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MsMovielover IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 6:08am | IP Logged
its such an amazing concept..
please continue soon

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seemamary IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 6:11am | IP Logged
Awesome update, Its very interesting.plsss continue soon.

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maaneetsangel IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 6:12am | IP Logged
awesome ... superb ... 

interesting concept ...

add me to ur pm list ...

continue soon ..

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sunshine94 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 6:20am | IP Logged
nice update...plz add me 2 ur buddy list

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_BlackPearl_ IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 6:55am | IP Logged
Congo on the new SSDancing

Interesting concept it!!!

Both the parts were wonderful!!!

"Maan's mouth watered at the sight of the paranthasLOL, but controling himself he decided to first address the more important issue at hand."ROFL ...loved it!!!
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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 7:01am | IP Logged

Part 3:

"Kaash meri biwi bhi aisa khana banati!!!", said Arjun, sighing as he shoved another big piece of the parantha into his mouth.
"Yeh sab yahan kya ho raha hai!!!????!!!", thundered a voice at the trio in the kitchen.
Both Vicky and Arjun's hands stopped in mid air, and Geet dropped the parantha she was about to give Vicky.
Vicky looked at the wasted delicacy in dismay and stood up angrily to give his elder brother a piece of his mind
"Bro is tarah chillane ki kya zaroorat thi!! Dekha kya hogaya, aapki wajah se mera parantha neeche gir gaya!!", but as soon as these words left his mouth, Maan glared at him with such murderous eyes that he sat back down again and said in a low voice, "Koi nahin, floor saaf hai, main aise hi kha loonga"
"Maine poocha yahan yeh sab kya ho raha hai??
Aur tumm yahan kya kar rahi ho??"
"Inhe hum yahan laaye hain", came dadi's authoritative voice from behind Maan.
Maan turned around while Arjun and Vicky sighed in relief.
This was not Geet's husband, this was the Maan who hadn't fallen in love with Geet yet, and was bitter, and had wrath strong enough to kill people.
Hence, handling him was very difficult.
"Par dadi yeh..."
"Bas Maan!
Hum Geet ke khilaaf ek shabd bhi nahi sunenge.
Yeh aapki nayi secretary, aur intern architect hain, aur humari caretaker.
Agar ab aap ne inke yahan hone ke baare mein koi bhi halla muchaya, to hum aapse kabhi baat nahi karenge"
Maan tried to argue with dadi but his efforts were futile.
She won't listen to anything at all against her.
Pata nahin is ladki ne Dadi pe kya jaadu kar diya hai!
Jo dadi is ke khilaaf ek shabd bhi nahin sunna chahtin!!
Isne zaroor ro dho ke dadi ki sympathy collect kari hogi.
But he will not be fooled that easily.
He'll never let her succeed in her plans.
"Theek hai, aap ko jo karna hai kijiye."
With that said, Maan gave Geet a murderous glare and left.
The remnants of the kitchen looked at each other, and all moved to Geet to console her.
Maan entered KC surrounded by his entourage.
In long strides he covered the distance between the parking lot and his cabin, paying no attention to the greetings he recieved from his employees.
He instructed Sasha and Adi to bring in the files of the projects they had been lately working on.
Everybody at KC had been informed about the situation earlier by Vicky, and they were all very scared, cuz this was the old angry MSK.
After having met Geet he had become quiet pleasant, but this old self of his was devil personified.
Adi and Sasha nervously entered Maan's cabin with the files that he had asked for.
Without glancing at the files they held out to him, he said
"Has Geet Handa reported to office yet?", Adi fumbled with his words and then finally managed to say
"No SSS...S...SSir"
Maan looked up at Adi with angry eyes and said,
"Then call her!!
And make sure she is not payed for today since she is late!!
That ought to teach her about punctuality!!
And send her to my cabin the moment she comes!!"
That said, he dismissed them with a wave of his hand.
Sasha smirked at what was about to happen with Geet.
MK had no recollection of her, and she'd make the most of it...
She won't let that behenji steal MK away from her this time...
So guys
That was Part 3
Hope you enjoyed
Keep reading, LIKING and CommentingWink

Edited by mirnalini - 25 May 2011 at 11:59am

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 7:14am | IP Logged
"Koi nahin, floor saaf hai, main aise hi kha loonga"

This line had me ROFL
ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL...Vicky is hilarious...Oh I just love himROFLROFL... not being able to get rid of her or do anything to her at house..Maan is trying to take his anger out on Geet at office now...n that witch Sasha is back to her games again this time...but I hoep Geet can handle it all well since she already know how to handle her Dusht DanavEmbarrassedTongue...wonderful updateBig smile

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 7:21am | IP Logged
Nice update.. OMG vicky is funny... angry MSK is really tuff... wonder how geet would deal with him... sasha is too much.. continue soon

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