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A sketch & Short Story on Event of Ansha Didi's Birthday!!(Pg:105) (Page 68)

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 9:15am | IP Logged
Thank you so much mano di Smileand neha di...Smile

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 11:40am | IP Logged
Next part is also too good Padmpriya.SmileStar
welldone...ClapStar
Like a true friendship story...Big smile
Purvi and shreya are just like duo...Wink
scenes at the bureau were very sweet...Big smile
loved it...SmileClap
Keep writing more...Thumbs Up

Edited by misha.as - 24 April 2013 at 12:39pm
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PADMA, I read Both the Parts of Ur Story... Ur Story was Good but bit Rushy as U did not cover the Chemical part, U must add some lines abt SHERYA who told this to PURVI that She was little Uncomfortable as Some Gundas behind Her and Her Mother for that Chemical...ConfusedConfused
Why the Gundas did not trying to attempt their Kidnapp stuff on SHERYA when She was on Her way to DELHI to MUMBAI...WinkWink
I really like that U included that PURVI and SHERYA are Best Friends earlier not after joining CID...Clap
so many Gundas and why the Cops did not use Guns yaar especially Girls, arry ek weapon hay aap kay pass tou Fighting...LOLLOL
Abt that KARATE CHOPS, baccha except VIVEK kisi ko bhi is tarah kay Trained nahi bataya gaya haySmile... if U will take any establish character, plz use some adde stuff like she joined Her classes few days back and use some Chops which She learnt in Her Training etc...
Otherwise, I like the Story... its really Nice to Read some stuff based on Female Cops...Clap
Thank You so much baccha...Hug

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 5:21am | IP Logged
Thank you Dada  for ur comment and i ll try to rectify my mistakes next time...
and thanxx you loved my story

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 6:38am | IP Logged
very nice story padmaClap just loved itSmile

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 9:14am | IP Logged
Thank u padma_ss...!!!!!
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Posted: 06 May 2013 at 3:23am | IP Logged
~New Promo Added~

* Its night time when Purvi is driving car and Shreya is with her      it's a forest area... And a car with full light and speed comes     from  front...
* ACP is shown with phone and in very tensed look...
* Some gundas force Purvi and Shreya in the van...
* A lady holds gun on Purvi and shreya...( and both Purvi and            Shreya both stands with wide eyes open )...

Kya CID officer Purvi aurr Shreya nikal aayengi is mahajal se...????
Ya phir kya CID team bacha payegi apne officers ko..???

{ Coming Soon }


Edited by Padmpriya - 06 May 2013 at 3:28am

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Hmmm... interesting...!!!

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