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A sketch & Short Story on Event of Ansha Didi's Birthday!!(Pg:105) (Page 3)

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by gadhadada

very very very TOUCHIN... and buddy i m really feel xtra happy that U write one of UR CREATIVE try after considering ONE of my story...
thanx alot... kay tum nay usay itna BETTER samjha...

ah dada dat was ur story it was nice!
Waiting for ur next! N i m going to post one short poem soon n dats funny!

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 1:57am | IP Logged
A funny poem(barrish)
Suno IF walon meri ye kahani, mein hun barrish ka pani.

Gumad gumad kar meg baraste, jor jor se ACP barste.

Freddie jor se wife ka pravachan tarate! Tasha gungaroo se moraniya se nache!

Daya abhi ke dosti ko ye sab char chand lagate! Salunke bhi kitne acche mud mein aa jate!!

IF pe yaha barrish ki maja liye, sab case ki hai nav banate! CID ke pyaare movements ko man me samate! General discussion mein hai sab gate! Barish ka ye mausam aya, sab aur kushiyan chhaya!!!!

Edited by Padmpriya - 13 June 2011 at 1:59am

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 3:57am | IP Logged
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What a amazing poem di...i was imagining a rain in front of my eyes...and Freddie jor se wife ka pravachan tarate! Tasha gungaroo se moraniya se nache! ROFLthis was amazing...and i loved this line most


IF pe yaha barrish ki maja liye, sab case ki hai nav banate! CID ke pyaare movements ko man me samate! General discussion mein hai sab gate! Barish ka ye mausam aya, sab aur kushiyan chhaya!!!!  and i loved this line most



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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 4:05am | IP Logged
Hv added two poems dear wo yaade n barish give ur reviews on first one too. N waiting for more comments!
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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 5:22am | IP Logged
Good poem again di, Freddy's line was too funny.

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 8:15am | IP Logged
wow di...the yaade one was very heart-touching...main to senti ho gayiEmbarrassed

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 8:33am | IP Logged
Thanks for all of ur comments! Thank u for appreciating my poems! Will try to post more!
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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 10:18am | IP Logged
@ padma:
  fantastic job yar, just a suggestion, dont use d light blue color as u did in d 1st post, it gets difficult to read den .

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