PADMA, I read Both the Parts of Ur Story... Ur Story was Good but bit Rushy as U did not cover the Chemical part, U must add some lines abt SHERYA who told this to PURVI that She was little Uncomfortable as Some Gundas behind Her and Her Mother for that Chemical...😕😕
Why the Gundas did not trying to attempt their Kidnapp stuff on SHERYA when She was on Her way to DELHI to MUMBAI...😉😉
I really like that U included that PURVI and SHERYA are Best Friends earlier not after joining CID...👏
so many Gundas and why the Cops did not use Guns yaar especially Girls, arry ek weapon hay aap kay pass tou Fighting...😆😆
Abt that KARATE CHOPS, baccha except VIVEK kisi ko bhi is tarah kay Trained nahi bataya gaya hay😊... if U will take any establish character, plz use some adde stuff like she joined Her classes few days back and use some Chops which She learnt in Her Training etc...
Otherwise, I like the Story... its really Nice to Read some stuff based on Female Cops...👏
Thank You so much baccha...🤗
