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A sketch & Short Story on Event of Ansha Didi's Birthday!!(Pg:105) (Page 92)

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Posted: 21 January 2014 at 10:32pm | IP Logged
Lovely poem and siggy, Padma. Clap Star

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Nice poem & nice siggy !!! Clap
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Nice poem and nice siggy padma Smile
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Nice poem and siggy padma
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Thank You so much everyone.. Smile
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MY NEW Experimental Story on CID Inspector PURVI ...Its Experimental as I have tried to show bond of two sisters.. Wink Embarrassed

Name of Story: "..Ye Pal Hume Yaad Ayenge.."

NOW:
At 4 PM

Purvi Is seen getting down ...
of car and she is Listening to music..
Purvi as she is moving towards her room Is lost in thoughts..

"Aaahh.. Meri Pyaari Rani.. Khubsurat Pari lag rahi hai tu.. " She said running to catch her sister who was wearing a long beautiful dress..
"Arrey rukho na .. rukho na..." she said loudly as if showing that her hands dont reach to catch her up...

She again remebers another scene...
"Arrey Nani Maa... Baalon ko khula chodo de na.. Tera Ye Chand sa khilta chehra.. Wah wah .. " Said Purvi teasing her sister who always used to tie her hair up like old Dadi maa.
And she could very well bring infront of her eyes those jumps and kicks her sister made to giggle her and make her laugh loud..

Purvi Could Remember a day when she was accussed of killing a man in lift by DCP sir and how she was hurt on hand while fighting with Gunda gang..
She Still Could recollect those sweet gentle healing soft words which her little sister had said in order to maker her feel cheered and boosted..

"I always Love her company" Purvi Murmured.

She again remembered the day when in order to celebrate her birthday CID team had landed in her house and how her sister and CID family surprised her...

She remebers yet another scene..
"Didi mein baat nahi karungi..
Apne mujhe promise kiya tha ki mujhe bravery ki stories sunaoge..
Par apko toh time hi nahi mere liye.." said Purvi's sister jumping onto her..when she was still sorting some papers although it was 12 am..

And just as she remebers this sweet little moments between Herself and sister she felt her eyes watery..
she could feel that she is no longer able to concentrate on her work..
She could hear the voice of her little jaan her little sister..

Purvi puts all her books in her bag and tries to just rest on bed..
But her eyes are not ready to rest..
She again and again looks at her watch..

She inorder to keep herself engaged starts reading a book..

After almost 3-4 hours ..
Something makes Purvi SMILE..she is very happy..

She heard the door bell...
She gets up and starts running to open the door..

But..But No.. She just dosent move but has a very naughty look..
One girl opens the door and gets in..

Girl's face is completely scarified and she almost jumps back outside..
Purvi had scared her own sister with a loud noise..and at same time she hugged her..
But Yet On Other side we see A Tough Look and a Great shine in her eyes.. She raises her hands and shows a medal to Her Didi...which she have won for her bravery In Climbing up a Rocky Hill..
Purvi Looks into her eyes and Holds her hands in her sister's and shakes it saying I am Proud of You Dear..
Purvi runs back to her room holding hand of her sister and throws pillow on her and both start laughing and playing..

(Background Music: "Tum hi ho...bas tum hi ho.. Meri zindagi ki khushi bas tum hi ho..)

FLASHBACK
At 3 Pm..
Purvi is shutting down beauru's PC while freddy is discussing about his wife as usual and Daya sir abhijeet sir are sharing laughs..

Acp sir before leaving for home comes near the Team and joins them in their jokes..
He points out at Purvi saying " Hamara 'Bright Sun' kya kar raha hai?"

And abhijeet says Nahi nahi sir "Fire Cracker" she burns throughout na...?
Suraj toh din dhal jaye..dhal jata hai.."

Purvi gives a smile to them without saying anything for first time..

To which daya sir points arrey aaj Fire cracker thanda padh gaya hai kya?

Purvi could not resist and speaks up saying Nahi nahi sir..
Wo peechle kuch dino se meri sister ko miss kar rahi thi..
Wo school tour ke liye bahar gayi hai..
kabhi kabhi apno ki ehmiyat hume pata nahi hota jab har roj pass hote hai..

Acp sir says: Dekho..Purvi Beta tumne bilkul thik kaha.. Ye ek baat hai jo log bohot time lagate hai samjhne mein..
Log apne vichar,bhasha,Desh ya baato se nahi hote..par Dil se jise hum apna maan le..wo koi bhi kaise bhi ho Apne hi hote hai..

She is reminded of The Case in which ACP sir had said to her: "Purvi beta Zindagi hume jo bhi deti hai use apnana Chahiye.."
And Even ACP Sir had said: "Hum CID walo ko kuch nahi hota aur hum tumhe bhi kuch nahi hone denge..."
Purvi feels that ACP sir is Always an inspiration of Each and everyone in CID..
Purvi looks up at ACP sir and says: Haan Sir.. Bilkul.. And Smiles at him.. Big smile
All the team Smiled back Big smile

Story Ends by showing Purvi's Sister Singing Ek Dusre se karte hai pyaar hum ek dusre ke liye bekrar hum...
 
Big smileBig smile(Just a Short Bonding story.. Hope you all love it.. Do Give your COMMENTS... )Big smileBig smile

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That was very sweet Padma. I liked the bonding you showed. Nicely written. Clap

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Short and sweet story Padma di SmileEmbarrassed

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