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Posted: 19 June 2011 at 6:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mirnalini

Originally posted by jwalamukhi

Originally posted by mirnalini

Originally posted by jwalamukhi

@mrinalini

when u said that geet will take revenge...i thought it will be good..but yaar..it became too much...my pov...but anyways..nice update...i was expecting something else...this sort of twist is surely hard to digest atleast for me...don't take otherwise dear..i am crazy fan of ur ff...but here...nothing i felt humorous..sorry if I sound rude...plz excuse me for that...

maan was having amnesia...he did some things OTT...and now geet...first saying its dev's child..now doing all these things.Angry...

geet's actions were ott today...Ouch

 
Hey dear!!Smile
 
Absolutely no offence taken honey. You're completely free to have your own point of you.
 
And it's absolutely alright if you didn't like Geet's plan.
I welcome criticism. It helps me improve my writing. That is why we writers wait for comments from our readers, so that we can understand their stance and what they expect from the story.
 
Please feel free to post what you think Geet should have done, I may probably be able to use that and incorporate it into Geet's plan to get back at Maan.
 
Looking forward to your suggestions.
 
Lots of love
MirnaliniStar

thank u mrinalini..i was very tense about ur response to my comment...with ur reply..i got relieved...thank u once again for taking it in a positive way...i simply love ur ff dear...ii visualize then as a motion picture...when the picture of geet doing those things with arjun an dev flashed in my mind...i couldnot digest...because according to me geet never does anything that will hurt maan even for fun sake...that is the character of geet...i feel like that
 
 
Hi again dearSmile
 
 
I understand that you didn't like Geet romancing with Arjun, and running into Dev's arms.
But you're forgeting that this is all just a sham. They're all acting to trouble Maan.
And all of this is happening on Geet's orders.
Geet isn't really doing anything with them, it's just a facade that she's putting up.
And don't worry, none of this is going to have an adverse effect on Maan's health.
 
Earlier when Maan was troubling Geet, several of my readers were worried about Geet's health and were angry at Maan for playing such pranks on his pregnant wife.
This is just Geet getting back at him.
 
You remember how tense Arjun was when he had to touch her.
He was probably chanting Hanumaan chalisa all the while!!LOLLOLLOL
 
Geet was enraged when she found out that Maan already knew the truth, and had been messing with her to amuse himself.(Will come up in the next part)
So now she's just giving him a taste of his own medicine.
 
But if you can suggest some more ways for Geet to take her sweet revengeWink, pls post it here, I'd love to incorporate it in the succeeding story.
 
 
Lots of love
MirnaliniStar

thanks dear for clarifying many things...keep rocking...waiting for next update eagerly and impatiently...plz update soon...u know very well about ur characters geet and maan...i have full faith on you..u r going to do wonders...i will be just waiting for next part...

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Posted: 19 June 2011 at 6:43am | IP Logged
btw u are sooo right ... Shakespeare will defo bang his head on the wall after finding after about this comedy of errors of the khuranas LOL
 
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Posted: 19 June 2011 at 6:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sindu555

btw u are sooo right ... Shakespeare will defo bang his head on the wall after finding after about this comedy of errors of the khuranas LOL
 
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Sana
 
Poor ShakespeareTongue!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 19 June 2011 at 6:47am | IP Logged
Omg...
totally enjoyng this new twist.
can't believe she ran and hugged dev...
and the baby is vicky's...
haha that was just too funny x..
and arjun lol loves geet but too scared of maan... maan is defo going to kill maan x lmfao..
haha maan is getting a taste of his own medicine...
please update soon xx

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Posted: 19 June 2011 at 6:52am | IP Logged
oh my god !! awsome yaar ,,,
could not stop laughing at all ..
geet is greater than maan in confusing !! 
according to maan , she is dev's wife with vicky's child and in love with arjun ROFLROFL

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Posted: 19 June 2011 at 6:59am | IP Logged
omg what did she do???
poor maan now he will surly not get any memory back ROFL

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Posted: 19 June 2011 at 7:02am | IP Logged
but how can u make geet go leep into that rapist arm this is not acceptable i feel disgusted of geet chi

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Posted: 19 June 2011 at 7:19am | IP Logged
this is same as what happened in sasural genda phool...

but well written... hats off...

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