A sketch & Short Story on Event of Ansha Didi's Birthday!!(Pg:105) - Page 20

Originally posted by: Padmpriya

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very very NICE PADMA betajee...
but i have sum CONTRADICTION in UR POEM...
basically LORD/GOD is sum other...
and FRND is sum other...
in FIRST TWO STANZA U had tried to use FRND in that place
and at LAST one U compatable it with GOD...
no Almighty LORD send sum PEOPLE in UR LIFE... which touched UR HEART STRINGS so called UR FRNDS...  but LORD is always there either U feel SAD, LONELY, HAPPY, CRY... every time... HE tried to make U more STRONG so U could struggle against the upcoming in UR future... HE is also UR FRND... a BEST, CLOSE FRND... so if anytime U miss that UR FRND did not give U much time... jus think UR BEST FRND is always there with U at UR every HARD n HAPPY moments...

Edited by gadhadada - 12 years ago

hey PADMA DEAR...

@dada- ya dada u said is right. but wat i feel is god cannot cum everywer so he sends sum sweet ppl in our life who enrich us.
nwdays god dosnt cum on our land so he sends sumone to help us.
n @ da- thanx i likd ur cake n al
tc.
regards

wow padma..
Nice poem..
And whole poem is realistic.
Great work..
Keep it up..

thank u very much chints for ur cment.
tc

Hey it was really nice poem Priya 😊, But if you don't mind i want you to change a line so that the line gets a rhym. I hope u will like the changed one dear 😛. 

Instead of that

 Please come up with more Padmapriya 😃 . I loved it.❤️

Edited by deepz28888 - 12 years ago

thanx deepa di
i l surely make more.
n u too cum up wid more.
n wil try to make change as u askd.
u can cal me pp as al cal
n my name is padma.

great poem padma di👏
amazing work👏
u have touched a very good and necessary and true point of life
loved the way u expressed it
fabulous di
its very true
god is always there for us
i remembered something which i would like to share
there was a message that i received on cell that is
one man was standing happily and suddenly a small piece of stone came and hit him
when he turned back in anger he saw god standing there like a shield to him and protecting him from crores of much bigger stones and god said sorry my child that stone mistakenly passed me

realy true my dear.
i luvd dat msg
one more i wud share dat i recievd
one man was crossing a bridge n suddenly d bridge startd shaking he got scared n started praying god he saw god standing on other end
he tried to cal god on his side but he dint came
den by shaking n scaring he crossed d road n to his surprise he saw dat god was holding wid his hands d othr end of bridge.
god s always der to help.

thanx jyoti dear
n i too luvd ur sigg of our dear tasha