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A sketch & Short Story on Event of Ansha Didi's Birthday!!(Pg:105) (Page 2)

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 4:36am | IP Logged
CID TEAM
Ek do teen chaar
ek do teen chaar
Hamari CID TEAM aa rahi hai raho sab hoshiyaar!
paach cheh saath aath
paach cheh saath aat
Khooni ke raste pe ho rahi hai kato ki bauchar.
nav das gyarah bara
nav das gyarah bara
Daya ke chate se khooni ke chehare pe baje bara
tera chauda pandara sola
tera chauda pandara sola.
Daya abhijeet ne khooni se saach ugalwaya.
satara atara unees bis
satra atara unees bisFreddie bhi hai kamal ki cheez.
ekees bahis teyis chaubis pachis
ekis bahis tehis chaubis
Bas aise hi chalta rahe hamara CID yahi hai kwahish!

Edited by Padmpriya - 12 June 2011 at 6:46am

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 6:09am | IP Logged
hey PADNPRIYA
one, two, three, four
ye DIL mange MORE MORE nd MOREClap

dear b/w poem given  two lines SHUffle ho gyi hai..
try to arrange in proper way...
these fact on the beauty of poem style...

Daya abhijeet ne khooni ka muh hai khola.
Freddie bhi hai kamal ki cheez.

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 8:02am | IP Logged
wow...amazing oneClapClapClapClapClap
loved it...waiting for the next one...do make it soon...ek do teen chaar cid ki jai-jaikar...CID CID CID...

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 8:10am | IP Logged
@Padmapriya - Very good poem di, we want more.ClapClap

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 8:12am | IP Logged
hey padmpriya:
 
Both of ur poems r really very nice... specially i liked... d portion u wrote 4 DAYA sir...

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 8:31pm | IP Logged
This poem is written by considering a situation depicted in one of stories of members wer by daya loses memory n after a day or two regains it. So this is d feelings of abhijeet to daya during those days.
WO YAADE - BY ABHIJEET TO DAYA
Kaise kate wo din kaisi kati wo rate bar bar yaad ati thi tumari miti bate.
Kaise batau daya, tum mere liye kitne priy ho! Tumare liye to meri jaan bhi hazir hai!
Taras raha tha mein tumare muh se ek shabdh sunne-ABHIJEET! Kah nahi sakta tumare shopping le jao BOSS, PAKODE KHILAO in baton ko kitna miss karta tha.
pyaare dost yaad rakhna meri bate,
rah nahi sakta mein bin tumare!
[NOCOPY]

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 9:30pm | IP Logged
Wow di, amazing poem. It displays Daya-Abhi's friendship, a very beautiful and emotional poem.

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 11:38pm | IP Logged
 very very very TOUCHIN... and buddy i m really feel xtra happy that U write one of UR CREATIVE try after considering ONE of my story...
thanx alot... kay tum nay usay itna BETTER samjha...

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