SS new..LA HASIL (UNREACHABLE).CH3..16/9PG 26 - Page 19

first of all my heartfelt gratitude to u for writing this exceptional piece...tumne behad khubsoorti ke saath zindagi ka ek badsurat pehlu saamne laya...hats off dear...!

well the answer to the ques that how one can stoop soo low is unknown...as few r actually there who can stoop lower than hira n i personally know one...n i m yet to get the answer as what made them go to this extreme...!

epilogue not to mention is outstanding(nothing unusual though)...aap epilogue ki mallika ho janab...khaas kar reality stuff mein aap la-jawab ho 😳...kaash yeh log jo insaan bas naam ke hai woh yeh samajhte ke aise harqaton se woh sirf apna hi wajood khote hai...aur unke liye bas ek hi zumla yaad aata hai...dhobi ka kut*a na ghar ka na ghat ka...!

Edited by valliyah - 12 years ago

Beautifully written API... Edited by 18anila1 - 12 years ago

different & very written story fiza
Pyar, Ishaq, Muhabbat, are feelings pure, n serene.There feeling tht God Himself has put at the top most level, donot make them impure. very well said...
thanks for the pm

completely agreed fiza...thanks for writing this...:):)

Lovely epilogue

Very deeply thought

Being a girl it feels bad tht some girls lyk Hiram exist in dis world

Do write more

I need to read all chapters 

fiza this is actually the reality people sometime are so cheap and selfish 

gr8 msg Fiza, bt she was really crossing her limits and dnt knw what to say bt yes her acts were disgusting..!