A sketch & Short Story on Event of Ansha Didi's Birthday!!(Pg:105) - Page 49

Srishti

@Srishti.

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Posted: 11 years ago

mujhe dar lag raha hai abhi, itna tough competition in stories on poorvi di baap re😃
padma di i am speechles the story was soo cutee, love poorvi's bravery and the way she fought with those badmaash gundaas, love her cleverness when she sends mms to duo
poorvi di was very cute, love puru n shreyu ka friendship😳
u really write good stories ya
love it👏
waiting for more from you😉

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priya

@sonpaapdi

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Posted: 11 years ago

@ padma di : lovly story di...!!!👏

lovd the frndship between purvi di n shreya...!!!😉

waiting for more stories...😊

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Padmpriya

@Padmpriya

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Posted: 11 years ago

thank you so much priya, aditi, shreya di, puru...!!!!😃

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mano86

@mano86

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Posted: 11 years ago

@Padma

story
⭐️

⭐️specially Purvi-Shreya Bond⭐️

a lot
😊

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..optimist..

@..optimist..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Finally read it...😊

Very nice dear...!!👏

Loved the Poorvi-Shreya friendship...😃

Keep writing...👍🏼

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Padmpriya

@Padmpriya

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you so much mano di 😊and neha di...😊

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misha.as

@misha.as

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Posted: 11 years ago

Next part is also too good Padmpriya.😊⭐️
welldone...👏⭐️
Like a true friendship story...😃
Purvi and shreya are just like duo...😉
scenes at the bureau were very sweet...😃
loved it...😊👏
Keep writing more...👍🏼Edited by misha.as - 11 years ago

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

PADMA, I read Both the Parts of Ur Story... Ur Story was Good but bit Rushy as U did not cover the Chemical part, U must add some lines abt SHERYA who told this to PURVI that She was little Uncomfortable as Some Gundas behind Her and Her Mother for that Chemical...😕😕

Why the Gundas did not trying to attempt their Kidnapp stuff on SHERYA when She was on Her way to DELHI to MUMBAI...😉😉

I really like that U included that PURVI and SHERYA are Best Friends earlier not after joining CID...👏

so many Gundas and why the Cops did not use Guns yaar especially Girls, arry ek weapon hay aap kay pass tou Fighting...😆😆

Abt that KARATE CHOPS, baccha except VIVEK kisi ko bhi is tarah kay Trained nahi bataya gaya hay😊... if U will take any establish character, plz use some adde stuff like she joined Her classes few days back and use some Chops which She learnt in Her Training etc...

Otherwise, I like the Story... its really Nice to Read some stuff based on Female Cops...👏

Thank You so much baccha...🤗

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Padmpriya

@Padmpriya

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you Dada for ur comment and i ll try to rectify my mistakes next time...

and thanxx you loved my story