SS new..LA HASIL (UNREACHABLE).CH3..16/9PG 26

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi guys

Yes this me FIZA, agin opening a new thread for series of SS I was planning ..n sum of u even knew abt it '..these are experience of life'two of which are true stories'..

These stories are complete contrast to wht Fiza as writer is always'.mayb sumwht continuation of "Wajood" type'..

For these stories if any one of u find not to receive a pm so pls do let me know'.i wouldn't bother u '..

There were four stories ..of wch wajood u have read'..now its next one for u guys'concept im posting 'thn I'll continue very soon'

Hope u 'll stay here with me n will tolerate them'.

Ur criticisms is very much welcomed here'..pls'feel free to coment..good or bad..even a word'

With loads of love

FIZA

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Posted: 12 years ago

INDEX...

MEHAFIZ
 
Prologue; scroll down
 
 
LA-Hasil...(unreachable)
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MAHAFIZ..THE PROTECTOR

CHILDREN: CHAHOOO…

Two sweet little kids…one of 8 years n other of 5 years….rashed in the arm of the person thy lve the most in this world…the bond the shre with him was precious..beautiful n amzing…fighting playing loving ..they ejoy the most time with him..as companion

 

Nupur: raj rahaul….let chaho atleast have water…he has just arrived from college

Prem: its oki bhabhi…if vr not gonna have masti  ….tu humara kahan kasay digest hoga…

Nupur: she smiled…oki oki…howz ur day…..she offered him a glass of water…

N he threw himself on sofa

Prem: tiring….very tiring…..

Nupur: see chaho is so tired n u guys r jumping on him….

Prem: im not only tired…..as he back hug her…..im hungry to…colloge mein bhahi k hath ka kahan kaha….

She smiled n patted his cheek lovingly

Nupur: tu ja fresh hoja….abhi kahan lagti hoon

A perfect relation of mother n son they share with each other….

Prem: tumahra pati kab wapas arha hai

Nupur: aj…shyad sham ko…she smiled realizing he is cuming back from a business trip after 25 days

Prem: uffuuu…smile tu dekho….kya baat hai….un ko koi interest hai business k elawa kisi chees mein…itni hot n happening biwi ko chor chor ker jatay rehty hain …had hai

Nupur: preemm tu buaht mar kahy ga

Mayank: hmm….meir pechy meri biwi ko meray gilaf bahrkata hai……

All of four of them turned around to see a smiling person standing at the door step…dressed in formal in his mid thirties…..he was loving the sight in front of him….the four most precious possessions  of his…..looking at him with a smile….his whole world standing in front of him….taking off all the tiredness he was carrying……make them…felt the most awesmst days as he is in front of them

 

This is the shrama family…a perfect family…huge bussines tycoons…having evrythng in there lifes…happiness..love …relationship…a till now a good fate too…..but life doesn't always remain the same

 

 

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fizaaa janu
perfect start- bilkul waise jaisa maine  kaha...
a perfect  family with  strong relationship...
this is a family for which each n every family member can feel proud ...
loved the bonding b/w nupur and rem
and wanna see more masti  b/w prem and kids...
yesss fizu - u have done a great job
  i love the great mayank sharma and his family...

fantastic job
keep it up
do update next part soon


Edited by -Faria- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thnk you for the pm fiza-ji🤗
lovely start😃... Sharma's are such a happy family😍
par inke saath kuch bura hone wala hai😕
plzz continue soon😳
n do pm me😳
love u
~jiya~
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely start fiza
loved sharma family...specially nupur& prem bonding
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely concept api🤗
so sweet😳
interesting too..i am in your pm list😊
continue soon

love
tasfia

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Posted: 12 years ago
Ha ji main bhul gayi
plz add me to ur PM list...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Grand welcome Fizu with ur reality stuff...!!!

Great start...THE SHARMAS r the most adorable family on earth...they truly share a lovely bond...the sharma kids n chacho r soo cute...bechare masti nahi karenge to khana digest nahi hoga😆...hmmm this dewar is really mischievious...love the way he back hugs n teases
her...here comes the most adorable of all sharmas our very own the one n only The Mayank Sharma...the person who connects the all other sharmas...yeh Mayank bhi na ajeeb hai always busy with his business stuff ufff...bhala itni hot wifey ko chod kar baar baar koi jata hai kya😉😆...but ur last sentence scared me...i know something very bad gonna happen ...well lets see how things unfolds...will be waiting for next update...!!!

P.S...Congrats...n always count me in not only as readers but ur admirers too😊...hope to be in ur pm list always😳...!!!
Edited by valiyah27 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res.
 will read and edit on thurs day after finishing my exams.