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Maaneet SS:Tujhe Bhula Diya PT 21/[22 COMPLETED] (Page 99)

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mirnalini

Originally posted by khushi_4ever

Originally posted by mirnalini

AUTHOR'S NOTE
 
 
 
Some people are still getting it all wrong.
 
Geet is not hurt, just shocked.
 
When someone cheats on his/her spouse, that is when we say that they're commiting adultery.
And here what is so funny about the situation is its irony.
The irony being, that Maan slept with his own wife, and is still telling Geet that they comitted adultery, that they cheated on Dev.
Maan is basically playing a prank on Geet.
When they are technically doing nothing wrong, the situation is still of that they are.
 
Please don't mix this situation with your hatred towards Dev.
Dev here is being used merely as Geet's fake husband.
 
And guys, Geet is not as delicate as you think.
She's our Punjab di Sherni, she'll get back at Maan alright.
 
So relax, and try to see the humour I'm trying to portray here.
 
Love
MirnaliniStar
 
Mirnalini, u must have already read what i had written after reading ur chapters 16,17 and 18, but still iam going to copy past it again here...just so u know...
 
OK now iam going to differ from a lot of people and say loved the way Maan is teasing her..ok it is a bit much for a pregnant and worried much, in love wife, but at the moment iam loving this MSK who clearly is smittened with his wife whether he remembers anything or not and yet is teasing her so much...
 
Very good way of leading the story.currently among all the FFs that i persue, yours is the best one and i just love it...so update fast  


 
Hey Khushi!!
Big smile
 
I had read your commentSmile
But I couldn't reply since I was reading it from my ipod.
 
I have to say that I'm really very flattered that you liked my SS so much.
I just I hope I'm able to live up to your and all my other lovely readers' expectations in the future as well.
 
And I'm really glad that you understand the humour in what I'm writing.
Some people are angry at Maan out of their concern for Geet, so I've just been trying to explain to them the whole situation.
 
I'm also very happy that you like the way Maan is teasing her.
 
And by the way, was my suggestion able to solve your vm problem.
Just let me know if you need any more help.
I'd be glad to provide it.
And do PM the link of your video, I'd love to watch it.
 
 
Lots of love
MirnaliniStar
U were a great help to me...and yeah i have already uploaded it...it isnt a VM but certain scenes put together for my FF...u will see when i get over this writer's block in my head and update my FF...
and yes, write the story as u look at it, as it will be fuller, richer and more entertaining to us when it comes unadultered and so by the end of the day we profit by getting the satisfiction of such a good read...and ur as it is doing a very good job of it...Clap Clap Clap

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mirnalini

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by khushi_4ever

Originally posted by mirnalini

Originally posted by khushi_4ever

Originally posted by mirnalini

AUTHOR'S NOTE
 
 
 
Some people are still getting it all wrong.
 
Geet is not hurt, just shocked.
 
When someone cheats on his/her spouse, that is when we say that they're commiting adultery.
And here what is so funny about the situation is its irony.
The irony being, that Maan slept with his own wife, and is still telling Geet that they comitted adultery, that they cheated on Dev.
Maan is basically playing a prank on Geet.
When they are technically doing nothing wrong, the situation is still of that they are.
 
Please don't mix this situation with your hatred towards Dev.
Dev here is being used merely as Geet's fake husband.
 
And guys, Geet is not as delicate as you think.
She's our Punjab di Sherni, she'll get back at Maan alright.
 
So relax, and try to see the humour I'm trying to portray here.
 
Love
MirnaliniStar
 
Mirnalini, u must have already read what i had written after reading ur chapters 16,17 and 18, but still iam going to copy past it again here...just so u know...
 
OK now iam going to differ from a lot of people and say loved the way Maan is teasing her..ok it is a bit much for a pregnant and worried much, in love wife, but at the moment iam loving this MSK who clearly is smittened with his wife whether he remembers anything or not and yet is teasing her so much...
 
Very good way of leading the story.currently among all the FFs that i persue, yours is the best one and i just love it...so update fast  


 
Hey Khushi!!
Big smile
 
I had read your commentSmile
But I couldn't reply since I was reading it from my ipod.
 
I have to say that I'm really very flattered that you liked my SS so much.
I just I hope I'm able to live up to your and all my other lovely readers' expectations in the future as well.
 
And I'm really glad that you understand the humour in what I'm writing.
Some people are angry at Maan out of their concern for Geet, so I've just been trying to explain to them the whole situation.
 
I'm also very happy that you like the way Maan is teasing her.
 
And by the way, was my suggestion able to solve your vm problem.
Just let me know if you need any more help.
I'd be glad to provide it.
And do PM the link of your video, I'd love to watch it.
 
 
Lots of love
MirnaliniStar
U were a great help to me...and yeah i have already uploaded it...it isnt a VM but certain scenes put together for my FF...u will see when i get over this writer's block in my head and update my FF...
and yes, write the story as u look at it, as it will be fuller, richer and more entertaining to us when it comes unadultered and so by the end of the day we profit by getting the satisfiction of such a good read...and ur as it is doing a very good job of it...Clap Clap Clap
 
THANKS!!!Embarrassed

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khushi_4ever

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
i loved the last 5 parts...omg...geet blasting upon maan concerning those girld was so funny n on top of that maan pretending he had not heard the naame maan with that of geet...[oor geet...n then their love making...dreamyyy...i thought maan wud have told geet everything...but then he decided to continue wiz his pranks...poor geet...n now he is even going for 3 days...i hope that geet tkes her revenge as welll...lolzz...it will b so much fun if she will tease maan as well...continue soon n thnx for the pm...cnt wait for the next part...

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 2:18pm | IP Logged
I understand Maan's plan of understanding Maan and Geet's relationship. This is so funny. Maan is going to get it from sheet when she figures out he knew that she's his wife. I'm waiting for the sherni to be unleashed! Lol thanks for the updates Smile

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ninand IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 2:23pm | IP Logged
let me see.. hmm..
a sword? umm..no,  maybe a scythe?..umm..Nah.   hmm.. USTARA?!! oh yeh... 

why? oh.. to chop him into tiny little pieces of courseCensored. unless Geet would wanna go for  -
'kick his arrogant behind to Mars'
'toss him in an angry beehive so he can get as close to all the 'Honeys' as he can get''
'simply grind her teeth and tear his storm-proof hair apart'.

Go GeetStar. Avenge yourself sweetie.. we re right there with all the ammo u may need.Approve


Edited by ninand - 17 June 2011 at 2:23pm

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 2:27pm | IP Logged
loved the updates and ur note

continue super soon

love
Sana

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 2:30pm | IP Logged
Great update
Thanks for pm

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
res
all the parts are marvelous
do continue soon

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