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A sketch & Short Story on Event of Ansha Didi's Birthday!!(Pg:105) (Page 69)

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Its night around 10-10:30 pm when we see entire CID TEAM coming out from Hotel SAI
They were late due to some case work and they planned to go out for dinner...
DAYA: Wah Aaj kitna accha peth bhar gaya...
ABHIJEET: Daya tum toh aise bol rahe ho jaise itne Saalo se raat ko kuch kha nahi rahe ho...!!!
NIKHIL: Ye kaise ho sakta hai Abhijeet sir?? Daya sir itne din Khaye bina kaise itne fit reh sakte hai??Mujhe bhi...
PURVI: Arrey Nikhil...Abhijeet sir ke kehne ka matlab ye hai ki Daya sir hamesha hi itna peth bhar ke khate hai toh aaj aisa kyun...
DAYA(Interupts): Arrey Purvi...Tum sachmein bohot sidhi ho... Arrey samja karo agar tumne nahi bataya hota toh hum todha time Nikhil ki tang khichte the...
NIKHIL:Phir bhi Daya sir aap ab bhi mujhe nahi batate ki aap kaunsa food khate ho jo itne fit ho...
DAYA looks at all TEAM in helpless look...and all laugh...
ACP: toh mere khayal se tum sab ko ghar jana chahiye...Bohot der ho gayi hai..
All team wish each other good night and moves on

PURVI and SHREYA are shown on the way ...
Purvi is driving Car when Shreya starts conversation...
SHREYA: Purvi... Yaad hai hum aisehi Bachpan mein raat ko camp fire lagake sab friends kaise masti karte the...
PURVI: Haan Shreya Sab yaad hai...Aur hamesha truth aur dare Game mein tumhe bakra banate the...
SHREYA: Kya Purvi tum bhi na... kya kya yaad rehta hai tumhe...
PURVI: aur ek baar yaad hai...school mein tumne gusse se Principal madam pe ink ghira diya tha...
SHREYA: Haan toh purvi..!!!! woh tumhe aur mujhe separate bench pe bitane ja jo rahi thi...
When both are laughing and discussing about themselves Purvi sees one car which is behind them and driving very slowly as if following them for a long time...
and finaly Shreyas flat comes...
PURVI: toh shreya ... Ok Bye chalo ghar aa gaya...baat karte karte kab pohoch gaye pata hi nahi chala...
SHREYA: arrey Purvi...aaj mein soch rahi hu ki tumhare ghar pe aa jao...agar tumhe kuch problem nahi hai toh...
PURVI: ya Sure Shreya...Mujhe kya problem hoga... Toh tum aapne kuch kapde le lo...
 shreya and purvi goes in Shreya s Flat and come down in around 5-10 min...
And Purvi starts driving...
When they are driving ... 
Shreya says to Purvi(In Fear) : Purvi tumhe pata hai...kab se mein Note kar rahi hu...hamare peeche wali car hamse aage bhi nahi ja rahi hai nahi aapni speed bada rahi hai...Hum toh kabse same speed pe chala rahe hai...
PURVI (looking through her side mirror): Shreya mujhe pata hai...pehle meine socha ki koi hoga jo aapne raaste ja raha hai...Par aab jab haum itna time tumhare flat pe rukhe phir bhi wo hamare peeche hi hai...
SHREYA: shayad isse pata ho ki tum mere ghar mujhe drop karne rukhogi...
PURVI(speeds up her car):Haan mere khayal se hame jald se jald is car se peecha chudana hoga...
Purvi sees two roads infront of her one is normal road which she always takes to reach her house ...so Purvi takes other road through jungle which takes less time to reach home...and both are relieved to see other car goes from other side...
Both are on their way to Purvi s home when Purvi s phone rings...
Purvi picks up her call and puts it on speaker...
ACP: Hello Purvi beta... tum aur shreya sahi salamat ghar pohoche na...??
Purvi looks at shreya... shreya nodes her head in Yes...
PURVI(dil pe pathar rakhke): Haan sir ...woh hum pohoch gaye...
just then their car stops as their fuel tank is empty and they hear a big horn sound of a car...coming from far off behind them ...
Purvi and Shreya both get frightened and look back and purvi cuts the call...
And car with full lights and making lot of sound moves from side of their car...

Here we are shown Purvi and Shreya Very much scared and they are holding each others hands...
Purvi and shreya both gets down from their car...
and Purvi says : Meine toh car ki servicing karke li thi phir acchanak...!!!
Shreya: Haan Purvi...Actualy humhe is road se aana hi nahi chahiye tha...
Purvi is trying to find the defect when she understands that there was  a lekeage of Petrol and she informs to shreya...
Shreya: Purvi iska matlab shayad ye jo car hame follow kar rahi thi...wo usine...
And we see both Purvi and Shreya s eyes are wide open as they see the same car coming form front ...
we are also shown Purvi s cell ringing with caller Note as ACP SIR...
And her hand in fear presses by mistake recieve button...
The car stands at distance 
As the Lady comes forward from the car Purvi and Shreya recognises the lady to be Uma friend  of Shalini (Shalini who is no more)
Uma : wah wah Officer Purvi... aaj sab taraf aapka bohot naam hai...
Purvi: Tumhe iss se matlab???
Uma: Matlab?? Haan Purvi haan... mujhe toh tumhare zindagi ke har ek lamhe se matlab hai...
Shreya: dekho tum purvi se aise baat nahi kar sakti...
Uma: arrey bechari shreya ...tumhe toh malum nahi hoga... is Purvi ne kya kuch nahi kia hai...apne friend ko bhi isne phansi tak pohocha diya...
Purvi:Haan  toh iska badla lene aayi ho?? meine toh aapni duty nibhayi hai...
Uma: duty?? kaisi duty?? dosti aur duty mein bohot farak hota hai Purvi...Tum kabhi ek acchi dost nahi ban sakti...toh meri kya banogi...
And we see some gundas come from behind  jungle and attack Purvi and Shreya...and Purvi cell fall down...
Both of them are fighting with four gundas just then 
Uma: Chalo rukho aab Purvi ki Ulti ginti karne ka waqt aa hi gaya hai inko utha lo...
Purvi and Shreya gives kick to the Gundas trying to hold them...
Uma: Ye Purvi jada hoshiyaari mat kar warna yahi goli chala dungi...

SCENE SHIFTS:

Its almost midnighht when we are shown Purvi opens her eyes ...She feels very uneasy as her hands are tied back and legs too are tied ...
Purvi tries to wake up Shreya and shreya too wakes up...
Shreya (In low voice) : Purvi... Aab kya karenge ya log toh tumhe aur mujhe bhi maar dalenge...
Purvi: Shreya ...Hum kuch na kuck karte hai...Waise bhi Purvi CID team Bhi hum bachane jarur aayegi...
Shreya: Haan Purvi...Woh sab toh subah kuch karenge...Us time tak hum yaha se bhagna hoga...apr kaise...??
( and she looks at ropes tied to her legs and hands)
Purvi asks Shreya to take out slowly small Multi function Knife which is there at her back side pocket ...
Shreya without making noise frees Purvi s hand s and Purvi frees ropes tied to her leg and frees shreya too
Just then They here the sound of Footsteps coming closer ...
Two people come in dark room lit just by moonlight coming from window...
They put torch light on both ladies faces... They find that they are still unconscious...
1 person says to another : chalo lets have dinner ...ye dono madam logo ki toh abbhi subah nahi hui...
As they move out Purvi and shreya gets up...and goes near the only window which is in the room...
The windows have wooden Furniture which is very old and can be broken very easily...
the two girls apply pressure and in 2-3 attepmts they are succesful to break open the windows without any sound
(Its just ground floor so both ladies think to jump out)
Purvi: Shreya ...Bhar toh khidki ke neeche kuch dikh nahi raha...
Shreya: Kuch nahi hoga Purvi... Chalo kud jate hai/...
Purvi: Nahi shreya pehle hi tum mere wajah se phans chuki ho...Mein pehle jump karti hu..badmein tum...
Shreya is not ready to convince but finaly she agree...
and finaly Purvi jumps... and Purvi gives a liitle Painful sound but she controls it...
When Shreya asks her she asks shreya to jump on Purvi by taking off her shoes...
Shreya does the same and as soon as shreya jumps Purvi throws her down on Bushes which were present on side...
Shreya helps Purvi to get Up and she is very shocked to see Purvi s both hands bleeding very much...
Purvi tells shreya that she is alright and its because of glass peices which were present down when she jumped on ground and that her hands touched the ground with pressure...

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SCENE SHIFTS

we are shown CID team in car on the spot where they find Purvi's car...they reach there by tracing Purvi's no 
which was last shown near that area...
ACP: Daya, ye Purvi ki car aachanak aise bich raste mein band kaise ho gayi?? Usne toh saath hi aate waqt Petrol dala tha na.?
DAYA( While checking the car ):Sir Purvi ke car ka petrol leak ho raha tha...!!
FREDDY: Par Sir Purvi toh apni car regular servicing karati hai...!!!
ABHIJEET: Freddy!! Shayad jab Purvi,Shreya ko Drop karne ruki toh Purvi aur Shreya shayad Shreya ke ghar gaye hongwe or jaise ACP sir ka call on tha toh Purvi aur Shreya car mein the...aur acchanak sir ne horn ka bhi aawaz suna...
ACP:Aur toh aur shayad ye car in dono ko pareshan kar rahi hongi kyunki mujse baat karte waqt Purvi kafi ghabrayi hui thi... Aur meine toh tum logo ko raste mein hi bataya unka conversation...us Uma ke saath...
FREDDY: Par ab unko dhundenge kaise Sir...????
ACP: Haan Freddy...!!

SCENE SHIFTS 

Purvi and Shreya are running from backside jungle area by holding each others...After running for a distance little away 
from Gunda hadda both girls take sit on big bushy area so as to hide themselves and Shreya tries to take out glass pieces Stuck on Purvi s hand and to put her hankerechief on Purvi s hand so as to stop bleeding...!!!

SCENE SHIFTS

Here all the team is shown searching for evidence...!!
Just then Freddy finds Purvi cell in side Jngle area..(freddy realises that when Purvi and shreya were taken by gunda Purvi cell fell down...)

Freddy shows the cell to ACP sir,Daya ,Abhijeet...Acp could not find any message or any details suspicious so that it can help them
reach near the place where Purvi and Shreya are kept...

Purvi and Shreya are shown are shown running through the jungle not understanding in which direction to go...Both of them are very much tired and they try to sit
down when they could feel that they are on Gun point...

They are again taken to Gunda hadda...
Two gundas are coming with gun pointed on both girls heads...

Purvi signals Shreya and both suddenly act as if fall down and when gundas reach near they throw mud in their eyes and start running...


But to their bad luck UMA is standing infront of them with gun ...
again both of them are now tied in a big hall where gunda are standing 4 on one side staircase and 4 on other stairs...Inbetween they have tied Purvi shreya...
Purvi and shreya are trying to open their ropes...
Uma: mujhe hoshiyaari mat dikhana... agar phir se hilne ki bhi koshish ki toh directly uda dungi...
Purvi(in polite language) : Dekho UMA.. aise karne se tum kanoon se bach nahi sakti ...iss se accha hoga ki tum hamme chod do...waise bhi CID TEAM hame dhund rahi hogi...
Uma: Haan Purvi devi ji.. Tume mujhe ye sab batane ki jarurat nahi hai..aur tumhe marne ke baad mujhe phansi bhi ho jaye na to mein khushi khushi apne Friend ko jake bol dungi ki meine uska badla le liya...
Aur jaha tak tumhare Pradyuman ki baat hai woh toh kal bhi yaha pohoche toh aacha hai...Hahaha

(And just then her cell rings and uma picks the call)

Uma orders her Gundas to free Purvi and Shreya
Purvi: Arrey kya hua... (In teasing tone with little painful voice) : Accha accha itna tum mein samaj hai ki mukabla samne se karte hai...aise kidnap karke nahi...
Uma keeps gun on Purvi s head and asks her to do exactly what she tells...

Shreya: Dekho uma...tum ye galat kar rahi ho...Aur tumhe bhi pata hai ki shalini ka ek bade gunah mein haath tha... Tumhe waise bhi CID officers pe hamla karne ke saza milegihi...

Purvi:Waise kaha leke ja rahi ho hame??

Uma(plays recording on her Cell) it says 
Jhalak dikhlaja ...Ek baar kabje mein aaja...
Tera rah dekh raha hu.. Mein jungle ka raja...

Uma asks Purvi and Shreya to come with her...

SCENE SHIFTS

Its almaost 7 am...
The bright sunlight falling from the canopy of tree on Purvi s face...
Purvi finds her hands tied back and legs too tied...And she s in a room of bricks with no roof...
As soon as she wakes up she calls the name of shreya...And she finds shreya too already looking at Purvi...
(And just then they hear sound of someone coming in the room and they go back to their normal position)

Uma with a man (BOSS) comes forward ...The man says :Humne suna tha CID officers hai bade bahadur...
                                                               par ye kya ye nikhle bade kamjor...

Uma tries to wake up Purvi and Shreya...They open their eyes to see tall man standing side by them and Purvi utters word Nagraj...
Nagraj: Wah wah ... Kya hawa ka jhoka aaya ...aapki yaadash ko hum maan gaya...
Purvi dont utter a single word...Just looks at him
Uma: Arrey sheru..Ye dar gayi hogi bechari tumhe dekhke...
Nagraj(Sheru): 
Suraj ki tej kirane sab taraf chayi hai...
                  oh ho.. 
Is sherani ke aankhon ka tej kaha gum gaya hai...
Purvi and Shreya both look at him in very tired look...
Nagraj:Upar pahad hai neeche hai khai...
        kya kahoon aise aap dono ko kamjor padta dekh meine kitni khushi paayi...(and laughs) To see purvi not even able to move as her hands are bleeding and legs also
little littel injured...and Shreya too in her same position...
And just then they hear gun firing sounds...
and they both run out... keeping two gundas outside their room...
Outside the room we see small small brick rooms on all sides and CID and nagraj gang are having fight...

Here we see Purvi and Shreya trying to free themselves...
Purvi asks shreya to stay in her normal position and Purvi with her teeths Try to free the rope tied to Shreya hands..
and she after 2-3 attempts frees it and shreya unties ropes tied to her legs ...
now we see Shreya frees Purvi...
And just then the two gundas standing outside hears the noise and comes in room and they find room empty...
And just then we see Purvi and Shreya who are standing near door hits gunda neck And both gunda fall dead...

Here outside we see all the team catches nagraj and uma after defeating rest all gundas...
and ACP : Kaha rakha hai hamare Officer PURVI Aur SHREYA KO...?? 
Nagraj(in smilling tone): HAHAHAH...aap ke officers...un dono ne ek dusre ko...hahaha..Udha diya...(and takes out his gun from his shoes)
Nagraj: Upar dekho nila aasman..Upar dekho nila aasman...
(And just then his face shows feary look as he could feel gun pointed on his neck its non other than Purvi and Shreya with guns from gundas)
PURVI: kya bol rahe ho nagraj ...?? kaun dikh raha hai aasman mein?? aapne liye jagah hai bhi ya nahi dekh rahe ho??
SHREYA: Tum jaise logo ko toh kahi bhi jagah bhalehi ho ya na ho... jail mein to aaram se fit ho jaoge...
Uma: Par aap sab log yaha tak pohoche kaise??

FLASHBACK:
BEAURU AT 2:30 am
All the team is searching for records of shalini and they come to know shalini has a brother named Nagraj
Here Daya abhijeet inquires about all details... of Nagraj..They understand that  Nagraj was cota mota drug dealer ...
Here they all search for details of Uma ...Uma whom ACP had heard talking to Purvi when Purvi' s cell was ON...
After all the inquiry Report which they recieve by 4 am..They understand that day before nagraj has transfered funds amounting to rs 5 lakhs to Umas a/c (Krishna nagar)

Now their doubt is clear that Uma is doing all this for nagraj..


SCENE SHIFTS

5AM
We see freddy Acp Daya abhijeet Sachin reach only house of nagraj at krishna nagar...
They could see blood down the window of one room...They Search for room and they could see a small Multi function knife of Purvi lying there...


They move down and down very slowly ..Daya And Abhijeet come across a big room which has stairs from both sides and inbetween they see ropes lying down ...
Daya ABhijeet call ACP and all team move there...To find Purvi had written with blood words "Nagraj-Forest"
ACP says Shayad Purvi ne humhe ye uska location batane ke liye likha ho...Kya yaha aas pass forest hai??
Abhijeet says that There is only one forest area which is at around 2 hours distance...

Flashback ends...

Purvi and shreya are still holding gun on nagraj s head.. and they throw off nagrajs gun and Daya slaps nagraj...
ACP: Nagraj tumne do do CID officers ko kidnap kiya... iski toh tumhe saja hogi...


SCENE SHIFTS

Its beauru at around 11 am..
All the team is having coffee...
DAYA: Abhijeet ...par manna padega Purvi Shreya ne bohot bahaduri dikhayi hai...
PURVI: Par waise sir.. aaj usko jo wo aapka jhapad pada toh...(Abhijeet signals Purvi to stop and shreya is all laughing)
DAYA could understand this and says: Haan haan ABHIJEET tum bolo...
ABHIJEET: arrey Daya...Aise jada kuch nahi..par aaj Nagraj ko jo jhapad diya woh dekhkar mujhe ek shayari...
DAYA(interupts): Accha abhijeet samja ...And signals him to keep quiet at the moment as all juniours are sitting side by...
But Abhijeet (Get up in all cheerful mood)
Maine maanga Tha Pappad...
Freddy says: wah wah...
Abhijeet: Meine manga tha pappad...
Purvi and Shreya: wah wah...
Abhijeet : arrey rukho toh ...continue karne do...
Purvi and shreya both giggle...
Abhijeet : meine manga that pappad...Par ye kya Daya ne diya jhapad...

Daya gets up and holds Abhijeet...
All freddy, Purvi, Shreya laugh...
Purvi: Par sir... Sach kahe toh hume aap logo se bohot kuch sikha hai...ACP Sir, Daya sir, Abhijeet sir... Freddy sir...Aap log sachmein..(and she keeps quiet)
Shreya gets up and pets Purvi who is in tears...
Shreya :actualy woh sir... Purvi ko shayad aapne maa baap ki yaad aayi...
Just then we hear a sound...
ACP: Arrey PURVI... Tum hum sab ke hote hue aise udaas kaise ho sakti ho..?? ACP comes near Purvi (all the team looks at ACP as they understand ACP sir have heard all their conversation) Dekho Purvi beta..Tumhe toh bhagwan ne itna accha pariwar diya hai...(and looks at team who are standing very sad) Tumhi toh kehti hohai na??
Aur upar se Shreya jaisi itni acchi behen jaisi dost...
just when ACP sir says this words Shreya hugs Purvi...
Purvi gives all smile...
ACP still continue...: Aaj phir se tum logo ne bohot bahaduri ka kaam kiya hai... humesha yaad rakhna...
jeevan mein kitni bhi mushkile ho ..haar nahi maan leni chahiye ..kyunki aagar ek rasta band ho jaye toh shayad bhagwan chahte hai ki hum khud aapne manjil ka rasta banaye...

                          ~THE END~


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