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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 3:21am | IP Logged
omg
 
yeh prem ko kya ho gaya hai
 
hope woh jaldi sahi raste par aaa jaye
 

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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 10:24am | IP Logged
interesting update!

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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
FIza,
very nice update.
very well written.
OMG!!!
prem addicted by dugs!!!!
i hate adi...he's just looser (cant use those language, which i felt for him)
poor prem.
m worried abt him.
a very gud micky mouse boy turned into a drug addict, lair n now a theif or smugller (maybe...n i hope, my prediction will wrong)
waiting for next update.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
great work fiza...
nice update...
 
omg i am scaredfor prem...
this adi is sooo bad!!!...
hope mayank and nupur will be able to help him out

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 7:28am | IP Logged
fiza-ji!! mujhe raj aur rahul ke liye darr lag raha haiConfused

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Posted: 05 June 2011 at 3:28am | IP Logged
FOR THOSE WHO WERE ASKING ME ITS REAL STORY ...TU YES ITS A REAL LIFE STORY ...NTHING IS FICTION IN IT
 

CHAPTER:4

 

Prem: kya kero samhj nhi arha hai….na bhai pasay daytay hai na bhabi…ab tu I dont have any expense gadget to sell…I need to think sumthng soon …warna mein mar jao ga…..

Adi: I have a plan …us se humari sari problem solve hojay gi…if u agree…..

 

Prem: wht plan…

Adi: dekh…u have two nephews haina….

Prem: han tu

Adi: wht abt we kidnap thm

Prem: shutup adi..how can u just say tht …thy r my life….

Adi: han tu mein kaun sa un ko marny ko kaha rah ha hoo

Prem: ADIii…

Adi: relax….nhi kerna tu na ker…..ker arrange pasay ….simple plan tha ..hum un ko yaha latay …arms se rekhty un k sath khelty …un se pyar se baat kerty….aur do din mein tera bhai ransom ki amout day dayta….woh tu lay ker ata arm se bacho k lay jata ….kya problem thi is mein

Prem: tera deemag karabb hogaya hai

He left fro there in anger ..n frustration….anger as he cant think of doing anything such to his angel…n frustrated as his craving was getting on his mind….he was getting out of contrl…..too much of tremors…

Prem: adi….i agree…plan bata …I cant take it anymore….but promise un k kuch nhi hoga…

Adi: aray yarr tu rehan na un k sath…phir kasay kuch hoga

Bus tu kal un ko skool se apny farm house lay aa…wah kisiko shak nhi hoga

The keys of the farm house was with mayank…he with silent feets move to mayanks room…raj was hugging mayank n was sleeping like n angel..while mayank huged nupur n nupur rahaul…..prem chukled at the view…a sweet peacefull family…

He for a min thought wht he is doing..but thn again the tremor make him forgot his duties….        

He opened the cupboard slow n took the keys n left…

In moning:

Prem: chaloo …aj chaoo k sath skool chaly ga

Rahul jump over prem in happiness…

Raj: really ..wao chahoo..after so long .u will enjoy….

Rahaul : lets go

Thy strted to dragged him out….

Nupur: arms se rukh….bag tu lay lo

She gave thm bag…

Mayank: oye my champs..no goodbye…..he hugged raj n rahul…n looked at prem

Kayal rekhna …they r in ur shelter

His word make his heart sink but he shrugged the thought n moved away…

Rahaul: chaoo..this isn't th way to our skool…

Prem: v r going sumwhere else…but promise nobody is gonna mess..

Raj: but v were supposed to go skool…even mom dad didn't knew it

Prem: mon dad knew it……I asked them to keep quite…I want to gave my champs surprise..

Rahaul: ohh waoo chaoo ur great….

…..

Mayank: yeah log chaly jatay hain tu gahr kitna khali lagta hai….

Nupur: hmm…..mjhy bata rahy hoo…itna muskil hojata hai time guzarna aur jab ghar atay hain tu sab kuch sir per utha laytay hain…..

Myanak: chukled….oki wifey ..mein bhi chalta hoon…don't miss me too much…he leaned towards n was stoped by her

Nupur: mayank

Mayank: he looked here n there…kya yaar aj tu field clear hai…sorry ur not granted freed om…..he quickly pecked hr lips…bye..lova ya….

…………….

Prem: tu phone ker ..meri awaz pehacn lay gay

Adi: ghar k no bata

Prem: ghar per nhi bhabi akeli hogi …us ko kaun sambhly ga…..

Adi: tu tu ja gahr …tak kis ko shak na hoo

Kids where playing PSP…n where enjoying there time…he went to them

Prem: chaho is just cuming in sumtime….dont bother chahoos frnd….

Raj: oki chahoo…;

Nupur: agay tum …

The phone runged n she picked up..

Hello…

Mrs. Nupur Sharma

Yes im talking

Ur son are with us….dont u dare try to call police….we will call u back for ransom

She droped the phone n got dizzy…prem rashed to her n caught her…..bhabi….rahul raj..she said n fainted

Prem called mayank immediately ..he came rashing …n ask whr happen form prem….he didn't said anything …n pretend as he didn't knew anything…..

N phone again rung as prem sms adi to tell him abt ransom….

Hello..mayank Sharma

He repeated everything a the whole world spined under him….

We want 20 lakhs…..

N shut the phone….

He stood on sofa numb n not getting thing anything…..PRem..he shouted ..

Mayank: kaha chora tha tum ny raj aur rahul ko…han

Prem: bhai skool

Mayank: tu…tum phir how they got kidnapped haan….bolo

Prem: wht…..he appered shocked but str sweting too….

Mayank was too numb to observe anything …he went to nupur as she was now conscious….

Mayank: nupur…he controlled his fears n pated her head lovingly

Nupur: she stood up immediately  n hold him…mayank raj aur rahul aay …mayank kaha hai woh…..kaha gay woh…rahul tu wasy hi buhat darta …..mayank bolo na kisi ny mazak kiya …..

He hugged her tight n sobbed himself …

Mayank: unhay kuch nhi hoga…im there na….trust me nthing will happen ….

The doctor gave her sedative n prem left saying he is going to check the near by areas….

Mayank called his close frns who was ACP ….he was a bussines tycoon so much of contact were nthing …..

Samrat: bacho k skool kaun lay ker gaya tha

Mayank: prem…

Samart: did thy called back…was im tracing the no…

Mayank: thy did ..n asked for 20 lakhs..samrat day day aur meray bacho ko mjhy lany day

Samrat: dekh is baat tki koi gurantee nhi k woh ransom ki amount lay ker bhi kuuch na keray….dnt tell anybody not even nupur or prem abt me knowing so…being emotional thy may oppse …tu samhj….2o lakh is a ver small amout means thy r nt so professional…

Mayank: wht so evry sami…..yaar woh dono buhat chotya hain…aj tak kahbi akelay nhi rahy …nupur ny dil se laga ker rekha hai un ko…..he hide his face in his palm

Samrat: realx…woh meray bhi bacho jasay hain..trust me….i want to talk to prem….

Mayak ata hoga…woh bhi pareshani mein skool k as pass gay hai dekhny

……………….

Prem: hey champs…kya horah hai

Rahaul: chaoo hum yah kyun aay hain….

Prem: cause mom n dad where going out of country so I thought we shud also have fun haina

Raj: but y thy didn't take us

Prem: my papers r going on …n u bth r gonna go without chahoo..hmm

Rahaul: nt at all….thy hugged him.n strt playing….

Adi: oyre idhar aa

Yeah ter bhai ransom k kuch itnezaam kiya

Prem: 20 lakh tu bhai k ghar mein hi rekhy hongy….kerny ki zaroorat nhi…bs bhabi thora disturb zayada hai…sahi rahy woh bs

Adi: ab tu ghar ja..mein in dono ko dkehta hoon……phir I'll cll n tell abt ransom..where we want it

He went home n found sami there n his face become white as sheet…he knew he is an acp n can do loot more thn he can just imagine……

Smai: ary prem aao na waha kyun garahy hoo…

Prem: hay bhai kasay hain app

Sami: im fine….

Mayank pretend n asked him nt to tel sami anything…this act of him made prem extremely relifed…to his stupidity he sms adi nt to call until sami left …warna us ko pata chal jay ga

Sami: bachy kaha hai

Prem: woh bahr gay hain…apny dost k yaha…

Sami: tum kasay hoo….wht happened to ur lips\

Smoke drugs…his lips had turn white..whne asked by mayank n nupur he said its infection…

Prem: infection

Sami: he looked closely as he can easily see they r residue of drugs n smeel of burn drug is cuming frm him…he is seen soo many of these people…..acha really

He saw prem sweating n in discomfort…

Sami: acha mayank mein chalta hoon

Mayank: thik hai….

Sami: mjhy prem k cell k records with sms chaiy…abhi….follow him where evry he goes….

Insepector: yes sir….

Mayank: on call….tu nikala hai aur kidnapers k phone aaya hai….unhony kal higway per bolaya hai ransom k sath

Sami: thik hai…tu pasay taiyar rekh baqi sab mein dekhta hoo…tu fikar na ker….

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Posted: 05 June 2011 at 3:44am | IP Logged
Awesom update
 
felling bad for Mayur as they both love their children a lot
 
do continue soon

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Posted: 05 June 2011 at 3:50am | IP Logged
OMG...this drugs make a people monster...i hope prem will get over soon...

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