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A sketch & Short Story on Event of Ansha Didi's Birthday!!(Pg:105) (Page 9)

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Posted: 27 June 2011 at 4:53am | IP Logged
Acp wid shockd luk looks at tasha. Tasha also gives shockd luk n wonder where daya n abhi sir r n just den they hear a loud noise.
Acp opens d door n very awarely walks in his wal. Tasha is releved dat nothimg happend to her dear sirs. There is no trace of daya abhi but house is decorated but no mention of happy bday symbol.
Just den dey again hear kurum kurum sound wich is coming from kitchen s roof. Acp walks in wid gun n unknowingly stands on secret door of his house . Just den kajal n sachin come up from there n he realy gets shocked n scared n presses that gun trigger n bullet is fired on the roof door lock. N den a big ghadam ghudum awaz comes. Its daya abhi who falls on acp who were sitting on roof top.
After a few time all luk at acp s angry look n say happy bday sir. Ye sab surprise plan tha.
Acp - haan haan mere pyaare bacho ye surprise n looks at daya abhi n say to mein kabhi nahi bhul sakta. Mein hamesha kehta tha ki sab kande se kanda milakar chalo to aj daya abhi ne mere kande aur phit ko ek kar diya.
Just den freddy enters very much scared n hands over d parcel to daya abhi n says isme bomb hai.
Acp is shocked n luks at them .daya n abhi walk forward n opens d parcel to everyones surprise its a big cake wid acps picture.
N just den a big sound again cums. Now acp is realy shocked n scared too n says- ab ye kya ho raha hai muje pehle hi jor ka zatka laga hai thank you team! Ab muje lagta hai muje chalana chahiye.
Tasha n kajal- par sir ye to apka hi ghar hai aur...
Acp- haan haan mein to bhul hi gaya tha.<just then a slide show begins wich shows all past memories of CID N ITS OFFICERS>
acp wid tearful eyes looks at his team n all team mates give there dear ACP A SALUTE wid smiling face.
THE END
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GIVE UR GOOD or bad comments. Point if u dont like but if liked den hit like button. Suggestions r welcum. So heres my first story complete.

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Posted: 27 June 2011 at 5:04am | IP Logged
sorry padmpriya 4 late reply...
ur all dedicated poems r awesome..
especially 4 vivek...mind blowing..
hope tumare bhayia maan jayeSmile

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Posted: 27 June 2011 at 5:07am | IP Logged
daya abhijeet frndship test
ur dis poem truly nice..
i see  such true frndship which i ofteny see in the dada's story..
its a true...

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Posted: 27 June 2011 at 5:35am | IP Logged
Shivani thanx for ur views n comments. Do comment on story too. Thanx.
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Posted: 27 June 2011 at 5:57am | IP Logged
yup padampriya..
need sumtime 2 read...

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Posted: 27 June 2011 at 7:46am | IP Logged
Ya dear take ur time. Nice to c u back.
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Posted: 27 June 2011 at 9:13am | IP Logged
Wow... great work...
Mind blowing...
Poems are 2 good...
Keep it up...


Edited by Chints09 - 27 June 2011 at 9:13am

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Thank u dear! U seem new. Thanx.

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