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Dil Dosti Dance-FF-Part 21 - page 36! :) (Page 13)

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 2:18pm | IP Logged
yaar that was amazing tooo goodClap and yeah thats true I didnt feel like they made it properly either and am really glad you redid it because yours is wayy better- love the slap that neha gave vikkiLOL i bet we all wanted to do that since the food fight episode. Angry

very nicely written with the description of neha and her feelings xxx Hug

overall loved whole update plz continue soon Heart


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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 5:09pm | IP Logged
wow completely loved it...cant wait to see more...vikki and neha are so cute...

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
wow amazing Clap
u included more onscreen scenes to ur ff Smile i really liked itWink
and plz continue soonHug

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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 10:49am | IP Logged

Mayurlover4eva, thanks! I don't think a lot of people liked my version judging by the underwhelming response! LOL

Neetu, thanks! They have some really sweet moments in the next few parts!

Thanks Upeka! I will have a part updated by tomorrow hopefully! It's just a few minor changes I have to make.

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^^ Annie, you're done with your update! Ouch

Maine abhi apni likhni shuru bhi nahi ki!
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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
haha! Yes Pree, I did a rough copy sort of thing but its not completely done. Toh kar kya rahi ho?! Go finish! LOL
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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 2:15am | IP Logged
I'm so glad you did this scene in your way again! It has soo much depth from Neha and Vikki's angle! Smile

Awesome update, as always!! Thanx loads! 
And Nikita, thanx for the pm! Smile

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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 8:06am | IP Logged
Hey that was just AMAZING..loving too much...Vicky n neha are veryy cute reee...jst loved it..u xpressed them entirely diffrently..lved it...yea missed kriyansh...wowo loving ur ff plz update soon.
Luv,
Sups.!

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