Dil Dosti Dance-FF-Part 21 - page 36! :) - Page 10

Originally posted by: .Anamika.

Pree, update soon! And start finding mistakes lol I was careful to stay away from numbers!

 

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Yeah, Pree but I changed all that...Only some parts were taken from the actual show. I wanted Neha to leave there crying. On the actual show, she looks like she's about to cry and in the next scene it's all comedy with the food fight. And that really killed the whole emotional aspect of the scene before so it didn't make any sense to me. So I wanted to change that part too...

Mayurlover4eva, thanks! I don't think a lot of people liked my version judging by the underwhelming response! 😆

Neetu, thanks! They have some really sweet moments in the next few parts!

Thanks Upeka! I will have a part updated by tomorrow hopefully! It's just a few minor changes I have to make.