did the best she could but just as Rey walked in, everything stopped. It took him about two seconds to spot her. Well, so much for 'hiding' at the back of the classroom, Kria thought. She couldn't look away. He held her gaze in a piercing way. He usually smiled, or winked or did something at her. But right now, he was just staring. It was almost creepy in a...creepy way. What the hell?! Kria! Wake up!! Snap out of it! She forced herself to look away, looking at the front of the classroom.

Rey walked straight up to her desk, placing his book beside her's. Kria's eyes widened in horror. Or shock. Or both. Neha looked at him and walked towards Vikki who he mouthed, "What happened?!" to her.

"Neha?!" Kria called out, in fear. Neha shook her head vigorously, as if saying, "no way". Damn it, Kria thought. She took her words back. She had the worst best friend ever!

"Rey, about yesterday – I shouldn't have – "

As the professor walked into the classroom, the class stood to acknowledge his presence and Rey looked away from Kria. Was he angry? Was he just playing with her? She was getting restless already. She spent the whole lecture, looking at him stealthily, stealing a glance here and there. She looked at her notes. She barely had anything written down. Hell, even Vikki, sitting three seats away from her had written more. Now that was saying something.

                As the class shuffled around, Kria realized the lecture was over. She gathered her things and put them in her bag quickly, leaving her pens uncapped, something she never did. She was about to get up when she caught Rey's piercing gaze again.

"Sit." He said. And she did, obediently. He waited for the whole class to get empty. Then he walked up and closed the door. The first thought Kria had was 'rape'! And the second was where the hell was Neha?! How could she leave her with this angry vulture? He approached her slowly like those old Hindi movies with the villains walking towards the doe-eyed, helpless heroine.

"Rey, I'm sorry about yesterday. I shouldn't have done what I did. It was totally uncalled for. Out of line. You were just annoying –"

"Oh, I was the one that caused that?" Rey asked, cockily.

"Yes! You're...just so arrogant! You think you're always right. You're the hero. You HAVE to fix everything. You have to be friends with the Dazzlers and us too! I mean, you just can't be superman, Rey."

"Okay, so my over-friendly nature makes you angry?" Rey asked.

"Yes." Kria sighed. It did.

"And so when you're mad at people, you go and kiss them?" Rey asked, smiling ever so slightly.

"No! I mean...I just sort of did that. I don't know why. It's just stupid. Okay? I was stupid. Now, can I please go?" Kria looked helpless. Rey was loving every bit of this interrogation.

"No, it wasn't just something stupid. You were trying to tell me something. You said, "it's nothing"?" Rey questioned, walking towards her.

Kria couldn't stand it anymore. He was teasing her! "Rey, I don't remember. Just get lost. I'm sorry, okay? It won't happen again." She grabbed her bag and started walking past him. Rey grabbed her hand, pulling her aggressively.

"Rey, what the hell- ?!" Kria shouted.

"Kria, you need to learn to kiss." He lifted her face slightly with his index finger, tilting his own.

"Rey – " Kria tried pushing him away, but Rey interwined his fingers with her's, pulling her closer until their lips met. He didn't kiss her fiercely as Kria had been anticipating. His kiss was soft and gentle. He didn't hurt her. He stopped suddenly, pulling away just a bit to only leave his bottom lip touching her's. Kria opened her eyes, confused. Was she really that bad at kissing? He smiled as he pulled away. She was frozen in her spot. The whole world was spinning like crazy. She looked at his twinkling eyes, his lips curled into a mischievous grin.

"We'll practice more later. I'm sure you'll get better eventually." He winked, leaving the room. Kria sat down on the table, afraid her wobbly legs would make her crash if she tried to walk. That was...unbelievable.

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.Anamika. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 August 2011 at 10:04pm | IP Logged
A big thank you to all! So I know this is kinda I swear this is the last short part because I'm done 3/4 of my exams today!! Yayyy! And just ONEEE more to gooo on Monday!!!! So after Monday, I'll try to update more often! Hope y'all like this one! Comments? Suggestions?

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