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A sketch & Short Story on Event of Ansha Didi's Birthday!!(Pg:105) (Page 7)

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 5:00am | IP Logged
ha ha ha poor tarika !! par sach to sach hai na..gud work padma !!Clap

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 5:09am | IP Logged
Oh thanx polly! How u doin? N ya i wil cal u roopal.
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wow padma...amazing poems...loved all...superb work...

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Posted: 24 June 2011 at 4:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zareta

wow padma...amazing poems...loved all...superb work...
thanku zareta!!
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Posted: 24 June 2011 at 6:44am | IP Logged
Frndz dis is my first attempt to write a short story wich is not at all detective but funny. Read n give ur suggestions.
[NOCOPY]
|ACPs SURPRISe|
(all team is having ear phone s n daya abhi watch them from outside bureau)
acp cums in n asks for daya abhi to team . Team gets scared n starts singing.
Tasha vivek- humare acp se acche acp koyi CID TEAM me na honge! Sare acp se acche humare sir honge!!
Acp- zor ka zatka hai jorose laga! Kya bat hai ab tasha tu bata!!
Freddie says haan tasha hame aise dhatne wale acp kahi na honge! Sare jahan mein aise acp kahi na hoge!
Kajal signals freddie to keep quiet n says is cid parivaar ka jo hissa bana usne hi paya pyaar tera!!
Acp- arre wah!! Aj sab log gana gane ke mood mein hai n ask freddie to accompany him.
Freddy in acp cabin.
Acp- kya bat hai mere pyaare freddy !! Bat bata to hi samose barsa!!
Freddy- haan woh sir kya hai na...<daya hears dis on headphone n says chup rukh>
freddy- chup rukh!!
Daya n abhi beng der heads!
Acp-kya?
Daya again tells freddy through hp ab chup chap cabin par baito!!
Freddie says ab chup chap cabin par baito!
Acp- hai meri kismat kya bol rahe ho tum fredricks!!!
Vivek enters
vivek- sir wo freddie sir ko dundne bahar postman aya hai!
Acp- dundhne matlab??
Vivek signals acp to make freddy go out.n leaves.
Acp- haan haan chalte chalte mere ye shabdh yaad rakhna freddie muh mat kholna!
<freddie now realises through hp who hv called him n now wat will happen to him>
n says yes sir!! N leaves.
Freddie cums out of beauru to find a letter wich says c for Cid n G for...?
Freddy starts moving n by walking he starts panting n moves fast to garage!! To find two man sitting on one bike.
On seeing freddy one man ie DAYA starts singing- hal kaisa hai janab ka? N looks at abhijeet n says kya khayal hai apaka??
Abhijeet says by luking at freddy n his condition ie sweating n says Dhak dhak karne laga ho apna freddy darne laga!! Acp se ucchi awaz se bat kaise karoo?? Kahi gadbad ho na jaye!! Bolo bolo janab!!
Freddy says sir haan sir main to dar hi gaya tha acp sir se aise bat karne ko par daya sir ne jab kaha ki wo wo wo jhapad to karna pada.
Abhi n daya says arre freddy tum to kya kamal nikle par accha hua jo hame vivek ne bata diya ki acp tume cabin leke gaye hai! Varna..! Isiliye ye lo( hands him one letter)
freddy- sir firse? <n opens it while daya abhi leaves>it says ' agar sidhe ungli se kam na ho to ungli tedhi karni padti hai!!{freddy starts to think about it}
at beauru
buearu phone rings
tasha picks it up
caller- hey janeman, janeja! Kaisi ho??
Tasha- bahut garmi hai tapman badh chuka hai. Thermometer kabhi bhi phat sakta hai...
C- omg!! To kaho fire brigade bhej diya hai!!
Tasha- itni jaldi?? Agar tab tak ungli tedhi nahi hui to??
C- to dekh lenge. N cuts call.
Acp comes out n asks tasha about call.
T- wo sir
acp-aage bolo tasha"
t- wo sir...phone tha ki apke!
Acp- kya batao aage!
T- sir apke ghar ko aag lagi hai sir
acp n team- kya??
Acp- kaise ho sakta hai?? Kuch arrangment hua?
T- fire brigade pauchi hai sir. Fire ab tak control mein hai.
After acps order they move to his house.
Tasha is riding car n acp on side seat all othr team except daya abhi r present back seat wid headphones.
Acp- ye ,daya abhi kaha rah gaye?ek phone bhi nahi kiya!!vivek kuch bataya unlogone?
Vivek- hears sum wisper in headphone n says ji wo nahi sir!!
Acp- kya ji or nahi!! Accha tasha jaldi bhagao!!
Tasha hears wisper in headphone.it asks oh mere faujo kaha pahuche ho??
Tasha just looks at acp n says sir hum javan road se jald hi pahuch jayenge.
Acp- haan tasha!! Par mein soch raha hoon ki ye freddy kaha rahgaya! Vivek!!tumne to aise hi bheja na usse postman aya bol ke!! Kaha reh gaya!
Vivek- wo sir muje lagta hai freddy sir hotel mein gaye honge!
Acp n tasha- par kyun ?
Acp- ek minute tasha tum jaldi chalao aur vivek haan ho sakta hai freddy ka kuch bharosa nahi!!
Here freddy is in traffic jam. He remembers the code-agar side ungli se kam na chale to ungli tedhi karni chahiye!!
N just then he sees a short cut road to acps house n turns car to that side. On d way one man stops him n he hears through headphone - wah freddy !! Ab wo jo de raha hai le lo aur jaldi aao.!
The man hand him a bag parcel.
Freddy- ek minute rukho isme kya hai? Bomb to nahi na?
Man-bade chalo, badhe chalo!10 min mein pauch jao warna bomb phat jayega. N leaves.
Freddy gets very scared n speeds his car as fast as can.
Here all reach acp s house.
Acp is shocked to c his house is completely fine while othrs shocked now wat to do!
Acp- tasha vivek muje lagta hai ye kisi ki sazish hai jaldi se spread ho jao!
Kajal sachin tum piche jao, vivek tum mere garage me dekho aur mein tasha age se ate hai.
Suddenly acp hears sum sound on top of his roof n warns everyone.
Tasha- sir, koi nahi hoga chuha bili ho sakte hai.
Acp- tasha kya ho kya gaya hai tum sabko ! N stops near door.
On door it is written welcome.
Acp wid shockd luk looks at tasha. Tasha also gives shockd luk n wonder where daya n abhi sir r n just den they hear a loud noise.
Acp opens d door n very awarely walks in his wal. Tasha is releved dat nothimg happend to her dear sirs. There is no trace of daya abhi but house is decorated but no mention of happy bday symbol.
Just den dey again hear kurum kurum sound wich is coming from kitchen s roof. Acp walks in wid gun n unknowingly stands on secret door of his house . Just den kajal n sachin come up from there n he realy gets shocked n scared n presses that gun trigger n bullet is fired on the roof door lock. N den a big ghadam ghudum awaz comes. Its daya abhi who falls on acp who were sitting on roof top.
After a few time all luk at acp s angry look n say happy bday sir. Ye sab surprise plan tha.
Acp - haan haan mere pyaare bacho ye surprise n looks at daya abhi n say to mein kabhi nahi bhul sakta. Mein hamesha kehta tha ki sab kande se kanda milakar chalo to aj daya abhi ne mere kande aur phit ko ek kar diya.
Just den freddy enters very much scared n hands over d parcel to daya abhi n says isme bomb hai.
Acp is shocked n luks at them .daya n abhi walk forward n opens d parcel to everyones surprise its a big cake wid acps picture.
N just den a big sound again cums. Now acp is realy shocked n scared too n says- ab ye kya ho raha hai muje pehle hi jor ka zatka laga hai thank you team! Ab muje lagta hai muje chalana chahiye.
Tasha n kajal- par sir ye to apka hi ghar hai aur...
Acp- haan haan mein to bhul hi gaya tha.<just then a slide show begins wich shows all past memories of CID N ITS OFFICERS>
acp wid tearful eyes looks at his team n all team mates give there dear ACP A SALUTE wid smiling face.
THE END



Edited by Padmpriya - 27 July 2011 at 2:45am

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Posted: 24 June 2011 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
well nice start padma di...quite confused but i guess this confusion will be solved by the next part...brilliant attempt i must say...waiting for the next part of this now...
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Posted: 25 June 2011 at 3:48am | IP Logged
Thanx dear but hear m nt gud at makng stories just wil try. N no worry its funny.
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Very funny and a mindblowing story di, waiting for the next part.Thumbs Up

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