MG FF-Shaadi Ya Khel?PAGE 101 - Page 17

Hey very nice story...please  update soon and pm me next parts...😊

nice 

Hey sara read ur ff n realy m impressed by ur writing, i wont say i loved the update but in true sence i was hurt after reding ur 2nd update, amazingly wriiten n well described

awsome ff...i cudnt have missed dis 1!!!

do pm me on next update too...

love ya...n hope maan understands geet's feeling soon n starts respecting her as a human atleast...n not a piece of enjoyment!!!

  

Pls update soon and do pm me...

Originally posted by: chubzy

Hey sara read ur ff n realy m impressed by ur writing, i wont say i loved the update but in true sence i was hurt after reding ur 2nd update, amazingly wriiten n well described

R U A Girl?

great update pease pm me when u update next.

Originally posted by: tere_liye_10

</div>R U A Girl?
<div>Cos I get where youre coming 4m,way happened was horrible but its guna get worser😭

i m very much a girl, koi shak!!!! LOL worser than this, i wonder wat is their in ur mind, jo bhi ho waiting impatiently 4 ur update...

Plz add me to ur pm list n btw great update
I don't get it how cn maan b such a jerk. He's like sm low life loser who abuses his wife just for sex!! Eeewww!!! N I think geet should confront him. He is obviously raping her n she should kno her rights.. What at the most cn happen!! He'll hit her? But he's already hitting her. I think she should stand up to him. I'm a girl so I cn imagine wat she would b going through.. I think she should leave him- if he hasn't fallen for her in last 4 years, I doubt he'll fall for her now!! So I think it's best to finish sm relation than to always get pain frm it. I would do that if I was at geet's place
I'm sorry I just got carried awaybut I'm really feeling sympathy for geet. Please update soon

Seeing maan's character as a tough one in the serial many ff have him as a beast also and so also here 

Its nice to see Geets pov in this ff ... its quite torturous to see how she is treated ... and i also read its gonna get worse ...

what interests me is how Maan's character will shape up ...

What I am really liking is how you are portraying the gravity of the situations and instances through the character's pov instead of graphically / explicitly explaining the acts ... 

Please add me to your pm list ... i would be interested in tracking this ff 

Edited by fan008 - 12 years ago